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Reviews for Call Center Romance

By : 4inukag4
  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 16, 2007
    Ohhhh drat *clings to cliffie and waits.....

    Ok so I love how you made Sesshomaru so cold and professional, do I smell a bit of office conflict with he and his brother? Perhaps some hot office sex on a desk with he and Kagome???

    HAHA ANd Yashie??????? Kikiyo calls him Yashie??? ROFL?? Dude, this chick is seriously messed up and I smell a trap-----the poor soft hearted slob can't help himself but to try and save every woman in distress he meets can he?

    Very good job!! More soooon please!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 16, 2007
    "I'm on my way honey" what a sucker Inuyasha is
    Kikyo got him hook line and sinker, anyway nice
    cliffy, can't wait till the next update.
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 15, 2007
    Yup, that was very enlightening. (Curiosity killing that damn cat still. Not to mention, I can get over anxious while reading stories... Grins.) Enjoyed this chapter a lot. Your grammar skills and word usage is some of the better that I have seen used in fanfiction. (I am a certified Secondary (as in grades 7-12) English teacher and am subbing right now. I just finished college.)
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 15, 2007
    *claps* Bravo!!! Bravo!!!! Cant wait to see how this turns out. And I love the insertion of Gold Digger-- that is truly Kikyo's theme here eh? So is InuYasha gonna call her back? Maybe just to tell her to F*** off??? Sooo many possibilities! And what up with Sesshomaru *pokes ol' Lord Fluffy Woo Woo*... what does he plan to do to poor InuYasha????

    *hops* Need more!!!

    Yeah I gotta give ya some credit here for Primal Scream LOL! I was missing something-- I just knew I was-- the story needed something sooooooo maybe now we can figure out what it is and get on with it. Not givin' away too much BUT it may surprise a LOT of people how it turns out!
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  • From kookookitty on February 15, 2007
    60 miles huh? i'm between carnegie and bridgeville, southwest of the burg. if you ever come into town, drop me a note (e-mail on profile page) and we'll meet up!

    your story, i can relate, a slice of real life... please don't have everyone call him 'inu', it's like his nickname is 'dog', "hey dog." *shivers* ~yash or yasha sounds more like a 'mill hunky' purely pittsburgh (my 'pittsburgh/slavic/hungarian' roots are showing).

    =)
    ginny
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 15, 2007
    Chapter 4 is just great, I love the cliffy
    Can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ZoZuthePunisher on February 15, 2007
    was the star wars thing a joke? Because, the guy that did that was star trek.
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  • From NaomiSamurai on February 14, 2007
    I must say this story is very well written, and believable. Excellent job. I will be watching for updates, so keep up the good work and I look forward to where you will be taking us on this story. Too many times there are poorly written stories that recieve reviews, and not enough good ones get encouragement. Your grammar and structure is impressive, not to mention that you know how to form and create believable dialogue. Cheers... Oushiza

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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 14, 2007
    Another good chapter-- no EXCELLENT. Ya know I can almost see InuYasha in a call center hahhahahahaha, you wrote it so well.

    I can see him taking calls and getting pissed off and slamming his fist down, ramen noodles go everywhere, and he starts yelling at the person "Listen you JACKASS!"

    ROFLMAO!!!!!

    And Kikyo as a coke dealer/addict is a twist I really didn't expect but it lends well to the plot. Now its beginning to sound like MY life with the drug addict ex (in my case bf)who wont go away and pops up in all the wrong moments! So I am looking for more as soon as possible :)

    *goes off to work on Primal Scream*
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 14, 2007
    Kudos to chapter 3 I just love it
    I love how you did the back ground on
    Inuyasha and Kikyou, I can't wait till
    chapter 4. Will there be some back
    ground on Kagome? I know, I know
    read chapter 4. Anyways till next time
    stay cool;)
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 14, 2007
    Wow. You got this new chapter up fast. I really like this story so far. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hmmm... working two jobs. That's a lot of work. (Been there and done that around college as well.) I can't wait to see how he handles Kikyo. Is she just going to leave messages, or is she finally going to get aggressive?

    Well, good story.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on February 13, 2007
    ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT-- the plot is good and almost believeable! Great Job
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  • From kookookitty on February 13, 2007
    backwoods pennsylvania huh? i live in pittsburgh and yes, nothing goes on after 10pm if you're looking for anything to do other than in the city and immediate suburbs... unless you're willing or able to travel you will be stuck taking any grunt job you can find. realistic and well written.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 13, 2007
    This is a good story, I promise to follow this
    one. Can't wait till chapter 3.
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