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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From szaugg on June 04, 2007
    nicely thought out world, nice set up, and yes...-please post the angst soon. please
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  • From inuyashaloverr on June 04, 2007
    I'm liking this. Just from the first chap alone, I'm liking this. Its very well written, gives enough of a hint of suspense to keep ya at the edge there, lol. Grammar/punctuation is on the money, and over all, a very enjoyable read. Now, on to the next chap. ;)
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  • From IAgree on June 03, 2007
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! You don't know how much I have waited for the next chapter to come up! Every day I checked and every day that it wasn't there I teared up a bit. For the past few days I forced myself not to look (watched water doesn't boil you know!). When I saw that it was up I nearly peed my pants! I didn't... But I did do my happy 'yay-there's-another-chapter-up' dance!

    Yay with the detail! I heart it! And all the information one must take in... I was right there with Kagome! Overwhelming! I read it several times just to make sure I didn't confuse anything. That's good though. It forces me to concentrate entirely on the story instead of reading it and watching tv (among several other things) at the same time like I'm known to do. (Heh heh... must stop that habit...) I was wondering about the old peoples too. I would have felt horrible if there wasn't a place for them. You thought of everything haven't you? Down to the last detail! I heart detail. I thought I was there for a moment by the waterfall (preeeetty! I'd be there the entire day!).

    You are an example to all with your lovely writing and I will again impatiently wait for the next chapter (YAY! Meeting!) I hope it's up soon or I'll cry! (I don't think that'll convince you... but it's worth a try eh?)

    Please Regard Me Kindly,
    I Agree

    P.S. I'm glad you find me humorous! I'm probably the least funny person in my family so that's interesting to hear. And the same thing happened to me too. Except my friend it was my friend doing something stupid on the computer next to me(I don't even remember what) that made me laugh. I was chuckling so much through the entire class that my teacher had to send me out. *Sigh* I got a detention that day... but I don't think it was for that... hmm.
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  • From JLucPitard on June 03, 2007
    Enjoying the AU you're working to develop. Pity that utopias can't exist in real life, isn't it? I hope you're pointing to a Sango/Miroku mystery with her coment about someone leaving. So... onto chap 5?
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  • From kookookitty on June 03, 2007
    wow, i can only think of two or three movies that were based on a sort of 'dome technology' pauly shore's 'bio dome' and 'logan's run'. your's is much more discriptive and magnificant than either of those.

    i was so happy to finally see a chapter four, i had been waiting and wondering when you were going to update, and you say you have chapter five?!?! soon?
    *does a little happy dance*

    a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From Kinyana on June 03, 2007
    wow. Great story so far. I hope that the next chapter will be be posted soon. I can't wait to see what kind of surprises that Sango's got up her sleve.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 03, 2007
    I really enjoyed your story so far. I can not wait until you update again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2007
    I enjoyed your story very much. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon.
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  • From szaugg on June 02, 2007
    so glad it's continuing. looking forward to more. like how kag. and sango interact
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  • From IAgree on April 17, 2007
    I guess it would be kind of creepy to say 'I love you' BUT I DO! You are awesome and I heart you! I went to read the next chapter but it wasn't there! I had a temper tantrum! I am very eager to see how Inu-Yasha and Kagome meet next, it's bound to be rough and tense. XD.

    I don't think that I have read another fanfiction like yours. Your work is very original. (Then again I am an avid KagomeXSesshou-Maru (Don't kill me!) so this really is a breath of fresh air for me (too much of the Icicle Prince lately)) Your writing flows very nicely, so it's easier to read than a lot of fanfiction that I have read which makes me quite happy! Hats off to you!

    I eagerly await your next chapter and hope that it isn't too long in coming.

    Please Regard Me Kindly,
    I Agree
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  • From kookookitty on March 22, 2007
    yash is a playa! it's interesting that he can be so trusting and allow the groping attentions of those women after being subjected to whatever was involved in being a research lab animal... it must have taken a good while to get used to it.

    sango must be wondering what type of relationship he and kagome had in the past... his condition in the pic any indication.

    good job!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From EternalTwylight on March 17, 2007
    Absolutely wonderful, so well written and the plotline is intriguing. Your descriptions are fluid and invoke very strong imagery. It has a very nice sci-fi-ish feeling to me, I can't wait to read more. Infact... UPDATE please!!! *snickers softly* Will any other cannon characters be making an appearance? I do hope so and I'll be interested to see how they fit into this new world. Please keep up the excellent work, I'll definately be checking back for this fic and looking into your other works. I love your style of writing, very eloquent.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 17, 2007
    WOW! Im impressed-- and I love! I hope to see an update soon, this is so well written and so very well thought out! Im in awe!
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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on March 11, 2007
    Wow! Intense. Very descriptive. Good work. I'm hooked.
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  • From Shaid on March 10, 2007
    great second chapter. It is a lot of exposition, but it's done wonderfully. I'm looking forward to more.
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