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Reviews for The Lord and His Prince (Finshed)

By : Sephanie
  • From ANON - syndey on June 29, 2015
    Come on wheres the next chapter. You can't leave it like this I want to read more. Did sesshoumaru and inuyasha make it in time to save their pup? What happened to koga? Come on you can't leave the story like this. There is no way you could finish a story with that kind of ending. Thats a fucking cliffhanger. Readers hate cliffhangers.finish the story properly
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  • From ANON - syndey on March 04, 2015
    Come on next chapter don't leave your fans hanging
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on April 29, 2007
    inuyasha's an ass. he choses sess?? boooooooooo Kouga waits a thousand years for him, sess 'rapes' him for a thousand years and he chooses sess? makes no sense to me, nor did ur explanation of it but this story is chock full of twists so *gasps* maybe this is just another one! Boy i hope so. Come on inu make the right choice!! Oh and i think its about time someone had their way with sesshoumaru dagnabit! lol
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  • From setoswifey on April 22, 2007
    Oh wow...talk about drama! This should be interesting. I kinda think that Inuyasha was wrong, but I'm not writing the story, so keep up the good work.
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  • From nchsmi on April 20, 2007
    Whoa, talk about a plot twist! That one came out of nowhere! This just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter!~ B reading U!
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  • From setoswifey on April 02, 2007
    This story is great! I cant wait to read more soon! I was waiting for this chapter. Question, how many children does Inuyasha have total?
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  • From Qiana on March 20, 2007
    I love this poor kid Sesshoumaru is going to kill him, update soon
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  • From setoswifey on March 19, 2007
    This is sooooo good! I hope that sesshomaru doesnt kill poor Vale though. I cant wait to read more!
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  • From on March 10, 2007
    update soon
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  • From Qiana on March 09, 2007
    Wow so when Is Sess coming?

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  • From setoswifey on March 09, 2007
    Now this is bad...I feel bad for Vale though. Update soon!
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  • From Qiana on March 04, 2007
    That was good I feel sorry for the cubs though knowing Sesshoumaru he won't spare them
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  • From SilenceoftheHeart on March 02, 2007
    Oh my goodness, that was an angsty piece of work. And I love the angst;) Thanx so much for writing and sharing this with us. However, I have a bit of constructive critizism. And if it offends you, please delete the comment, write me a nasty email, and I promise I'll give ten reasons why your story's great. I think you could use a beta. In some areas the run-ons and word choices made the story hard to follow. Normally, I wouldn't say anything because I still enjoyed it but I really think your writing has alot of potential to be really, really great. And even the best writers out there use a beta. I don't because I'm a control freak and it makes my stories slow to release and not the best they could be. So I'm telling you from experience that a beta would be a great help both to me and to my readers. Please consider the idea, and if you have any questions, please let me know.

    And if I offended you, please yell at me. I really didn't want to,
    ~Silence~
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  • From dhur on March 02, 2007
    my my my what is inuyasha to do!?!?! HOW could sessh kill cubs!?!?!? KYAAAAAA lovely lovely, i like sessh, but he's just too evil to be killing cubs!! so i say kouga it is! Keep up the good work!!! I hope you update again soon!!! hehe two chappies thankieS!
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  • From setoswifey on March 01, 2007
    This was depressing. I felt so bad that All of Inuyasha's kids got killed. Is the rest of the story going to be this depressing? It was a good chapter though.
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