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Reviews for Intrusion on the Innocent

By : Zeryna
  • From Starryice on June 14, 2019

    Please update & finish soon!!! It’s great!!


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  • From adeaneri on January 28, 2008
    great fic. hehe i think shes taknig after sesshy a bit much. cant wait to read more
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  • From oxcab on February 11, 2007
    this is the best fic i ever read ^_^ update soon
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  • From Johnandreylover on February 11, 2007
    ^O^ I'm famous! Lol. Great chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter...so...when is it coming?? Pleasesssssss Hurryyyyyyyyyyy!!! *_* Though I'm still high off of Rin's actions...getting down and dirty with Sesshomaru-sama...

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    Anyways I can't wait to read the next chapter...hopefully I'll get around to updating my own stories [[writers block and I'm 2 busy]]

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  • From Sorceressofthenight on February 10, 2007
    Jaken could have waiting a little longer before he showed up. But that is just like him to do that.
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  • From 619Lover4Life on February 09, 2007
    Loved it don't know why I didn't come back earlier to do it!
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  • From 619Lover4Life on February 09, 2007
    Wow! My friend Passing_Breeze wasn't playing when she said this was good...its hard to find a good fiction where Rin is a demon (she is right?!) -_- Love it so far...Let me review for Chapter 1
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on February 07, 2007
    Wow very interesting. How is Sesshoumaru going to help Rin now? Well Rin freak out when she finds out what happens to her? I know I would. Please keep up the great work, I love the story so far, very well writing.

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  • From Johnandreylover on February 07, 2007
    Wow. o_O I actually thought she was going to kill him for a momment. Did she change into a demon???? -_o I think if he had done that would she have became his mate??? Anywayz love the fic and can't wait for you to update.
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  • From Johnandreylover on February 07, 2007
    I love it! Please please update! Even though you have already posted chapter two! Lol. Love the story so far! I'll make sure to tell my friend to come and check this story out.
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  • From Mmoirai on February 06, 2007
    This is a promising start. I currently have no critisizim, only praise. Great job. Keep it coming.
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