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Reviews for Fade into you

By : unwife
  • From RadioActiveOrange on May 27, 2008
    Dude you spelled Sesshoumaru wrong. Notice that the only R in his name is in the "Maru" part. If we all pronounced it how you spell it we would be saying "Sess-roh-maru" instead of "Sess-Show-Maru". Other than that, good idea for a fanfic. You should lengthen it out more by putting more detail in it. It seems to jump from place to place quite quickly. :) Interesting none-the-less.
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  • From TheMikoShivae on October 19, 2007
    good story so far.
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  • From madmiko on March 02, 2007
    I sure hope that means Inuyasha FINALLY came to her rescue. He needs to be a little quicker in the future. So much for the romantic evening. Will he have to fight Sesshoumaru now, or will Sess leave in disgrace?
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  • From XxSangoxX on February 27, 2007
    add more
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  • From madmiko on February 05, 2007
    Gee, Sesshoumaru's really into it, ne? Her heat turned him into a rapist. He might even be thankful later if Inuyasha manages to save her intime, otherwise he'll be mated to a HUMAN. Poor Kagome. All set for a romantic evening with the one she loves and ends up with a handsome, powerful full-demon with no hang-ups on dead girls instead. Hmmm. (JJ!) What will Inuyasha do after he gets rid of Sess? And what was that spell Kagome had with her? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From szaugg on January 23, 2007
    looks like it has potential. Some sections of the dialogue seemed a little stilted, not quite flowing as well. however, something easily fixed, and the plot looks like it could be interesting. And I liked the huge 'inuyasha' yell at the end, heh.
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  • From Moon on January 23, 2007
    Goody, Goody... Continue.

    Peace and Love n_n

    ---P.O.M.D.
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