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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From ANON - inuyashanut on September 01, 2007
    me love dis
    pls pls update again soon
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  • From ANON - Qt on September 01, 2007
    WOW. I love this story. The new setting is a great idea. I especially like the slow progression of the characters. Your not having them just jump into something. Which is nice sometimes but it really adds something to your story. Love it lots. please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - redrose on August 30, 2007
    I absolutely adore this story! You write such longer chapters than some authors, and believe me, it is much appreciated.
    In reguards to the plot, pertaining to Naraku and this "white prince", I have a sneaking suspicion that it is Miroku? Am I right! x]
    One thing about the setting though, it's so amazingly detailed that i'd had a bit of a hard time imagining it all. So I attempted to make a sketch (or many sketches) but all seemed rather, lacking [stares at many crumpled paper balls near trash].
    Keep it up!
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  • From rowdygirl on August 30, 2007
    don't worry about the readers who are in it for the quick thrill. give me a good story every time! something that captures my imagination and involves me on all levels. something that makes me ask: "where is the author taking this? How will it move forward? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!"

    i thoroughly enjoying this tale you're weaving and i encourage you to go at your own pace, otherwise how will you create the magic?

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  • From bluedragonkai on August 30, 2007
    Oh my god... I love this story. I've been reading it all day and it just took me away. At first I was a little weary, but now I'm defentily hooked on it. Your a great writer. Dont you dare stop writing.
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  • From ANON - amanda on August 30, 2007
    I love, love LOVE ittt :)
    Keep writing, your storys are amazing.
    ----Amandawithaheart
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  • From ANON - BakaUsagi on August 30, 2007
    Tehehe. Inuyasha's having quite the difficult figuring poor Kagome out. I'm rather enjoying watching him become frustrated over her actions. And it's rather a shame you've decided that Sesshoumaru won't be paying a visit to your story. When you had had Naraku first mention his friend who became the white prince I almost thought for a second it could have been Sesshoumaru. Now it just looks like I'll have to wait to see who this mystery person is. Also it's quite refreshing to have Naraku as a gentleman here in your story. Most stories, he's always the cruel hearted villian so this is really an interesting turn of events for his character. Oh and please don't worry about not having any naughtiness in the story thus far. Many stories here sometimes don't even get to the so called "porn" part until much much much later in the stories. So your quite fine with where your heading. A story that has an ACTUAL plot to it in my mind has a much better quality to it then the ones that are just straight up porn. So please don't feel worried over such a sily issue. We all know your leading us up to the part where it'll be possible for such things to occur. For now, just concentrate on how you want the story to progress and we'll just wait. At least, that's how I feel about it but, I hardly speak for the reviewers as a whole. ^_^;

    Anyway, I'm highly looking forward to Chapter 10. I'm very sorry for not reviewing Chapter 9 but, I was quite sick at the time of it's release so I didn't have time to really read or review it. But thank you so much for replying to my review. That very much made my day. Take care and good luck in school, I know how difficult it is balancing both fanfiction and school work. :D
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  • From MiharuKawashi on August 30, 2007
    I accidentally ran into this story tonight and can't say I'm too upset that I did. Great update. I like how Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship is slowly maturing. You're not rushing the relationship which is a good thing. I find that many stories that end up doing so have a hard time developing a well rounded plot. You have a good pace; don't speed it up for a quicker entry for smut. Quality over quantity any day. Ja ne!
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  • From kookookitty on August 29, 2007
    i don't know... introspection can be a necessary part of a narration in a character's development. giving the reader insights into the motivations and growth processes makes for a more realistic and rounded character. i didn't think that this chapter was overloaded with introspection, it was IMO essential to the development of the plot and to yasha and kagome's relationship... all in all it was rather entertaining.

    a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From szaugg on August 29, 2007
    Youg know, it's always sad when one, say, misses an update. seems like it's been far too long. But then, I get the wonderful two chapters in a row time!
    yeee haa! I enjoyed the 2 chapters, I like how the characters are going...and luv inuyasha the perv boy. I'm so excited to see what happens next.
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  • From kittenclaws on August 23, 2007
    awesome truly awesome love it great plot and all that I'd kiss your feet but I don't like feet so I'll just bow and say job well done love the damn story. Ciao Kittenclaws
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  • From MiharuKawashi on August 18, 2007
    Interesting story so far. I love all the details you have put into this society. Personally I enjoy stories that focus primarily on the back story. It's rare to see any online stories that put much thought into anything other than the personal relationships between the main players. Overall you have a good balance in this story. I look forward to your next update. Ja ne!
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  • From kookookitty on August 15, 2007
    when emory comes back will he getting his position back?

    seems yash is subconsciously playing the 'flower petal' game except it's: i want her here/i don't want her here. i want her to be comfortable/i want her to be miserable. i hate her/i have 'feelings' for her. etc.

    i am so happy that you are writing this; there are a few authors like you out there who write with substance, with a perspective of the characters' emotions, motivations, personalities... who's descriptions are so rich in detail that the world, the characters, emotions, actions become real, take shape, are experienced and felt. alas, most readers are looking for a quick thrill and don't want to invest the intelligence and effort to read works of art that have literary worth. i am awed and excited by the power, the magic of the written word to transform the letters on a page to the reality of the author's imagination. i search for those authors/master artists, and in your work i have found one of them.

    thank you for sharing this journey through your imagination.
    ginny
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  • From Silent Pluto on August 15, 2007
    ouch*
    Poor kagome, i know living with Inu is gonna be
    torture, those two set each other off!
    Update soon k?
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  • From serendith on August 14, 2007
    I was reading your review responses and I have to agree that a great deal of the "good" stories seem to go unnoticed. I stumble upon one now and again always wondering how I missed it and how it never got recognized! As for detail, I for one LOVE the reality you are giving your universe. It makes everything more believable and much more interesting. I am really curious as to where this is going to go! Thanks for the update!!! And thanks for keeping us informed on your userinfo ... I admit to being a twitchy reader. I try to never say "update soon!" or some other such command because I realize that you aren't getting paid and have (*gasp*) a life - yet I practically stalk the stories I am reading.
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