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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From szaugg on March 07, 2007
    woo hoo. I liked the chapter just fine. Nice to know what's going on and such. I can hardly wait to see what happens when they meet! And if the lecher is here for sango, and so on and so forth...
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  • From kookookitty on March 07, 2007
    wow, yash might just rip her throat out without giving her a second thought, let alone a chance to explain herself. risking her life to shut down the facility and stop those responsible only to lose it at the hands of the one she was instrumental in saving...

    still descriptive, the background story had to be told and it was quite interesting.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From Shaid on March 04, 2007
    This is a great start. I'm really interested in seeing what happenes next. The plot seems interesting and unique so far. Is this world post-apacolyptic or just war torn? Was that Inuyasha covered in blood? Why is Kagome in hiding and who is her uncle? Is she safe in this city? I get the sense there's something darker going on in the city, for some reason.

    I hope I get to see an update from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Jaedis on March 01, 2007
    You've definitely got me intreagued with your storyline so far. Please do continue on with this story and do update soon!
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  • From ladykaa28 on February 28, 2007
    So far it seems that you have gotten off to a good start. I have read a story line like what you are writing about just yet. I could be wrong, but we'll see.
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  • From kookookitty on February 28, 2007
    wonderful imagry, i can recall the dream, the plane ride, the entrance into the city, the structures, colors, designs... eloquently described, so vivid, so detailed! no longer black and white words on a screen but taking shape becoming real.

    i was captivated, intreiged and i am eagerly anticipating more.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From magrettbones on February 28, 2007
    Dude this is so cool !!!!! rock on biznatch (jk)!!!!!
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  • From szaugg on February 28, 2007
    it looks very interesting. I am enjoying the writing style, and the plot has introduced just enough that I'm definitely curious about what has happened and what will happened, so I hope to see more soon!
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  • From chanda on February 28, 2007
    I like it so far. Pretty good start for being your first. Welcome to Aff and hope to see another chapter soon.

    Chanda
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