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Reviews for The Beginning of a New Life

By : rainbow21

From angelnomiko on January 25, 2007
wow ... soo is the pup is 3/4 then ... hmmm how will they know for sure if he is a full blood and what is sess going to do .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From Reymond on January 25, 2007
Little Rin is very cute in her innonence and that would give an enough good story with the thoughts of the characters well described, BUT, because there is one, a very big one, you have to find a beta for all the mistakes. Although, being french, english is a foreign language for me, I would say that for us, readers, too much is unbearable : we can't avoid to be disturbed by the corrections automatically done by the mind while reading... Do you understand ? Don't feel harassed please, I say that to hels you. Do you know that you use "their" in all the corners ! Where I want to read "they're", "there" or even "here", I always find "their". Maybee you can change it easily ?

On the other part, in the story, it seems to me that, well, Rin could be a little to young to the taste of the AFF's moderators. If you change that, I'm sure the story will be more right, but, sure, I am not the creator of the plot.

Keep your courage, I wait the following chapters !

Bonjour de France,

A french mother and reader,
Merely Truth
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From WistStar on January 25, 2007
omg i lvoe this story! and i hope u will continue this good story to a good ending. and i would like to know what happens next after he marked rin as his mate ^_^ oh please update soon
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From angelnomiko on January 24, 2007
wow that was great .. i love that hen help rin out and mated with her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on January 24, 2007
OMG I hope you update really soon, because I just love this story. It's just wonderful. I adore Sesshomaru and Rin is so sweet. They are perfect together and I would love to read some more. Please please update... like now or later today or like early tomorrow. lol. Take care and thanks for writing a great story. Keep up the good work.
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From angelnomiko on January 23, 2007
wow that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From Sorceressofthenight on January 22, 2007
Great start so far please go on with your story
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