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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear

From ANON - rowdysgirl on August 30, 2011
This chapter was incredibly excellent! I rejoice that Naraku didn't get away. However, you are going to start a sequel???? This is the last chapter until the sequel???? *Begins to drool and pant towards hysteria* Does this mean MORE WAITING????? *runs screaming through the house disturbing the neighbors* WE HAVE TO WAIT TO FIND IF KAGOME IS OKAY????? *gets tripped by cat who immediately smacks her repeatedly until she regains her sense*

Whatever. I will read and enjoy the re-write and I will wait for more of the story, however you choose to package it. Just be prepared to deal with my insane rages. *le sigh* I must rest now and re-read everything... insane rages are soooo exhausting!
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From Vyper on August 27, 2011
I love this story, I only hope that there is some sex scenes in the next chapter or sequil. Gotta see Inuyasha getting it on with Kagome ya know.
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From SplendentGoddess on August 27, 2011
Yay! I'm so happy to see that you haven't abandoned this fic! I also really like how you ended up handling this chapter. For a second there I feared that Naraku was going to get away so I'm glad that Inuyasha snapped out of it and took Naraku out NOW, once and for all. Hopefully Kagome will be okay. Looking forward to the next chapter...and sequel! :-)
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From ANON - Andrea on August 10, 2011
I love love love this story so much. I check it to frequently hoping for an update! Your ability to make me feel what the characters are feeling, especially those feelings of dread is something that I adore. Keep it up!
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From whiteluna on July 22, 2011
amazing5tarapplause and all that jazz. Love it
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From jaimed1979 on July 13, 2011
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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From ANON - rowdysgirl on July 08, 2011
WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can you stop it there?????? *throws self around the room* EEEEEEEK!!!! I MUST know what HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2011
Keep going!!!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
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From cukid9 on June 28, 2011
Miroku! What?! Lol. Loved that surprise at the end. And I'm stoked that Inu is on his way back!

The end of this chapter might have been dialogue heavy, but the beginning, with Inu, was full of absolutely lovely prose. Your descriptions there were quite nice.

Pfft, I never plot anything out before I start writing--I just jump in and pray it will all work itself out in my head eventually, so I understand the need to sit and think about things for awhile before getting them all written down. I'm glad to know what all this business with Naraku is about, though. And, as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

~cu-kid

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From danivicci on June 24, 2011
While I have always been an avid reader I never thought I would be reading fanfiction. At least, not until four years ago when I found myself in need of the ending that hadn�t yet come to inuyasha and thus I became acquainted with it. I soon began devouring a plethora of distinctive stories that followed these character archetypes that I�d grown a strong fondness for. I went through and read the majority of the well written inu-kag stories on this site as well as some others on mediaminer and another private one. Rather quickly I learned that the alternate universe stories were really the only ones I was interested in. After all, there are only so many ways Takahashi�s story could be continued without other writers doing virtually the same thing. AU on the other hand has endless potential.

From all of the Inuyasha fanfiction I�ve read, I can honestly say that A Fool�s Redemption is the most unique AU in this genre. While there is a nicely sized grouping of stories that can also be classified as unique, yours is truly something special. You�ve gone the extra mile to fashion a world for your story that really sets it apart. You�ve created a full bodied narrative that is well written, hashed out and completely your own.

It�s been at least two+ years since I grew out of the need to read these stories and while I�ve started a few of the newer ones, there are only five authors who have continually been able to keep that spark alive for me. If it weren�t for this story and shades of gray I would have stopped checking in to this site a long time ago.

I absolutely love your story, especially your take on how Inuyasha came to be & how Kagome found herself connected to him. Even though that all happened in the past and the story penned for us deals specifically with the aftermath, it�s a very strong foundation that has given way to a beautifully crafted story. I genuinely appreciate all the effort and time you put into your work, thank you for sticking with it for so long. I can�t tell you how excited I get when I come on here and see that you�ve put out a new chapter. It really makes my day, even when the end of it leaves me yearning for the next one.

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From ANON - kit on June 23, 2011
well, suprise suprise....miroku is one of naraku's assistants. definitely didnt see that! why's he so ....mean? cant wait for the next chapter!!
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From ANON - smittin kittin on June 21, 2011
i'm one of those consistently silent readers... shame on me for not reviewing, i'm working on that. ok, on to the review! i have to say as much as i've loved this story from the start it's so much more intriguing than i expected. What at the start seemed to be a pretty straight forward tale of redemption found & love revealed is riddled with plot twists & character depth i hadn't initially expected. i'm hooked an eagerly await the full unraveling of this riveting story. Thanks for sharing.
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From ANON - jai on June 19, 2011
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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From ANON - BewareFlyingMonkeys on June 17, 2011
I totally guessed that that was Miroku the first time he was described! But then I thought that it was weird that he was working for Naraku and was so un-Miroku-like, so I blew off the idea... Oh well. What's going on with him?! I'm so curious. I was checking almost every day for an update and now it looks like I'm going to be doing that again because of the cliff hanger. :) I can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the good work!!
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From Vyper on June 16, 2011
I love this story with its twists and turns! Please update soon!
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