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Reviews for Rins wants!

By : Sexycat85

From Starryice on June 15, 2019
Please update soon!!

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From LadyRin on September 11, 2014
Write more soon please.
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From SesshysOneTrueMateBubblez on March 28, 2008
i like it but i hate it when people leave cliff hangers cause then i have to wait till the next chapter
hope you update soon and good luck in school
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From angelnomiko on January 20, 2007
wow that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From nchsmi on January 19, 2007
Rins wants? RINS WANTS?!? WE WANTS!! We want more! UPDATE SOON!~ B reading U!
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From Samela90 on January 17, 2007
I think your story was pretty okay but it would be 100% better with good grammar because during reading it I got the feeling I was reading something a middle schooler wrote.
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From ANON - Kate on January 10, 2007
Hmm I think that you have really really bad grammer.. Its YOU not u .. This isnt some IM box .. or letter you write to your friend. This is a serious board where some people take writing Seriously
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From ANON - addie on January 08, 2007
oooooooooooooooooooooh
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From ANON - diego on January 07, 2007
I can't.... How could you finish the chapter like that...it no fair...well one thing the beginning is really good so keep going and by the way i can wait for the next chapt!!!!
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From ANON - Sess's Lover on January 07, 2007
So far so good. I have a few harmless critiques so don't be offended. Work a little more on your grammer and the theme at which Rin is speaking in. Over all a great start. Keep writing.
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From ANON - Mmoirai on January 06, 2007
The blossoming young maiden Rin lusting after her mysterious Lord Sesshoumaru is one of my favorite story lines. Yeay!

You will want to find a Beta reader to go over your chapters and check them for grammer errors though. Working with a Beta will be a great way for you to advance your talents with writing in english. I think the main page of this site has a link for people looking for a Beta.
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From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
i think you could continue.. but you are in desperate need of spelling and grammar teachings.

stay in school kiddo. and get a goooood beta
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