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By : szaugg
  • From ANON - ladytokyo on July 03, 2007
    yay you updated. man this was a great chapter! reading this was like a release that I've been holding from the last chapter. Kagome should know better. and rin was such a good idea. I hope that she would be able to help in Inuyasha's healing prosess. I had more to say by how about one word and nine letters? FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and thanks for getting MM.org updated as well. as always great work wonderful job and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

    SHIVONNE
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  • From ANON - lunatic_kat on July 03, 2007
    Don’t worry I came back with my shield. There might be a couple of tear tracks down the front though…

    I don’t know why you’ve felt so-so about the last couple of chapters. I think you are doing a wonderful job. This is a tough subject you are tackling and you are managing to do so without making anyone seem out of character. It was pretty gut-wrenching to look inside Inu’s head but I think most everyone can agree that after so many traumatic and awful experiences Inu would be acting and thinking pretty much the way you have imagined. And I just love the way you are doing Sess. I think it’s true to his character to not know what to do to comfort Inu so instead he tries to distract him through anger. And I think a huge angry vent-fest is coming up sometime in the near future for Inu and it’s probably something he truly needs. Maybe after he vents some of that anger and pain he can start to figure out what the soft feeling is coming from Sess. Just knowing that someone has those kinds of soft feelings towards him will probably help his recovery. And I LOVE the part Rin is playing in the story. Her perpetual enthusiasm and high-spirits partners well with Inu’s caustic and ill-tempered demeanor. I think Sess had the right idea introducing those two officially. It was a very cute break to the angst-fest.

    Thanks for the updates. Sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while. It wasn’t you it was me. ( I mean that in the non break-up sense, in which the person that states it really does think it was you. ;) ) I hope to read more soon. I know your juggling a lot of stories right now but try not to let them stress you out. Writing should be fun. Hopefully you have as much fun writing as I do reading. Which is a lot, by the way.

    Your faithful peon,

    luna
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2007
    Chapter 28

    I wouldn't worry about the formatting issues you were having. The IMPORTANT thing is that you updated, because this is a good story.

    Glad to see Rin was able to penetrate his fear just a little bit. I think you having Sess bring Inu to a place where he can scream, rant and holler to destress will not only be interesting to read, but good for him to do.

    As always, enjoyed reading!





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  • From ANON - k on July 03, 2007
    i really liked this chapter. the emotion you convey is so powerful. aside from a few small typo's, the flow is good. i'm g;ad you updated. please don;t forget the other story-this is going to be a pain in the ass. that one is my favorite
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  • From ANON - Ashleigh on July 03, 2007
    ugh! So, so good! But it's not enough, I say! I love Rin! I love Inuyasha! I love Sesshoumaru! And I especially love how you write them!
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  • From KIKI441 on July 03, 2007
    i was so excited when i saw you had the next
    chapter up. leave to rin to make things a
    little better. and when rin started to
    repeat the swear word inuyasha had said. i
    could just see sesshomaru's brow twitching
    as his little girl was cursing. that was
    too funny. so, now that sesshomaru has taken
    inuyasha away from the others will he scream
    out all his rage and hate and hurt as he
    attacks sesshomaru. you know what mean. like
    telling him all of the pain he has felt inside
    since the day sesshomaru turned his back on
    him as a child? i am so looking forward to
    the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mad Maxx Coyote on July 03, 2007
    AHHH! You updated before me! I only have 12 pages done! Man now I really gotta move it. Annnnyway, nice chapter, Inuyasha's reaction to Rin was interesting, and maybe its just me but I can't help but wanted to see Inuyasha actually hurt Sesshomaru, and not just Sesshomaru 'let' Inuyasha whack him a good one. I can't help but think causing Sesshomaru some pain might just help Inuyasha in the long run. I mean he already pretty much wants to beat the crap out of something.....though Koga might also do....yeah beat the crude out of the wolf. Not as good as Sess but its getting somewhere. I think Inuyasha really needs to do some ass kicking just to get himself out of his mindset. All he seems to be thinking is how worthless and weak he is, seems like he needs a reminder on just how powerful he can be. Just a thought.
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  • From LynLin on July 02, 2007
    Ah, YAYYYY. I hope you update soon. It's freakin' good. =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2007
    Hurra! new chappie! cookies!! update soon!
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  • From setoswifey on July 02, 2007
    I love little Rin. She is so innocent and cute. I love the pace of this story so far. I hope that it continues like this. It's like reading a novel that you cant put down.
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  • From ANON - gen50 on July 02, 2007
    another bridge chapter?
    i'm glad you updated this.. we have been waiting.
    thank you!

    2 things happened here:
    1. inuyasha meets rin and is pleasantly surprised even as he is ... angered
    that sess would treat a human better than him - a half demon
    2. they (sess and inu) will finally be alone and can begin to adjust to what happened with inu

    i have always thought rin was good for sess, and will be good for inu.
    hmmm. looking forward to the alone time for sess and inu. i dont think there will be a lemon (although i hope for a lime), but there will be a chance to argue and clear the air. i want to see that!
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  • From Vyper on July 02, 2007
    This is a great story. Thanks for writing it. I keep looking for more updates all the time.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 01, 2007
    are you adding more to this. it would be great. i like how you did this story. it had all the making of of a great movie. i hope you do add more. this was one of the beat story i have read on this site. looking forward to reading more of your writing's. keep up the great work..
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on June 30, 2007
    i think this is my favorite sesshoumaru/inuyasha story! I love it, the whole idea of it as well as the way it was writen the way to made everything. I just reread it for crist's sakes, and i can find no fault or anything the way annoying or just not good. everything was wonderful. Either way i am not going to harras you for an update as you said you plan on finishing your stories and really what more can we ask of you? Just wanted to give you some extra praise for such a wonderful piece of writing that i very much enjoyed.
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  • From ANON - AngelOfTheNight on June 29, 2007
    Wow do not apologize for this chapter, I thought it was wonderful and what incite to how Shes is coming around with his feelings. I truly believe until he gets in touch with his true feelings he can't help the puppy. It was a great read and as always am looking forward to the next chapter. You are such a wonderful writer.
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