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Reviews for A Delayed Dawn

By : roshully
  • From sugar900 on October 21, 2011
    I have to let you know, that i'm offically addicted to your story. Do you have plans on finishing it? I love the plot and your writing style, everything is very easy to see.
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  • From chanda on July 30, 2007
    Hello, I know its been a while since I reviewed. However, I just havent had the time. I love this story and am so looking forward to an update.

    Chanda
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  • From roxaas on July 11, 2007
    i love where this story is going please hurry with the next chapter, i just can't wait its addictive.
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  • From RamenWhore on May 29, 2007
    *whines* we need more chapters!! ^_^
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on May 13, 2007
    Oh wow such a good story and I have recommnded it to several of my friends. I like the feel and tone of it--- so well done.
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  • From Dragodden on April 27, 2007
    Awesome update! I'm so impressed with your frequent additions while keeping the quality top notch~!

    I'm waiting for more Kagome/Inuyasha interactions, but I love that you didn't throw the characters at each other first chance you got. The build up and characterization is awesome. Kagome's character is unique to a lot of other story-Kagomes, and I LOVE her independence and lack of trust. ^.^ I'm still not sold on Kikyo being Inuyasha's rape victim..

    Anyhow, noticed one typo that makes a difference: you mentioned Inuyasha's "puppy eyes" rather than "puppy ears."

    Can't wait for the next update!

    Keri

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  • From chanda on April 24, 2007
    Oh, my gosh...another cliffy...sighs...lol. I wonder who has Kagome's bag...Sesshomaru...Kikyo...or Naraku...or maybe none of the above...lol. Anyways, loved it and look forward until your next update.

    Chanda
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  • From chanda on April 19, 2007
    Great chapter... so, Kagome is drafted...interesting. I aslo liked the ending. Your story is progressing nicely. I look foward until your next update.

    Chanda
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  • From Nyouko on April 11, 2007
    OhMyGod. This story is so good. You have to update soon. In chapter 13 all I wanted to do was hit Kagome becasue she is so dumb. She didin't even ask how they got thourgh the barrier.
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  • From chanda on April 10, 2007
    I loved it... great action scene. I cannot wait until your update...things are heating up! Love it!

    Until next time,
    Chanda
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  • From chanda on April 03, 2007
    I loved that update! Look forward to your next one!
    Chanda
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  • From Angelchan on April 03, 2007
    Great. More please I want see what happen.
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  • From chanda on March 27, 2007
    I wonder where Kagome ran off too? She must of slipped into osmosis...lol. In addition, what's with Kikyo...can we say psycho? Or just overly obsessed! Either way, I recomend serious medication.
    Overall, I loved the chapter and looking forward until your next update.

    Keep up the great writing,
    Chanda

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  • From chanda on March 20, 2007
    Loved the update...as they say the plot surly thickens. I will check that out and thank you for the information. I look forward til your next update.

    Chanda
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 20, 2007
    I think with each chapter this story simply gets better and better. Every chapter ends at a place that makes you just hunger for more soon. I wish all stories had this depth of plot and class, this is surely one of the chosen few.. because as much as I like it, it is nice to see a story that isnt PWP on every page!

    *Not even my compres to this in plot thickness*
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