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From ANON - Ashleigh on June 26, 2007
Oh, I do so adore this story. I must admit, the title almost turned me off...I've had so many bad experiences with stories in other fandoms with the same or similar ones. That's why I was so very pleasantly surprised when I did read it. It's completely wonderful, and it just turned me into this huge puddle of fangirl-goo. Thank you so much for putting it out here for me to fawn and flap over, and I hope you continue to update regularly.
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From ANON - KamakuraYumi on June 24, 2007
Hmm... What has Inuyasha done with Sesshomaru's armour? Though it is kind of funny. *snickers* Great chapter. Struggling for words here... Sorry! It was nice to get Miroku's feelings on the whole thing. Funnily I don't care what happens to Kagome when usually she's one of my favourite Inuyasha characters, though I would like to see a happy ending for Sango. Poor Sesshomaru though. It's a terrible business having feelings. The sadistic bit of me was snickering away at his dilemma. I love this version of Sesshomaru. You write him beautifully. When I write him, he's always out of character. Just once I'd love to write him in character. *sigh* Rin was wonderful. She's like a balm. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha reacts to her. I eagerly await your next update.
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From ANON - Tasha on June 23, 2007
Wow...I feel like I'm reading a novel. I hope that rin will be able to cheer up inuyasha alittle.
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From ANON - Ben on June 21, 2007
I really hate writing these things because I never get to here what the author thinks, so if you ould reply to my e-mail or something it'd be appreciated. (Darius08x@yahoo.com) And hopefully this isn't too long and you don't get offended by anything.

My friend linked me to this site a few weeks ago and had me bookmarked it. I never thought I'd really come back because I HATED lemons with a passion, and use to be a big anime nerd, but now look down on that. Eventually however I got talked into it and came to get a quick fap at about 11pm, already almost done anyways. I instantly went to the inuyasha section and yours really caught my eye. Spanking was a thing I was really into, and I knew what uke meant from being a nerd however long ago. As I started reading the first chapter it really started to catch my attention, I wasn't really beating it at all anymore. I was surpri sed to find myself actually wondering what was going to happen next. I assumed I just wanted to get to the spanking scene. I read the next chapter and got even more into it. Surprised that the story was actually written very well. Sure there were a few spelling things that bothered me and I didn't know what half the japanese words meant or how to say them (go google, yay!) But that hardly bothered me, just the way it was written really brought me into it and I was quite enjoying myself. I tried to go to sleep countless times but I kept finding myself comming back to your story only a few minutes later, reading each chapter in after on another up til the last one and finally found out it was around 7 AM. I really couldn't believe that I was that drawn into it and that you managed to write it so well. So congratulations on that, I've really enjoyed each chapter and hope to see a new one soon (I can't find when posted these, so I don't really know if you are even working on them anymore, despite your notes)

Ok ACTUAL REVIEWING HERE.

Ok, after my life story I'll actually do some reviewing. I really actually enjoyed this chapter, I've been wondering how well yhttp://inu.adultfanfiction.net/review.php?set=add&no=600091139
Reviews: Ukeou would pull off this whole feeling what the other feels thing between inu and seesh, but you've done an incredible job on it and I really have to applaud you on that. I can almost go as far as saying that it would be a shame to turn this into a lemon, buuut, thats kinda impossible, so I humbly request more juicy dickings. >.> Again, nice job on the feelings thing, I'm reading over this chapter as I'm writing this (since I read it at 6 in the morning sleep deprived) and notice that almost ALL this chapter is what sesshoumaru is feeling from inuyasha and what he thinks about it, and you did a great job at it, You really have copied the actiions and feelings of the characters from the show/manga very well. I think another one of the things that kept me reading the story was that I read the last paragraph of the latest chapter first and was thinking almost the whole time "oh god he is gonna mate rin" or something like that, but luckily, that can't happen. xD Back on track, I think this was the longest chapter you have written so far. and you paced it wonderfully, I wasn't bored for a single moment, you really have tallent. There were few to none spelling errors or anything like that. And like always you've kept me in suspense for the next chapter. I really can't wait for the next one and hope that it comes out soon. (granted you are still writing on it, a response on if you are would be great.)

Thank you for your time and I hope this didn't bore you as I really didn't give you much advice and just told you my life story. I'll keep that for the next chapter, so that way I don't have all 27 right on my mind. Hope to hear from you soon and great job again!

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From ANON - Ben on June 21, 2007
I really hate writing these things because I never get to here what the author thinks, so if you ould reply to my e-mail or something it'd be appreciated. (Darius08x@yahoo.com) And hopefully this isn't too long and you don't get offended by anything.

My friend linked me to this site a few weeks ago and had me bookmarked it. I never thought I'd really come back because I HATED lemons with a passion, and use to be a big anime nerd, but now look down on that. Eventually however I got talked into it and came to get a quick fap at about 11pm, already almost done anyways. I instantly went to the inuyasha section and yours really caught my eye. Spanking was a thing I was really into, and I knew what uke meant from being a nerd however long ago. As I started reading the first chapter it really started to catch my attention, I wasn't really beating it at all anymore. I was surpri sed to find myself actually wondering what was going to happen next. I assumed I just wanted to get to the spanking scene. I read the next chapter and got even more into it. Surprised that the story was actually written very well. Sure there were a few spelling things that bothered me and I didn't know what half the japanese words meant or how to say them (go google, yay!) But that hardly bothered me, just the way it was written really brought me into it and I was quite enjoying myself. I tried to go to sleep countless times but I kept finding myself comming back to your story only a few minutes later, reading each chapter in after on another up til the last one and finally found out it was around 7 AM. I really couldn't believe that I was that drawn into it and that you managed to write it so well. So congratulations on that, I've really enjoyed each chapter and hope to see a new one soon (I can't find when posted these, so I don't really know if you are even working on them anymore, despite your notes)

Ok ACTUAL REVIEWING HERE.

Ok, after my life story I'll actually do some reviewing. I really actually enjoyed this chapter, I've been wondering how well yhttp://inu.adultfanfiction.net/review.php?set=add&no=600091139
Reviews: Ukeou would pull off this whole feeling what the other feels thing between inu and seesh, but you've done an incredible job on it and I really have to applaud you on that. I can almost go as far as saying that it would be a shame to turn this into a lemon, buuut, thats kinda impossible, so I humbly request more juicy dickings. >.> Again, nice job on the feelings thing, I'm reading over this chapter as I'm writing this (since I read it at 6 in the morning sleep deprived) and notice that almost ALL this chapter is what sesshoumaru is feeling from inuyasha and what he thinks about it, and you did a great job at it, You really have copied the actiions and feelings of the characters from the show/manga very well. I think another one of the things that kept me reading the story was that I read the last paragraph of the latest chapter first and was thinking almost the whole time "oh god he is gonna mate rin" or something like that, but luckily, that can't happen. xD Back on track, I think this was the longest chapter you have written so far. and you paced it wonderfully, I wasn't bored for a single moment, you really have tallent. There were few to none spelling errors or anything like that. And like always you've kept me in suspense for the next chapter. I really can't wait for the next one and hope that it comes out soon. (granted you are still writing on it, a response on if you are would be great.)

Thank you for your time and I hope this didn't bore you as I really didn't give you much advice and just told you my life story. I'll keep that for the next chapter, so that way I don't have all 27 right on my mind. Hope to hear from you soon and great job again!

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From Raithea on June 19, 2007
Woohoo! An update!! Hallelujah. You're so much better at keeping a regular update. My own is absolutely abhorrent. And you are such a good writer, keeping everyone in character. Especially not turning all the women into bitches. So don't like when authors, usually women no less, do this. But oh poor Inuyasha, i just keep reassuring myself that you firmly believe in happy endings. Same here, yea! for the light at the end of the tunnel. I apologize for not reviewing till now even though have been following near obsessively all of your stories. I can be such a lazy sod. Anyway fantabulous job once again!
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From luvsjazz on June 19, 2007
Hey, it's been a little while since I've read and reviewed. Hope your trip went ok, sorry to hear about your computer, and welcome to livejournal. I'm not sure what I expected when I started reading Uke, but this wasn't it.....but that's a good thing. It's a great story, and the Naraku scene totally floored me. That I think was the biggest shock. Not like we don't all know that he's a butthole, and evil incarnate, but that had the potential to set Inu and Sess's relationship back for CENTURIES!!!!! I love reading about how Sess is dealing with his emotions for Inu - it's funny to read him trying to work it thru in his own head. Keep up the good storytelling and PLEASE update Other Side :)
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From ANON - Elliot on June 19, 2007
Whoogoo! I almost faintet when I saw the new chapter! I visit this story every day! I'm so happy you continue Uke! Rin is such a sweet little girl, I'm positive she will be able to bring some happiness to poor inuyasha! And Sesshoumaru's stumbling over some crazy little thing called love ^^ *humming the Queen-song* It's a tasty bit of fiction you write! Everytime!
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From ANON - LadyWolf aka SheWolf on June 18, 2007
Nice chapter but will you be getting more into Inu & Sessy? I hope so It feels like it's time for them to fine ground somewhere now ya know. I love ur work as u know so take ur time and update soon k. till next read^_^
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From ForgottenPrincess on June 18, 2007
i am so glad that you updated. i really enjoyed this chapter. at least someone other then sesshoumaru is trying to help inuyasha...Kagome is acting useless. I also like the insight on sesshoumaru...he accidently told rin that he loved inuyasha...i think he is simply in denial. I like it better that way. I like the entire ending half...it was written...i can only think of the word "beautifully" so i hope that gives you an idea....about how he could save rin but he was too late for inuyasha...and about how he was a beautiful bride and why he might have done what he did an mark inu as his mate...ah it was all wonderful. i really hope you update sooner rather then later. However, i know you have other stories you don't want to forget about. I am sure other people are harassing you to update other ones. so i will just wish you inspiration and time to write and feel the desire to write as well.

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From Stormborn Apostle on June 18, 2007
Awesome update. Glad to see it so soon-ish. You update crazy-fast compared to me...

I'm also looking very forward to a few more updates on your other stories. I've personally been laying awake at night waiting for the next chapter of The Other Side of the Kazaana, heh.
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From keomah on June 17, 2007
Chapt. 27
Poor, poor Sesshoumaru! Loving and caring - oh my - ...lol Really enjoyed Rin's part and Jaken's new look; spring green. Yup, little Rin is going to put Sesshoumaru through the wringer with her innocent comments! Can just imagine the fire works when she starts relaying all her info to Inuyasha as only a child can do...lol 'Out of the mouths of babes' I'm sure wasn't coined in Sesshoumaru's time. Hmmmm, there must an equivalent for that phrase though - children are universal in their ability to tell it like it is. Looking forward to that meeting between Inuyasha and Rin!
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From whitehawk on June 17, 2007
YAY! it's starting to get happy again! Well...at least happier! And Rin's so cute

...yes Rin...Yes Rin...Yes Rin! LOved It! And he said he loved him! and Inuyasha was
a beautiful bride! Update soon!
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From ANON - me1 on June 16, 2007
great update but there should be more interaction between sessho and inu.
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From ANON - Mad Maxx Coyote on June 16, 2007
I love it, Sesshomaru's tormentor in the form of Rin haha. Amazing how someone so innocent can really make you think. Of course I think thats a given, considering the truely innocent don't have it in them to lie to make you feel crappy, thus it holds more weight. I like this story and it gives me ideas. Course thats kind of a pain, cause I have to work extra hard to make sure I do something that you havent done, or work extra fast to do it before you do XD. I'm curious to see what Sesshomaru will do to help Inuyasha, I can only think of a few things that might work. Best wishes....now I gotta get writing so I can post another chapter, can't let you get two ahead of me.
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