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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
Chapter 15 review
O.O

Chapter 16 review

LMFAO!!! I love this part:
�Ginta, help, he�s gonna kill me!� Hakkaku whimpered, ducking back behind Kagome.�
�Who? Kouga or Sesshoumaru?� Ginta whimpered back, and joined him in his hiding spot.
BUWHA!

Chapter 17 review

O.O HOLY FUCKING HELL!!! (I dropped a twinkie in my lap; I swear! That�s what it is!!)

Chapter 18 review

Oh god� I love the pillow talk XDXD

Chapter 19 review

LMFAO� ahh, that�s a great way to put it. The Super Sesshoumaru Sex finger! XD

Ahh, poor Miroku... being misinterpreted and all. Lmao. That was so awesome.

Chapter 20 review

Err. (kept reading� oh god I can�t remember what happened I�m too addicted to trying to finish this X_X)

Chapter 21 review

Holy fuck! Naraku�s pretending to be Sesshomaru isn�t he!! THAT BASTARD!!

Chapter 22 review

(gives up and reviews every other chapter)

Chapter 23 review

OMG!! (starts to cry) Is he broken!?! (sobs) Sesshomaru better have found and KILLED that bastard Naraku!! ARGHH!!

Chapter 24 review

Oh goooddd. Now he�s gonna be soooo broken cause of the almost slaying of Kagome.. X_X (sobs)

Chapter 25 review

OH GOD.

Update! T_T

-DM (muwha, told ya I'd review every chapter...almost... o.O;;)
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From KlutzyHanyou on April 02, 2007
I have been following this story for a while and wanted to tell you what a great job I think you're doing. I especially like how you set up the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru so that it's more believable than Sess. just deciding one day he's madly in love with his brother. Great work, keep it up.
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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
(chapter 14 review)

O.O

-DM
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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
(chapter 13 review)

AHAH!! Sweet release, is all I have to say on Inuyasha's behalf...at least the good part of it. XD

Ah, I absolutely love a jealous Sesshomaru, though what he might do to Inuyasha cause he's so brain damanged (lmao) doesn't sit too well with me. Hmm.

(reads on)

-DM
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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
(chapter 12 review)

omg. Sessh knows (about Inuyasha being raped) but seems to not feel a thing about it! THAT BASTARD! I WANNA SMACK THE HELL OUTTA HIM!!

And holy shit, Sesshomaru's gonna spank Inuyasha?! Damnit, Miroku and his big, fat mouth! oh god, and Kouga's involved now?! X_X lmao.

(continues to read and more than likely fail test) Yay!

-DM
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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
(chapter 11 review)

OMG. Miroku... explain sex... oh god... gay sex!... to Inuyasha! XDXD Priceless, and how you had went about it... XDXDXD

Ahh, that's so horrible what Inuyasha had to go through! T_T (wants to kill the bastard! Ahh) I'm so wondering if Sesshomaru will ever find out about Inuyasha having been raped... Part of me hopes so, so he can know fully what his mate's gone through. Hmm.

Oh, and I so lied. I have to read the next chapter... (is so gonna fail test T_T)

Great job again!!

-DM
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From drcomalfy on April 02, 2007
(chapter 10 review)

LMAO!!! Sesshomaru... brain damaged... oh god XDXDXD

I should really be studying for my math test... this is so your fault for telling me where this was! (not really, I shouldn't have avidly been checking Y!Gallery for messages from you XD)

Ahh, this is so amusing, I especially love Sesshomaru making himself all aroused and not having a hand to take care of it... oh god, and don't let me forget about him forming his little travel cloud and then plummeting to the earth cause he lost his train of thought!! BUWHAHAHAHA!!!! So brilliant and SOO fucking hilarious! XD Ahh. Okay. (goes to read chapter 11). I think I'll read the next chapter and review and then read the rest tomorrow if I can (really needs to study... is so gonna fail X_X)

GREAT FUCKING JOB! LOVE IT!

-DM
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From Chandrima on April 01, 2007
Well... It's taken me about three days to read your story, reading it around doing my chores and what not...

I LOVE IT!!!

I think that Sesshy is actually learning how to deal with Inuyasha and that Inuyasha is actually learning how to be with Sesshy! I can't wait for the next chapter! *squee* I love your story and I simply can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Azalea J. on April 01, 2007
Awww, I understand completely what you mean about rape- and with Naraku, that had to be doubly horrible for Inuyasha (It was painful to read!), but now I can see it possible for Sesshoumaru to maybe worm his way into our little hanyou's heart. Please continue- it's too cute to end here! *Sits staring at her screen waiting for an update*
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From ANON - LadyWolf on April 01, 2007
I'm sorry i am late I was sick. ut I just read very chapter I missed and....WOW!! *dances* Narnaku died he's died YAY!!! BUt my poor Inuyasha please tell me sess can fix this I mean He should be happy... well till next time!!! ^_^
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From ANON - Inari on March 31, 2007
YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW ON EDGE IT MAKES ME WHEN YOU DON'T UPDATE WITHIN AT LEAST 2 DAYS!!!!!!!......sorry I'm just really looking forward to your next chapter. I would like for you to keep this story as your top priority but if you get time plz update Other Side Of Kazaana...
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From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2007
hey Love the newest chapter an can't wait to rea what you do next!!
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From TheHuntress on March 31, 2007
I love this story! It has everything: drama, angst, depth, believable characters and story line, laughs, fluff - and I am sure it will be really hot when we get there :o) I think I am now converted to yaoi (I started out with "This is gonna be fun", loved your work and moved on to "Death or little Death" and "Uke" - all I can say is wow! :o)
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From MetsukiKaraTen on March 30, 2007
Whew! I missed a couple chapters and finally got caught up. I started reading your work here, it's only fitting that continue to do so here (I just miss the 'notify' that I grew to count on over at that 'other place'.)

The angst factor has been through the roof, but damn. I was honestly impressed with your detail of Inu's physical and emotional reactions post the 'attempted rape'. It was more than that, he had been tortured, mind fucked in the deepest most lasting way, and the physically 'shocky' reaction nearly rang too many bells in my own head. I did have to break for a short time after that.

The introspection as Sess examines how it came about for him to resent Inu so much in the first place was just genius. Of course he would only deny any sense of guilt, for anything. Ever. Until now. That Naraku's recanting of Sess's own taunting, hateful words would kick Sess so hard in his own heart and conscience says alot for how deep his caring for Inu really has become. You did an amazing job at conveying just how evil that 'mutant bastard' is. I cringed at the power of Sess's absolute fury at not being able to bring Naraku back to 'just do it over and over again', regardless of how hideous the bastard's undoing ultimately was.

Sess's tenderness at the hot spring, and following maturity in refusing Inu's demands that he take him (once Inu recovered enough to make them) was very moving. My, my hasn't our demon lord come a long way. The humming of a tune to a song long forgotten, as he rocked him was just ... wow. So nurturing. So loving. I am so looking forward to where it goes next. Wow, Naraku's gone!! *does a little happy dance*
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From dac720 on March 30, 2007
ALL RIGHT!!! Finally Sess lets Inuyasha know with no uncertainty that he cares about him as his mate, though I doubt Inu will see it that clearly being the poor traumatized puppy he is at the moment. As usual I love the writing style, it provides a deep emotional insight to the characters without drowning the reader in unnecessary words. I can�t wait to see how Inuyashas going to act around the more openly loving version of big brother/mate.

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