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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From ANON - ZK on July 22, 2007
    Uh-Oh...I have a bad feeling 'bout Kag's Work...Oh!!! Please, Please! Pretty Please! Update!!! If u have it already done please download Ch. 8!! I wanna know what happens next!!! *extremely curious* This story is awsome *-* Please keep writing as good as u have done 'til now!!! *Sorry 4 bad English LOL*
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  • From roxaas on July 20, 2007
    Great new chapter can't wait for the next!!!!!
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  • From AnimeLady04 on July 19, 2007
    This was good but it makes me wonder how deep Kagome got herself into. Will the evil follow her to her uncles place? What will she tell Sango? What things will InuYasha make her do? He wants to humiliate her I can see that but how far will he go? Will he go too far and hurt her? Will he regret hurting her? What will her uncle say?
    Great story so far! Please write more ASAP.
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  • From JLucPitard on July 19, 2007
    Not entirely satisfied with their first real meeting. It's unclear why she wouldn't smack him down for being so petulant. There's plenty of time for that, I guess, but it looks like she has a lot of reasons to accept his anger but challenge him on his behavior. There's no real reason for her to accept the position. Perhaps it would've helped to see some of that exchange through his eyes or to hear her voice some reason beyond not wanting to degrade herself vs the status quo. Anyway, it sets up an interesting scenario and I trust your writing to pull it off.
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  • From ANON - blue_girl on July 19, 2007
    Hey there, I haven't reviewed before but I've been with this story since the first chap. I like this story so I was waiting to see where it was going. I also wanted to check the consistancy of the author, hehe, cuz you know, some authors start great stories but never finish them -_- not to say im expecting updates every week or anything! lol, anyway! I loved chap 7, I was laughing almost the entire time! I barely know Emory but I love him already! I'm glad Inuyasha has a stress reliever, espeically with his temper. -“No!” came a shout from the darkness. “No drink! She’s not a welcome guest. Don’t be nice to her!”- That was especially my favorite part, lol. can't wait for next chap! Happy Writting ^_^
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  • From kookookitty on July 19, 2007
    i can see kagome taking some of his crap but i can also see her with a temper... she may be his personal lackey but canon kagome has a mouth, a temper and some attitude under the sweet-as-pie / girl-next-door facade... one would have to be made of some really strong stuff to work undercover doing what she had to do. i hope you show some of it.

    hope you didn't get too drunk. glad you enjoyed them!

    a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - White Rabbit on July 18, 2007
    I find myself looking to see if you have updated A Fool's Redemption everday because I love this story soooooo much!! Your descriptions of the scenes captivate me and I love how you have kept the characters unique to the personalities found in Inu Yasha but have also made them your own. I look forward to reading the next chapter and the ones that follow it! ^^
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  • From ANON - BakaUsagi on July 18, 2007
    I've just started reading your story and I must say I've now become so completely and utterly fascinated by your writing style. The AU world in which your story takes place is indeed a very interesting world. And I'm very much in love with the city you've built in your story. I actually would like very much to vacation there maybe one day. :D

    I am though a tiny bit sadden that 'the kid' Inuyasha has been refering to wasn't Shippou. I think he would have made a very good nanny for him. He just seems like the only prefect candidate who could possibly put up with Inuyasha long enough to stay sane. Oh well, your story.

    I'm also a bit curious, but is Inuyasha truly the only who escaped from that place alive? I mean, you've mentioned that he was, but surely there must have been at least one more who managed to escape right? Finally, I'm starting to feel a bit sorry for Kagome after reading chapter 7. If Inuyasha's currennt nanny was that eager to leave then surely life with Inuyasha won't be pleasant at all, not one little bit. I'm very much eager for chapter 8, can't wait for your next update.
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  • From szaugg on July 18, 2007
    wish I had more time to review, but at least I can say I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the rest quite a bit.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 18, 2007
    Great chapter can not wait until the next one comes out. When will Inuyasha break down and show his feelings to Kagome. Update really soon.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 18, 2007
    Great hapter can not wait until the next one comes out. When will Inuyasha break down and show his feelings to Kagome. Update really soon
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  • From ANON - Lady Rain on July 18, 2007
    Oo what a meeting that one was! Poor Kagome. i was wondering why the boy was suddenly so eager to hand the job over to her too. I'll bet Inuyasha is gonna be just downright mean to get back at her. I hope she doesn't break from his treatment. Wait'll Sango hears about it too. Man oh man.
    Okay update soon, please please please?


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  • From ANON - Trigger on July 13, 2007
    wow. this is realy good I just have two Q's. what happened to her parints/family? why didn,t she come to the city earlier? well thats it and I just want to say that i think you are a really great writer. I like the way you put so much detail and beauty into what you write it remindes me of the book "of Mice and Men" crapy book but, great details (not that your story,s crapy).Thats all I wanted to say ceep up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - Broccoli... on July 11, 2007
    IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!! BUT YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Yasha3393 on July 03, 2007
    love it
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