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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From ANON - sweetkijo on November 07, 2007
    ****It's Wednesday!!! I can't wait anymore....!! Pleeeeease I beg of you, I am at your mercy...give a humble fan the next chapter. I'm sure it is perfect...flawless....amazing!! You never leave us unimpressed.....and if anyone was, well they suck monkey balls!! Tee hee! Now go on and rawk my sawks...and load it up...whoooot can't wait!! = )
    Just another eager beaver fan.....lol

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  • From Sacredarrow22 on October 30, 2007
    I really like this story. It is so different from anything else I've ever read. Change is a good thing....I think it's why I like your story so much. I was getting bored reading pretty much the same old story over and over. I am amazed by your imagination. Keep up the great work! I cannot wait to find out what happens next!!!!
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  • From ANON - raven28 on October 19, 2007
    i just read ch 1-9 and i wont to tall you i love it and cant what for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    thank you for wrighting this it one ofthe best i have ever reade one here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From weyrdkat on October 17, 2007
    Okay, sorry I didn't do chapter by chapter reviews, but I've read everything you've posted so far (ch.9) and I say screw those who look for 'Hit and Run' reads. If I'm looking for that, I'll read PWP. Your story has a lot of substance and interesting depth to formerly two dimensional characters. And you know grammar. . .and you can spell! That in itself is an act of mercy and kindness. I look forward to the rest of your story.

    P.S. - Don't snub on the descriptions. You're doing great so far and with a world as incredible as this one, the little details go a long way to bring the story to life for all of us!
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  • From mariana on October 17, 2007
    when are you gonna do the next chapter
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  • From Sesshoumarulover21 on October 16, 2007
    Hey I was wondering when you will post a new chapter? We've already read this one were you just editing? I am glad to see you are still out there it's been a while since we've heard from you. I hope all is well I assume uncontrolable circumstances kept you from posting. I really like this story it's very orginal.
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  • From rowdygirl on October 14, 2007
    so good, so very good. and it is so logical and real in its flow. i love your tale, it really does flow like a river. but i bet that kagome could use a good cry. i know that i did.
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  • From mariana on October 10, 2007
    when is the next chapter comming
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  • From missiemae on October 08, 2007
    i love this story, so i hope you didn't give up on it. but this is not a review to rush you... =] i can't wait for the next chapter and i hope everything is going well... amazing story.
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  • From sweetkijo on October 03, 2007
    I just wanted to check in. This story is amazing. I think me and all of the entire fan-fiction addicts here are wanting to know..."Where the hell ya been??" We are missing you and this story something fierce. Ok, maybe its me, but hey..can you blame me?? I got no problem stating Im an addict. Anywayz, I really do hope everything is alright on your side of the world. I just wanted you to know I am thinking of you. Hope to read you soon, because my hentai ass is starvin for some hentai.....
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  • From ANON - Enola on September 29, 2007
    fantastic story so far! I love it, plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - janny on September 11, 2007
    you have a wonderfully illustrated story going on here. super props for the originality. i can't wait to read what happens next! please update soon!
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  • From on September 05, 2007
    Oh wow!! I love this story.. this is currently my favorite story on this site. The story plot is kickass and I simply adore the way you went about making your own little world and even your own way of explaining how Inuyasha got the was he is. Hell! I simply just LOVE the story. I can't wait for more updates!
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  • From drake220 on September 02, 2007
    first off, i really am enjoying this story. it's wonderful and i appreciated all the detail work that went into the settings.
    there are two things I have to say and please be aware that neither is a flame:
    1) this world is almost silly, it's so utopian. it reminds a lot of the hippie commune ideals of the '60s with a healthly appreciation of consumerism. that's not to say i don't appreciate it- i think as an element of a story it's fine. but no conflict? no arguements at all that aren't solved in a tribunal? maybe you just have a more optimistic world view than I do but put a lot of people together and there is bound to be some conflict. people fight, are violent, cheat, steal and react instead of thinking things through. it's human nature. a conflict could just be a different viewpoint about an oath but to have everyone obeying the rules just kind of makes no sense. the screening process can only work so much (and besides, the city seems pretty expensive. those guards can't be getting paid that much. a few bribes accepted here and there and viola! criminals enter the city). However I will say that i do see foreshadowing with that naraku and the white prince thing that might hint at some past conflit so maybe this long drawn out statement is premature.
    2) love the way you've presented the characters. every one of them has their own original...flavor? presentation? whatever. something about the way you've reimagined these really well known characters is really, really well done. the fact that naraku isn't a villan straight off the bat is alone worthy of praise. 3 dimensional characters in fan fiction land are very rare. kagome is realistic and not saint-like-to-the-point of-stupidity. but most of all inuyasha is a joy! he's happy sometimes! it's great. no one- not even a king of angst- can stay miserable 24/7. inu is fantastic. i'm falling in love with him all over again.
    great job
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  • From Shaid on September 02, 2007
    That was a really great chapter. I loved the time progression. I'm really looking forward to reading more! Great work.
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