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By : chicke222
  • From angelnomiko on February 15, 2007
    wow ... kagome can save she friends ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From cocoke5 on February 15, 2007

    wow that was a good chapter and can not wait for more of the story and see if kagome can do what she was ask to do. good luck on the rest of the storyand i will be here to read it. more more more more more.
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  • From angelnomiko on February 14, 2007
    wow that was sad .. but know she knows what happen to them ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From cocoke5 on February 14, 2007
    woooooooooooooow the story is greating real good and can not wait for more of the story and see if sess come back in to kegome life good luck and be wait for more of the story. up date soon
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  • From Chococat on February 08, 2007
    I like very much. Keep up the great work!
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  • From DAZ306 on February 08, 2007
    Sooo they found Kikyo......lmao
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  • From kookookitty on February 08, 2007
    good job on the chapter, grammar needs tweaked a bit though. the story is intelligent and intreiging, i'm looking forward to reading more.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From kookookitty on February 08, 2007
    you have real raw talent but most people aren't going to want to read your work if they get a bad first impression... please correct the grammar of your summary:

    *The well closed when Kagome was 17. She is now 24, destiny is at her doorstep once again.*

    if you write me at the address on my profile, i will help you with editing your story (but not lemons), i believe it has potential.

    thank you,
    ginny


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