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Reviews for Dark Carnival*Ch. 1 edited*

By : Pucedragon
  • From MsSpaceey on August 16, 2017

    Please come back and finish this story. It's an interesting and original start. 


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  • From Brassenaurian on December 10, 2007
    Very good so far. Please continue soon!
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  • From gaarafan64 on August 11, 2007
    dark creepy good though i wonder how will she escape please write the next chapter i beg of you *bows his head* your very good
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  • From Darkstarr on March 11, 2007
    omgg that was greaattt please continue i love the plot!
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  • From ANON - Katie on February 27, 2007
    I don't have an account on here yet, but I think this is a fresh new plot for the Inu-cast. I can't wait to see how this story turns out. (I'm also currently reading other stories of yours.)
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  • From Darkestfairyqueen on February 24, 2007
    oh i love it..
    i can't wait until the next chapter comes out.

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  • From Caitriona on February 22, 2007
    This story has an interested beginning. Kagome, Inu and the other "freaks" taking down the evil ringmaster could be a great story. With the darkness that you have implied here in the first chapter, you may get some descenters, but don't worry.

    Drop me a line when you decide to update.
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  • From ANON - suikidoen on February 22, 2007
    O.o omg this really does send shivers down my spine... but!! i'm hooked =3 agnst might not be my thing but meh a good horror/agnst fic is a good thing =). i shoulda known naraku was running this thing i'd be suprised if it wasnt..O.O
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  • From ANON - katie... on February 21, 2007
    i say, you should totally write the next chapter for this ASAP! but dont forget about the crow... unless you finshed it. i dont know, im sick, i dont remember if you did or not. but whatever. i like this story a lot so far :]] and the song
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  • From ANON - Emily on February 21, 2007
    i liked it keep it up
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  • From ANON - Luna Kat on February 21, 2007
    I really like what you have so far. Very dark and cool. I love how you used those lyrics for the carnival barkers. It really fit well. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - inusgirl on February 21, 2007
    what can i say, your story caught my eye right away. once i read i wanted more....soo keep going i can't wait for the other chapters. i guess you got another fan at your feet..GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
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  • From adambloodraven on February 21, 2007
    Interesting story, I am looking forward to reading more of it.
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  • From ANON - SakuraWings on February 21, 2007
    I like the suspense you've built up. I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Virgie on February 20, 2007
    Keep going i want to find out what happens very interesting very interesting but truth be told i would go to a carnival like that in a heart beat Freak show and all you know that Freak shows are actually illegal in most parts of the U.s. I don't know if it is all or most but its still illegal
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