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By : szaugg

From ANON - kittykittyyaoigirl on February 05, 2007
Damn but now that hurts. I agree with Miroku that no-one should go through rape. It's damn painful and it never really leaves you. I guess that's the way it is for InuYasha. I hope Miroku can beat some scense into the damn bastard. Sorry I mean Sesshoumaru. I liked the fact that you had Sessoumaru kick his own ass. That is what we call Poetic Justice. Hell I think even his karma must hate him right now. InuYasha would go through anything, deal with any apin for the people that finally see him. They look at him and actually care that he hurts, that he was alone for so long. I love this story. Please continue.

Oh and congratulations on your trip to Japan. Differant than you thought it would be huh? I hope you enjoyed it. Have a pleasent day/night whatever!
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From ANON - Sekre on February 05, 2007
-jaw droppeth-

When I clicked on this story, I didn't think it would be that good - I was looking for the OoCness, mindless smut, loop-holed plot and I didn't find any of that. I was so surprised! This fic is wonderful and quite believable .. not the typical 'going into heat/180 degree change on feelings between characters' sort of thing, though I have read good ones of those too.

Point is, your story is very refreshing and I'm excited that you are able to pull off the whole thing, creating quite a plotty/smutty story (which are the best ones!). I also see that you update quite regularly, which is fantastic as we all know.

As for favorite scenes ... I really like Sesshou's point of view. He's not just kill-eat-sleep-get tessiaga. His mind is humourous without the whole 'what character is this again?'.

Also the going to the future part was incredible! I had to reread the scene when I first realized what was going on (for a minute there I thought Inuyasha was delusional or something xD). Hahaha, I laughed over that whole crade-robbing thing as I tried to imagine their faces. And then the whole Inuyasha-yasha-Sess part was hilarious, as well as Future Sess kicking Past Sess' ass.

Then of course the lusty!sess and being-sex-ed!yasha were among my favorite scenes.

I do hope Miroku will achieve something with Sesshoumaru, and hopefully not death. I don't think Sesshoumaru would actually rape Inuyasha, but this story does have an angst-twist to it x). Well, anyway, before I write a novel, I can't wait to read more updates ^^
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From ANON - gen on February 05, 2007
thank you. for updating. after my killer out of town, i find my entire body tired.
i logged on, hoping but thinking no way you could have updated so soon.
so thank you for proving hope exists because it does...

excellent chapter. 11 per this, but actually just 10, right - one chapter was your notes on japan.
now we see why inu is exceptionally nervous, and why friends - his real ones are so important.
we also get a glimpse of the life of a hanyou.. or if one thought of it, periods in the life of an individual, hanyou, youkai or what (sanzo of saiyuki gunlock reload claims it is all the same, and i find myself agreeing sometimes)- when one is terribly vulnerable and that there will be others who might take advantage of one...
so everyone should be careful...

but, it seems, though sess is in denial, but now accepting the truth of his fantasies, as if giving himself permission ... inu is - or starting to - think about things. i knew miroku had a card to play. he may be a lecher (you know what i mean), but he's still a monk.

i thought i'd see them meet, but that would be the next chapter, i think?
i wonder what sess will do when he finds out inu has been raped as a human....
i imagine all sorts of things... but i guess i dont know if you plan to cover it in any form in your fic...

i was awake til 4am last night, so i read you fic from start til the last chappie. i guess i'll read it again.
i do confess that i have your fic in my pc (internet can be snarky over here, and sometimes i need a fix - and the internet is acting up, so .... but i do send recs in my lj. i've mentioned your fic there. =) but i often misspell your name. but i tell the title and where to look for it should someone be interested.....

anyway... very nice. will you be mentioning the future inu and future sess again? i hope that before this fic is through, you might do that.... though it sure does not sound that way....perhaps it can be through a kagome pov? that would interesting, dont you think? maybe in 3-5 chappies?

but whatever you decide, you'll find me reading and appreciating it. at least we know for sure inu and sess survive the sengoku (did i spell the feudal era right?)... ha, nothing like knowing a little bit of the end...
=)

again, wonderful update. i'm still salivating, much like Pavlov's dog who has just heard the bell, for that sessxinu meeting.....
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From dac720 on February 05, 2007
I am so glad that Miroku is trying to help Inuyasha in his own way. Poor Inu the tension must be killing him.
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From ANON - Shadowdog85 on February 05, 2007
Awww! Poor Inuyasha, maybe his brother will be good to him. Hopefully, Miroku can talk some sense into him!
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From ANON - Lee on February 04, 2007
Ack. Hello, ulcer. This chapter slayed me in so many ways, and I can't help but be blown away by the fact that your angst is equally as powerful as your humor - or your smut, come to that. It means that I never know what's going to pop out and _gut me_ with any given chapter, but I wouldn't trade it for anything in the world.

(Also, even though Inuyasha broke my heart into ten separate pieces here, I have to say that I fell in love with your Miroku all over again. Even just being a friend, he's spectacular. :)
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From setoswifey on February 04, 2007
Sex education from Miroku to Inuyasha...that was great. I get the feeling that his confrontation with Sesshomaru is going to be interesting as well.
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From ANON - ardy1 on February 04, 2007
Awww. You're gonna let his friends try to protect Inuyasha. Actually, couldn't Miroku suck Sess into his wind tunnel, if it came down to it? I can imagine he would hesitate, wondering a bit as to whether or not it was the right thing to do, but that doesn't detract from the possibility of it, does it? When you think about all the demons and other shit he has sucked down, one dog demon shouldn't be that big of a deal. There is Sess' poison to worry about, I guess. Dear Miroku. He's such an intelligent, if somewhat reluctant, hero.

You had me going there for a bit; I was wondering if Miroku was going to offer to demonstrate masturbation for Inuyasha's benefit, and I was all set to laugh thinking of the two of them discussing techniques and different approaches and responses... Oh dear. Not sure I could have handled that with any semblence of aplomb.

Well, I think you ought to give Inuyasha a threesome in this story with Kagome, just to show him that he won't actually be missing out on anything. And besides, I'm sure Kagome would enjoy both brothers together if she really thought about it, don't you?
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From ANON - mcdgoddess on February 04, 2007
OMG! This chapter was so sad! I almost cried! Poor Inuyasha! I think that this is the first story ever that I have read of such a horrible event occuring in Inuyasha's childhood and as terrible as his rape is, it makes the story more real and helps to explain Inuyasha's character. I think that sometimes people forget how alone he was and that he was just a child when he was left to care for himself and this event helps to really show the really dark and often true side of life. I wonder how Sesshoumaru will respond once he learns of this. This made me think of why they have to hide their true form in the future. Did something like the past happen to the future Inuyasha on a human night? I trully looooooooooooooove this story and I look forward to every update! Hopefully I not have to wait long for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Anonymous on February 04, 2007
I love your story! I can tell that you have a real talent for writing. I just can't stop reading this story and I can't wait to see the update.
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From nomdeplume on February 04, 2007
Nice to finally understand more of why InuYasha is even more upset at the prosepect of sex than it seemed he would be. I like that there is a back-story to him, and that Miroku is trying to help to prepare InuYasha, and it seems Sesshomaru. I love where this story is going.
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From ANON - gen on February 04, 2007
i was out of town, and as soon as i got back, i checked this... and well, trying to tell myself not to expect anything....

thank you for updating... i am practically salivating when they actually do meet - again.
sess in denial is really something to imagine, and well, that's exactly how i see sess...
(this is the key phrase that goes through my mind when i think of sess in denial .."i, sesshoumaru, have no one to protect" while images of rin and that toad flash on the screen. he protects inu even as he denies it. sess, the king of denials)

i like the way you keep inu IC, shaking and trembling, very weak, and yet, pretending, even as he knows he is weak. (they really are brothers, huh? although inu is able to access his emoions better)

i can hardly wait, i know you have kazaana too, but i hope you get to update uke again before that.
sigh.... but i'm very happy you updated...
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From ANON - Gonirotatsu06 on February 04, 2007
I absolutely love ur story, i was sad that it stopped when it did. i hope that u continue the wonderful story u have started. i can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!!
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From on February 04, 2007
Words like gut-wrenching, heart-wrenching come to mind... Sorry if I repeat myself! I really, really like this fanfict and I look forward to an update. The future-self beats the shit ouf of past-self was interesting to say the least. I couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction... Inuyasha's loyalty to and concern for his friends is really touching too... I read This Is Gonna Be Fun ages back. Didn't realise that was one of yours. It really was fun. Loved the drunken marriage, drugged Kagome and the Inuyasha/Kagome smut!
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From ANON - oniku on February 04, 2007
Hey,
Okay, that last bit was so cute! There really should be more. It's going to be very hard to wait and find out what happens now!! It was fun to read through a lot of parts at once but I don't think I'll have the ptience to do it again. Still excellent to read though!
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