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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From missiemae on July 02, 2007
    I've been itching for a really good InuKag story cause it seems i've run out, and then i stumble upon yours. This has an amazing plot and a story that I've been looking for. I know the whole story is going to be a good read! I like it so much this far! Hope you update soon. =]
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  • From AnimeLady04 on June 30, 2007
    Write more please! Thsi is getting intresting, I will check up on your story often to see when you update it. Please update it soon I am very intrestead to see what the next chapter will lead too.
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  • From ANON - Duresce on June 30, 2007
    I've always managed to pass by your story while surfing the net. My only regret is that I did not read this sooner. Descriptive scenery and romance are a couple of my weaknesses in the fanfiction world both of which are well developed in A Fool's Redemption. The plot is moving along quite nicely and hope that another chapter will appear in the near future.
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  • From sweetkijo on June 28, 2007
    The chapter was great. It explained so much and I know there is still so much to learn. The story is coming along amazingly and I am enjoying every minute of it. Thank you for writing it..oh and I especially enjoy the long chapter. Sometimes when they are short, by the time you are into it, its over. Thanks again, til next time, take care! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - inuyasharoks on June 28, 2007
    This is a really good story and I can't wait until it is finished! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 28, 2007
    I enjoyed the chapter. Will Naraku be an issue between Kagome and Inuyasha?? I can not wait until the next one.
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  • From StrawberryFusion on June 28, 2007
    I'm loving the story, I kind of feel bad for Kagome though, Keep up the good work, can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From kookookitty on June 28, 2007
    sometimes to effectively bring down an operation such as the research facility in your story, for the persons involved and working undercover to collect enough evedence and proof to satisfy the courts takes a whole lot of time. the persons working undercover at the risk of their own lives have to sometimes 'sleep with the devil' so to speak, to do terrible things to keep suspicion off themselves.

    i can't see yasha just listening to her right away... and what's so wrong with feeling guilty for the bad stuff she had to do to bring those responsible for such evil to justice? she did have to inflict such pain to him and the other subjects, something completely against her nature.

    i suppose naraku is a bad guy here too?

    the imagry, scenery, characters, emotion... like a master craftswoman, weaving threads of many colors, artfully creating a beautiful tapestry each chapter giving shape and form.

    a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece and encouragement to continue:

    ::ginny's rum balls::

    ~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough
    ~mix in: tons of mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum
    ~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good)

    because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk >=P

    always a pleasure!
    ginny
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  • From shatterwing on June 12, 2007
    I love how you've set up such a surreal sort of world!
    I can't wait to see how things with Inu and Kagome work out in
    such a different reality then what I'm used to reading.

    Just one question,
    Is Miroku going to pop up in here somewhere??
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  • From MariamBriar on June 09, 2007
    WOW!! Okay I am in love with this story now. Poor Kagome, what a terrible way to meet up with Inuyasha all of a sudden like that. But now the ice is broke, so to speak, what shall he do? I hope their next meeting is much better, and maybe a little longer, yes?

    Update soon!! I'm coming back to check this one often!
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  • From JLucPitard on June 09, 2007
    Nice scene and I love the idea of the dance hall. Ball's in Inuyasha's court, sort of.
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  • From thundara2002 on June 09, 2007
    i love this story please update soon
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  • From Kinyana on June 08, 2007
    Awsome chapter. Keep up the great work!
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  • From kookookitty on June 08, 2007
    wow, with the descriptions!

    yeah, to only know that person in such a painful setting and then find he's holding her... could have been worse, it could have been a very violent reaction. the natural animal instinct is fight or flight... recognition > shock > flight

    a cliff

    i am left

    somewhat

    unfulfilled.

    and wanting more.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - mistykid94 on June 04, 2007
    hay, great story so far. i can't wait 'til the next chapter. please write more soon. :D
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