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By : onelife2251
  • From kookookitty on March 07, 2007
    it must really burn him up to have to answer to other 'weaker' creatures!

    and then i was called away and i totally forgot what i was going to say =/...it was going to be good too.

    well, i was going to compliment you on this chapter before i hit a great big humungus blank wall(i'm blaming years of drug use i my teens and menopause)... i am honestly sorry! please pretend this is a really good review and smile.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on March 01, 2007
    i believe tiaj was channeling inuyasha

    he was pretty calm... something about the scene tickled me, for the life of me i don't know what it was. maybe it was fluffy trying to hold back screaming female fury

    >=D
    ginny


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  • From kookookitty on February 26, 2007
    and the plot thickens... DUN DUN DUN.

    i guess tiaj and fluffy aren't going to allow the kikyo to get anywhere near yasha if they can help it... good, fluffy is being the protective older bro, 'bout time! (even if it is indirectly)

    i sent you an e-mail with some suggestions.

    ja!
    ginny
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  • From Silent Pluto on February 26, 2007
    wow very interesting story!
    I like! ^_~
    You gotta write some more! And if I was Taijina
    I wouldn't take shessy's crap. He's so frigging old
    and he can't even say something as simple as
    "I'm sorry." *snort* and he calls inuyasha a immature pup.
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  • From kookookitty on February 20, 2007
    watch your malapropisms and homophones... so easy to miss them, spell check doesn't pick them up because even though they're spelled correctly, they aren't the words you want.

    your characters are well rounded, i like the extra dimension you have even given to sesshomaru, even the canon fluffy has more going on for himself than the typically depicted ice cube. goodness, he has practically adopted a rambunctious little girl that he voluntarily tolerates on a regular basis!!

    you at least updated, and it didn't take that long either. hope everything is turning out okay for you.

    thanks
    ginny

    if you need help editing, i can beta (i don't do lemons though)
    general address on profile page, i will give you the other address if you contact me.
    gin
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  • From kookookitty on February 09, 2007
    sorry i haven't written this sooner but life certainly happens sometimes.

    you have invented two strong characters and really pulled it off, they're interesting and provide humor and drama, BRAVO!

    a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on January 30, 2007
    ahh yes! that does indeed make it easier to read and it also makes it so much prettier! =P

    points that this one has been pondering... does fluffy have to take in yash's pack when he makes yash pack? if yash is responsible for his pack one would assume that they would automatically be absorbed into fluffy's pack (they are stronger than the average humans and they are loyal and proven themselves to be good fighters).... does that include kagome, even 500 years in the future; as yash's intended? ~ sessha doesn't expect the answers right away and will humbly and patiently wait to read the rest of your captivating story. =D

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on January 28, 2007
    fluffy is really a cold hearted dog! hey, where's rin?

    i like the way that yash and fluffy are having a dialog, i guess it's because he's pack now... i like this story, creating another strong character gives things another dimention, and she's NOT the "i went back in time and met sesshomaru and we fell in lurv!" BLEH!

    suggestion: put an extra space between paragraphs so it's easier to read. a line or something else between scene changes ~~~~~~~~~~~~

    i think it's great story and so are you for updating so quickly!

    a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From biteswhenprovoked on January 22, 2007
    Ok i like the plot and the story is good and well written. and i give kudos to any auther who can put their story online for everyone to read. it seems to me though that the original character that you made up is becomeing a bigger part then the characters from the show. like for example besides the two or three paragraphs where sesshomaru is fighting inuyasha your original character is in every part of the story and is a big part of everything that happens. but im not going to lie im not a big fan of original characters there are only a few stories where i like them. i dont mean to sound like im bitching you out cause im not like i said i give kudos to anyone who can put their story on here, but that is just my opion. but my intrest is struck and i think i will look out for this fic in the future to see what will happen.
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  • From kookookitty on January 22, 2007
    * dances a little 'Dark Witch of E.K.' dance *

    it's still a cool story and you still don't have enough recognition, imo. much appreciation for the 'other side of the well' chapter, i didn't expect that!

    happy update reward/bribe (to continue)

    ::chocolate coma::
    12 oz silken tofu
    12 oz melted chocolate chips
    whipped to a fluffy froth
    refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

    thank you,
    ginny

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  • From yujigirl on January 22, 2007
    I realy like your story! I can't wait for the next Chapter.
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  • From kookookitty on January 10, 2007
    hahaha... i said maryjanes instead of marysues... i'm such a fool!

    XD
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  • From kookookitty on January 10, 2007
    curious as to why you haven't recieved any recognition for this fic, it's really good! i don't normally go for many non-canon characters as they usually seem a bit like maryjanes to me... but you've given these ones personality and i kinda identify with ash the 'crazy human' character. >=P

    well written, what's going on with kagome on the other side of the well?

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From on January 01, 2007
    I HATE mary sues but I'll give you a run down on my opinion overlooking that fact. Hey, some people must like em and I guess your one of em. Anyway I like your style of writting. It grabs a person's attention and keeps them reading whether they like it or not. =3 I know because I was hooked from the start and I hate original characters.... let's see.. I like the plot as well, it's not that original, but it's more original than having Inuyasha and Kagome trapped in her world and there they fall in love and only afterwords get to go back. Who knows, maybe your story will change my opinion of mary sues. Keep up the beautiful work!
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