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Reviews for The Other Side of Kazaana

By : szaugg
  • From SlateGrey on January 16, 2007
    You really have a knack for combining suspense, romance, and comedy seamlessly. I don't know how you do it but I love reading it more than I can tell you. After reading this chapter I'm more glad then ever that you don't like unhappy endings since otherwise I'd be biting my nails off. Great job!
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  • From nomdeplume on January 16, 2007
    First of all, I've been reading this story since you posted chapter three, and I am so sorry having waited so long to review. I have really enjoyed the inventiveness that this story has. I absolutely love it and check every day for your updates. I enjoy the malevolence of ronin Miroku, and find the evil nature of the man compared to his monk counterpart almost frightening. Also, I love the persona you've given InuYasha's youkai, and how you explain the fact that it doesn't talk in such a way in the series. So many just have the youkai communicate without a real explanation. (It also makes for an additional character and fun antagonizer to InuYasha.) Keep updating. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From AimeeC on January 16, 2007
    You just blow me away with how fast you write and how wonderful the chapters always are! *loves everything you do* The tanuki creeped me the heck out, the Ronin needs mental help, and Miroku needs some kind of tracking device implanted into him with the amount of trouble he gets into. I hope Inuyasha can make it all better soon, or at least hand over the Ronin's head on a platter. ^_^
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  • From Caitriona on January 16, 2007
    Excellent story so far. I like the differences in Monk!Miroku and Ronin!Miroku. I do hope that Inu comes and saves him soon.....

    Caitriona
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  • From ANON - Eerie on January 16, 2007
    I don't think I want to know what the Ronin did to make Miroku scream like that, but it can't be good. Thank god that he'll have Inuyasha to make it better! He will, right? Right? ;)

    Oh, and I loved Hachi- he made me feel very, very fond of the Ronin for a moment there, which I never thought would happen. He definitely gets the creepy crown for this part, though I think Naruku still gets the general win. :D


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  • From AmberEyez on January 16, 2007
    This is getting more amazing with each chapter! Dark, Darker, Darkest....is there a dawn for Miroku?
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  • From SesshomarusSecret on January 16, 2007
    I don't like the darkness but I love the story. Fantastic storytelling. The Ronin has got to get his ending and soon. A nasty ending too.
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  • From TenshiYoukai on January 16, 2007
    Ok. So. I am glad that you didn't let Ronin keep Miroku. I really want to rant at you that he got what he did out of Miroku, but I trust that you will very soon kill off the Ronin. Maybe by being ripped to shreds by a nice mad pack of wolves?! Yes?! Well, It is just a thought.

    So the info on the ronin's past is going to play a part in his demise? I hope so. Poor Hachi. At least now he is away from the ronin.
    I hope that we get back to this story being happy. Even thought Inuyash is going to have to deal with what happened to Miroku.

    Now, on to a reunion!!! update soon please!

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  • From LeeSt on January 16, 2007
    So this was supposed to be a _fluffy_ story? Yikes. I'm a little afraid of what might happen if you ever sat down and decided to write something _dark_. What you did to Hachi here is going to stay with me for a good long time and the insight into the Ronin's past had me on the edge of my seat. He's _scary_ when he's angry. I pictured Miroku being tied up and helpless and... yikes. Still hot in a very disturbing way, though, which makes me somewhat concerned about my own mental health. ^_^

    (In other news, I may just set your account to be my homepage to save time. I don't think I've _closed_ this page since I first read your story. ;)
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  • From LeeSt on January 16, 2007
    Argh. Now I have an author panel and I feel like I should be _writing_ something, but there was no way I was going to let you think that I'd forgotten about you or this story. :D

    Another fantastic chapter - I can't decide if it's less of a cliffhanger than the last one because we now _know_ what Ronin Miroku is up to or if it's actually scarier because we've seen more of his personality and know to be very, very afraid. Yikes. Lucky Miroku has all that creamy soft skin to keep him safe...ish. ;-)
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  • From AimeeC on January 15, 2007
    Eeee! Totally worth it to get an account to review this chapter! *loves* Miroku is oddly appealing while he's being tortured, Inuyasha is smarter than the average bear - er, wolf - and Ronin Miroku, while still unsettling as all get out, has a strange kind of sadistic charm about him. *clings to new part and pets poor Miroku* Brilliant! ^_^
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  • From SlateGrey on January 15, 2007
    Wow. Another great chapter! I kept wincing every time the Ronin did anything, and wishing that Inuyasha would get there faster. Very creepy and sexy scene.

    Just to let you know, the site isn't letting people review now if they don't have an account. Most people don't have an account, so you might not hear from your regular readers. You might want to put up an e-mail address or something like that - it'd be a shame if this great story didn't get the reviews that it deserves.
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  • From ANON - oniku on January 13, 2007
    Hey,

    Awesome chapter. Can't believe this is only your second yaoi you're so good at it. I hope Inuyasha notices that Miroku is gone quickly!!
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  • From ANON - SesshomarusSecret on January 12, 2007
    I hate cliffhangers! I do love this story though. Damn Mutt better save the day.
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  • From ANON - DahliaIceQueen on January 12, 2007
    Now this is interesting, I love it. Can't wait to see how it plays out. Inspire, muses! Inspire this writer!
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