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Reviews for Perfect Day

By : anterrian
  • From Sieg on September 10, 2008
    Well first of all this story was different. First off all i would have to believe that everyone here is OOC. How is it Inuyasha never talk? or the fact that Kagome becomes a god? You never explained anything at all. Before you write some more stories i would read some other look at the format, setup and plot. You really have a good idea here and it could go far. Seeing that it lacks just about every thing a true story needs it more of a rough draft i do hope that you revise this. Add more details a lot more Describe how she got her powers. Another thing beeing the feudal era why would Kagome go fishing that isn't her place. As sexist as it may seem back then it was the male job to provide for his pack. I could go on for days on how you could improve this story if not weeks. I do hope you really think about revising it because it could be a great story.

    ~~Sieg
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 06, 2007
    I love this story. But how and wehn did they have kids. How old is Inuyasha really. and Sesshomaru is over 330 yrs old when he mates with Rin how old is he now. And how did you know the age of Sesshomaru
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on February 14, 2007
    I love this story it was great. I can't wait till the sequel.
    Till next time stay cool ;)
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