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From hsosborne on June 17, 2008
very nice chapter, I about laughed my butt off at the situation.
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From maggiekebs on June 17, 2008
Loved reading this, hope there is more soon. Thanks for sharing.
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From ANON - Annabella on June 17, 2008
�You will stop feeling like this. Immediately,� Sesshoumaru finally said, not moving his hand.
Hahahaha! That is so like him. In the word's of Laverne (if you guys watch Scrubs) "Honey, if Jesus himself came down here you'd be trying to tell him where to park his car."
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From ANON - Licentia poetica on June 16, 2008
Yeah! Thanks for updating! I finally updated 'Facets', too, so I guess we're in the same boat when it comes to long waits between chapters. This is still the only yaoi story I've ever bothered to read (it's not my thing...I don't hate it, but...meh) and you're doing a great job with it. I love your characterization of Sesshoumaru as a "moody bastard"; good job with Inuyasha going into hysterical laughter...very believable transition for both males!
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From ANON - blackwidow on June 16, 2008
Please! pleasepleaseplease update your story! it such a wonderful read!
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From ANON - kunitsu on June 16, 2008
Wow this was just great. This is really funny and even with the almost rape of Inuyasha. I love how you wrote this out. It also made me smile when Sesshoumaru thought about Rin blackmaling Inuyasha with tears

Update soon
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From KIKI441 on June 16, 2008
HURRAY!!!!! it's chapter 31 and it was the best
chapter i have ever read. well atleast second
best. the first one was when sesshomaru beat
up himself. anyway, this chapter was
hilarious. i fell out of my seat when
sesshomaru walked out of that cesspool and
jaken grabbed on to his dick. i nearly died
laughing. it might have been a long wait
for this chapter but it was sure worth the
wait. i can't wait until the next chapter.
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From ANON - supergirlanna on June 16, 2008
yay for update! i love this story along with last pure human! and many others. Great update, I love the end and I greatly look forward to the next chapters!!!!
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From ANON - ayachan on June 16, 2008
Omg, I love this story and I'm glad that you updated :) The whole mud spectactle was HILARIOUS!!! Loved it. And I love how Rin was totally used as emotional blackmail, lol. But the ending totally made me tear up :( Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From wolfluv on June 16, 2008
THAT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!! IT WAS PERFECT!!!! Especially Inu's getting back at Sess! As well as the unintended gropping from the kappa!!!! THAT ONE ALONE HAD ME LAUGHING MY OWN BUTT OFF!!! YOU TRULY ARE OF A BRILLIANT MIND THANK YOU FOR SHARING THAT MIND WITH US!!!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
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From ANON - Snowfall on June 15, 2008
I�ll have you know that I haven�t reviewed over here in ages. You should feel special. ^_^

It is refreshing to see the characters go through the natural slow progression of feelings and emotions. Events probably would have sped them up, but you didn�t take advantage of it to the point that the progression seemed unbelievable. It has to be nearly impossible to make all of this as believable as you are doing. Cerulean Skies gave me a headache on that and I didn�t do a very good job either. It is plausible that Inuyasha would fight to avoid these new and confusing feelings. Sesshoumaru is strong and it is not unthinkable that he would be able to overcome his temper. At least for awhile anyway. It helps that he is extremely aware of Inuyasha�s reactions. I hadn�t thought about his nose telling him so much more about Inuyasha�s state of well-being as the feel of Inuyasha�s body. That makes it a lot easier for him to decipher Inuyasha�s feelings, and a lot easier for you to write it. I wonder how he will deal with these shocking and unfamiliar feelings that he is having. They must be terribly foreign to him and I�m sure that it will take him quite time to unravel the mystery.

I�m glad that Miroku and Kouga sympathize with Inuyasha. Kouga did not start out on good footing with me, but you have made him, in some way, honorable. I feel sorry for Kouga because he still doesn�t have someone who really loves him. I bet you wanted us to feel that way, didn�t you? I hate that poor Miroku feels bad. There really isn�t much they can do because it would embarrass Inuyasha if they openly tried to help him. It would be very nice of them to make a successful plan to help Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru become more accustomed to each other. That would definitely be a difficult to do. I have no idea what you plan to do with the girls. I�m sure that it would be difficult for them to understand or to know what to do. However, Kagome does have a strong desire to see Inuyasha happy. If I were them, I would probably be a bit confused as well. Geeze, you make me want to help him! Unbelievable! You�re really doing a great job! Perhaps Miroku and Kouga could enlighten the girls. I don�t think you plan to have the girls abandon Inuyasha. You sure have your work cut out for you.

The pond. OMG! I can�t believe that Sesshoumaru actually did it! He bridled his temper and did what was necessary. Yay for being mated! I had wondered if Inuyasha had covered the items with a bolder. Jakken was hilarious, especially after Sesshoumaru came out of the water. I�d have killed the toad! I could have died laughing were it not for the seriousness of the situation. You�re description of Sesshoumaru�s state coming out of the pond put wonderful images in my head. I�m so glad that Naraku wasn�t able to replicate a certain part of Sesshoumaru�s anatomy. That�ll make it a lot easier on Inuyasha. The progression of Inuyasha�s feelings while Sesshoumaru undressed and waded into the water was so very believable. And it gave us a nice view of Sesshoumaru�s ass. I could see it in my head. You�ve put a lot of thought into this chapter. A lot. I can�t imagine.

I loved hearing Inuyasha laugh. You read that right. You put the sound in my head. It was wonderful. You didn�t change his character and yet, you managed to have him laughing. I could see Sesshoumaru�s shock. It couldn�t have been any other way. When Inuyasha started to cry, my eyes got all watery and I got a lump in my throat. Sesshoumaru was so thoughtful, and you made it believable by having him feel Inuyasha�s body. The fact that he actually noticed that he had never seen Inuyasha laugh was realistic. He would have to have noticed. It was so sad when Inuyasha started to cry. I almost cried. Sesshoumaru did the right thing and I couldn�t imagine him not doing otherwise. You had it all set up for that point in time.

I guess the overall impression was excellence in believability and detail. The events were unexpected and a wonderful experience.

I hope this review made it worth all of your obvious hard work.

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From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on June 15, 2008
Intense chapter. The Jaken thing was funny and so humliating that I thought this would have been a comedic chapter, but when Inuyasha started crying I was absolutely thrown off. Very well done. I hope Inuyasha begins to realize that Sesshoumaru actually is starting to care about him!

Please update soon :)
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From ANON - Lina on June 15, 2008
I don't have laughed so hard in a long while! This chapter was so funny but at the same time kindda sweet. Sesshoumaru is changing and learning more about Inuyasha and it makes for an interesting dynamic. Wonderful work and I hope you get to update again soon. Thanks! ^_^
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From ANON - misydidi on June 15, 2008
what can i say...i fall in love with this story...when i saw that this story had been updated i readed it once again...i think that this is the fourth time i read it...
i couldn't stop laughting when sessh had to go in the mud, or at jacken's reaction...
you realy are very good at writing and you manage to expres the character's feelings very well...when i read some other fics i can't help myself but to observe that the felings are fake, but your stile of writing captured me...everything that u describe is so real...
please update soon this story...don't make me beg...
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From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2008
i am so glad that you updated this story. i've been reading the reposts on ff, and have come to love this story even more than i did when i first read it. you have such a talent for bringing your stories to life. this chapter saw more of the inuyasha we all know and love. i know the healing has to not be rushed to seem natural. i'm so glad that you are not rushing, just to get this done. i love all your stories, and i want to thank you for taking the time to write such wonderfully entertaining works for us to read.
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