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Reviews for Dark Carnival*Ch. 1 edited*

By : Pucedragon
  • From chanda on February 20, 2007
    I liked it... but I would have to agree...freak show...that's so harsh. But I understood why you used that term, in this story. Other than that, it's original and well thought out. Look forward to see where this is going.

    Until next time,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Cassie on February 20, 2007
    I love it. Finally, a story that is original. I hope you do continue it. Thanks for the great read. I thought that hardly anyone knew about creature feature. My best friend would love you.
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  • From ANON - No bunni on February 20, 2007
    wonderful more please
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  • From ANON - ferral on February 20, 2007
    this is such a great story, I hope you update it soon!
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  • From ANON - TapTheMemoryBank on February 20, 2007
    Yay! This is awesome, exciting, and dark! IT'S WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue when you have the time!
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  • From ANON - WickedLady21 on February 20, 2007
    Very good, can't wait till i see more!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on February 20, 2007
    It's an interesting idea so far (hoping there will be more). I would really like to see more of it. Please continue it.
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  • From seraphinaloire on February 20, 2007
    well as much as i'm offended by the use of the words "freak show" since i worked with a carnival and then for a french canadian circus most of my life we don't call it freak show anymore it's offensive as much as it used to be traditional it's now calle a side show many of my friends are part of the side shows and they to find offense to the once used terms "freak show"... that said i do like how this may be going and it's very well written... the barkers catch's aren't badly written but perhaps you could make it more catchy? other then that i like can't wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - kris on February 20, 2007
    PLEASE PLEASE update i have never read a carnaval fic as good as this one!
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  • From ANON - FushigiWolf on February 20, 2007
    This is a really good.. Ill be very interested to see where you take this!
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