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Reviews for Desert Princess

By : SohmaStar
  • From ANON - tigera15 on July 29, 2015
    Wow soooo cool i love this story please keep going!!!

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  • From berrygirl713 on March 15, 2015
    more? please??
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  • From ANON - Larissa on January 26, 2015
    Too bad this story was abandoned. It had a really interesting start, and I would have liked to see how it all played out. I hope you someday come back and finish it. It is sad to see a good story go to waste.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 16, 2014
    This story is also awesome, I hope to see an update in the future sometime.

    ja ne till next time keep it up
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  • From ANON - CherryBlossomMix on May 07, 2014
    OMG I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!! please update soon!!! This is def. one of my all-time fav. stories.
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  • From NAnderson on January 23, 2012
    Well the chapters area on the short side. But other then that, you have a truly LOVELY story here that I am really looking forward to reading more of soon hopefully :) I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts her first time alone with Inuyasha ;)
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 17, 2011
    I'm loving this story so far. Please update soon!
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  • From whiteluna on July 16, 2011
    Hi there. I think you have a pretty good idea going, but the chapters are short and the story is moving very fast. Take your time, reread it. You're getting the idea across, but try exploring your character's thoughts and feelings more. When you get to a moment, like how the King hates his daughter---how did that affect the kind of person she is? How does Kagome feel about being away from her family? Does she want to stay or go? Try getting across their thoughts more. Try and put yourself in Kagome's place, how this all is affecting her. I think if you do that, the story will be really really good.
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  • From Sabriel20 on July 15, 2011
    so far, i'm really impressed with this story. i like how the characters are portrayed. the story seems very thought out. i do wish the chapters were longer though:)
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  • From Vyper on July 14, 2011
    Poor Kagome, not only does her Father hate her, Inuyasha claimed her already without permission. I can't wait for the next installment to see what happens.
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  • From inuyashaloverr on July 13, 2011
    Am liking this a lot. Any way you can let me know when you update again? Id appreciate it. And keep it up!
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  • From ANON - jessica on July 12, 2011
    LOVED the new chapter!!!! hope u plan to update soon i just love this story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reviewer on July 06, 2011
    OMG. LOVED IT SOO MUCH!! DO YOU NOT SEE THESE CAPITALS?? THAT'S HOW MUCH I LOVED IT!! WRITE. NOW. UPDATE. *IT WAS SO HOT.*
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  • From BlueDragon on June 29, 2011
    Nice start. There are a few spelling/grammatical/punctuation errors here and there. First one that comes to mind is in the first paragraph. It seems like it's going pretty fast-paced, but I'm still interested. It ought to be interesting when Sesh finds Inuyasha in Kagome's bathing room, lol.
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  • From savagesam on June 28, 2011
    i really like this so far and thats great considering im a S/K girl :) please continue
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