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Reviews for Where the Truth Begins

By : Relicfang
  • From arizonasiren on April 10, 2007
    Great story so far... I hope you update soon...



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  • From on February 08, 2007
    LOVES IT!!!!!!!!!! This story is going to rock! :)
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  • From fallenangel7583 on February 07, 2007
    an interesting beginning. i'm a sucker for highschool fics, even though it was ages ago. LOL. you have a good premise, i'm not big on kouga so seeing him get socked was great. poor kags, abusive relationships are never fun. you have an interesting opening for a plot, and i really hope to see this expand. be careful on the paragraph structure, a lot of is is clumped together. don't rush, you really have a good talent for writing. try to draw out your scenes just a bit longer.

    you have a great thing going, i can't wait to read more.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 07, 2007
    I love it! PLEASSSE Dont take it wrong but maybe a tiiiny bit of spacing between speakers-- it gets kinda crowded LOL~
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