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By : szaugg

From ANON - Lord Sesshomaru on July 08, 2007
WOW! I LOVE this fic! A lot of fics I've read make Sess a little too cruel but this is just right. I love the whole cold on the outside but moody on the inside thing. And the spanking thing was completely hilarious, especially when it was Miroku and Inuyasha! I thought I was gonna die laughing! Heh, wasn't laughing after Sess punished Inu and then did something else...lol. :-D.

I like when Sess is holding Inu in the hot springs and thinking about how he regrets how he treated Inuyasha in the past. That was neat, in a sad sort of way. And throwing Naraku in like that was perfect.

The thing with their future selves was neat, too. Sesshomaru got a whole hell of a lot nicer! and the "cause I'm an idiot" line after Sess says Inu loves him was cute.

Complete awesomeness! I'll be watching for an update. :-D

Lord Sesshomaru
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From VixenArgentum on July 08, 2007
I've been meaning to read this since...forever...and ever. No, seriously, I can't believe I got myself this sidetracked as to not read this absolutely delightful, wonderfully written, and mentally captivating story until NOW.

It was nice to see a story where our favorite brothers don't fall in love with each other right away. I mean, centuries of hatred have to count for something, yeah? I especially loved how you had Sesshomaru's future self beat the crap out of Lord McFuzzy Iceball. Nobody can change you more than yourself, and I loved your idea of having it done quite literally. I wonder, will you ever follow up on the two lovebirds from the future? It would be fun to see them in that setting together more. ^^

God damn, Miroku is full of it, isn't he? I'm not quite sure why, but I have always detested the character in the series, but the way you write him just makes me laugh. Sooo many misunderstandings. I loved it.

Rape is always a touchy subject to put in fiction...too many authors don't have the right kind of sensitivity to pull it off, and still far too many others put it in their stories because- well quite frankly it has to be the most frequently used insta-plot device. Not so with yours. It made sense and you wrote it well.

Lessee here...what else...oh right! Rin! She is absolutely adorable, and if anybody can help fix Inuyasha besides Sesshomaru, it is only right that it is she. Lord Inuyasha the prettiest boy bride in the world. *chuckles* Yeah, we'll just see what she thinks about the two of them when she's a teenager. To grow up being raised by pretty men, who will one day eventually do things that pretty men ought to do! *has random flash of teenage Rin reading and Sess/Inu doujin and doing a fangirl squee*

So yeah, I got back from seeing Transformers at the theatre and I was so energized and I just didn't want to put myself down yet, ya know? So I started reading this thing...and just kept going until it was finished. I couldn't stop. And when the system admins put up the "15 minutes of backing up stories" page up at like 6 AM or so, I felt like I was about to strangle someone because I couldn't read the next chapter. And it wouldn't let me back page either so that I could reread what you had written and at least get some joy out of that. I think I might reread it anyway now that I am finished, just to keep the feeling of it alive in my mind for a little while longer.

Thank you again for sharing your talents! Now that I have caught myself up fully, I will be looking forward to the next installment. Post whenever you feel like, lord knows nobody needs the story update nazis jumping down their throats. And with the progress that I myself tend to make updatewise, it would be hypocritical on my part ^^;;;;;
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From SadlerGirl on July 06, 2007
This is so good! I hope you update soon.

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From Kimiko on July 06, 2007
OMG!!! You are an amazing story writer. You do such a great job at keeping the reader's attention and curiosity!! I love the way the story's going, but there's parts where I'm like, "Awwwww... poor Inuyasha!" But I hope you have some time to put up another chapter or two!! ^_^ I'll be awaiting an update!! *eager to read more!!!!*

~Kimiko
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From midnightsweet on July 05, 2007
come on, come on... please...

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From Rawben on July 05, 2007
omg, i love this story. i havent read inu ff in forever! and i love the "yes, rin" convo. poor sess. i can just see rin now... big fight b/t inu and sess in front of the gang, and then rin blurts out "but lord sesshoumaru, you said that you loved inuyasha!" ::awkward pause::

awesome.

anyhow, great job! keep up the good work! it's ok if you dont feel they're properly edited... i love new posts despite small errors. :D
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From ANON - memorietrail on July 05, 2007
wow that was great
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From ANON - Svarra on July 05, 2007
I really do love this story. It's one of my favorites. I'm somewhat curious about what's going to happen in the future for the group. I assume Kagome will return home now that the jewel has been reassembled because even if she and Kouga are going to mate, I doubt she'd be willing to wait five hundred years to see her family again and likes the conveniences of the modern world. That makes me wonder what's going to happen with Shippo since Sango and Miroku's lives would be too short to do so fully.

*Imagines Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha raising Shippo*

This is partially brought on by one of the pictures by that artist you recommended somewhere around chapter 8 or so. It could either be very cute or make Shippo require years of therapy.
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From ANON - TheHuntress on July 04, 2007
Poor Inuyasha! He really is dreadfully messed up. But the opportunity to beat up Sesshoumaru in the near future should do him some good :o)

The meeting with Rin went well but I was wondering about Kouga? Sesshoumaru did not know of him earlier so Rin should not have had the opportunity to see him after he and his wolves killed her village. Meeting him again now with Kagome and the others is bound to be unsettling at least. Are you planning to make something of that meeting? It is an excellent opportunity for Sesshoumaru to show himself as a protector - the problem will be keeping Kouga alive!

I really like this story so I am eagerly awaiting updates :o)
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From WeIrDpErSoN on July 04, 2007
Amazing!! I love it. It's so perfect how the chatacters are progressing and everything is at an even pace. Thank god for Inuyasha not being a whimpering bitch like I read so often. Well he is but he's still the insulting little half-demon that is amazing. Lol. Well anyways, loved it and awesome job. I can not wait to read more. Keep up the fantastic work!
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From keomah on July 03, 2007
This chapter had me moving down that spiral of pain along with Inuyasha. Damn, that hurt!! Rin was wonderful; really nice characterization. She had Sesshoumaru blushing...lol Maybe Sesshoumaru should let Inuyasha meet Jaken now - then he could take care of two problems at once. Inuyasha can blow off some steam and pulverize Jaken for the 'pretty boy' comment that Rin's logic arrived at, and which would also take care of Sesshoumaru's need to beat on the kappa for not keeping his mouthy 'humans do stupid things' thoughts to himself around Rin. Thank you for updating! Happy 4th of July to you!
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From ANON - KamakuraYumi on July 03, 2007
Will there be hot boys fighting in you next chapter? Pretty please! Great chapter. All that self-loathing and fear... Thanks for writing it from Inuyasha's point of view. I missed the little cutie and his filthy mouth. Rin was absolutely hilarious, whether it was intentional or not. You had me in stitches. Sesshomaru doing his very best caveman impression at the end of it just topped it off. More please.
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From DINKA on July 03, 2007
i like this chapter... very insighthfull!!!

about inuyasha: he probably won't trusth on his mate 'ever'....will he? and i understand him, after all...sesshomaru made his life miserable for too many years that inuyasha is going to think of him as the same bastard of always...even though, sesshomaru is probably changing!!!

about sesshomaru: he needs to change hsi tactics to earn inuyasha's trust....but, it's sesshomaru...i wouldn't expect less.... he is in a big challenge to earn inu's trust....GOOD LUCK & that KAMI BE WITH HIM!!!!

hope to read more soon!!!

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From LadyTsunadeSama on July 03, 2007
Well the story was awesome as usual-- I actually was almost in tears reading it, so emotional. And then this: 'Let go! Let go, you bastard! You ass-licking piece of moldy foot rot! Fucking deer-loving cunt! Asshole son of a putrid, disease ridden whore!' and I fell over laughing, OMG you have the wittiest sense of humor I have ever encountered and it shows up so beautifully in your stories when you least expect it!

great Job cant wait for more!
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From ANON - Shadowdog85 on July 03, 2007
Awww! Rin has won him over! Poor Inuyasha, does he get his chance to kick ass?
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