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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear

From ANON - Inuyashaloverr on May 24, 2011
So far one of the best stories ive ever read! Although i may add, its realy frustrating when you get to the end of the chapters with no conclusion to the storie and see the last update was in march! T.T but i truly understand where you come from, having to deal with the problems in life its hard enough sometimes you dont feel like doing anything else than sleeping lol, but think of this, i ve been a inu fan since 01, went through all the bullshit.of having the series cut at half, read.the manga saw the rest of the series and movies, moved from famdom to fandom seeking the feeling of having my favorite characters alive in a realy good storie, got in trouble a couple of times at work for using my phone when im not suppose to O.o, you got your game to numb your brain, now in my 20-ish years i got these stories as part of my major brain stimulator/stay-home-away-from-the-world-and-read. I hope you feel better with all this, there s still some of us who love the saga and look foward to the update, by the way i started reading yours 3 days ago, the cliffhanger is killing me but take your time, organize your life, stay healthy and clear your mind... Just dont take too long! >.< please update! (haha! If i didnt push lil a the end i wouldnt be a fan now wouldnt i? Lol)
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From ANON - EveDallas on April 12, 2011
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! I am soo happy you finally updated. I know how it is to have too many things happen one after another. I love this installment. I really really wanted to know how all that happened and i got my wish. Keep writing! I keep checking on you every so often to see if you have updated. I wont leave :D
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From ANON - BewareFlyingMonkeys on April 10, 2011
Wow, your fic is great! I just started it a few days ago and couldn't stop reading. I am very impressed with your writing, your originality, use of detail, and the fact that you have done a very good job keeping people in character. I look forward to reading more.
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From cukid9 on April 05, 2011
*gasps* I don't think I reviewed the chapter previous! Shame on me! Well, suffice it to say, I'm still loving this story. Whenever I read it, I'm always amazed at how effortless your dialogue and prose feel (even though it may not feel that way to you when you're writing it :)). This newest wrinkle in their lives has me hoping that Inu will find a loophole in everything so he can come back, kick Naraku in the butt and have his happily ever after with Kagome.

On the other hand, if it winds up that SHE'S the one who gives Naraku what's coming to him, that would be so much better :) Methinks she and Sango may have a plan...

It excites and saddens me that this story will be coming to an end soon--I wanna know what happens, but I don't want to stop reading! I, like many other of your readers I'm sure, would not complain in the slightest if you decided to do a sequel or spinoff.

Lovely work, as always!

~cu-kid
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From AngelEvie on April 05, 2011
I really like the story! :) I hope you get a chance to update soon, and would love to be on the list to be e-mailed about updates.
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From ANON - lucy on April 04, 2011
i was so incredibly happy when i saw the new chapter!!! I havnt been on AFF in soo long because authors havnt finised their stories but when i came back and checked i immediatly clicked your story and i loved it!! I hope everything in your life sorts out and just wanted to let you know you havnt lost all of your readers :) hope you can finish this story w.o waiting 6 months to update XD
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From ANON - Kat on March 29, 2011
Grumble -- welcome back! Sorry to hear about all your personal life troubles. I hope everything starts to look up for you. Really glad to have you back updating. I've been desperately trying to wait patiently. Lots more darkness and angst in these chapters, but I can see where it fits in beautifully with what you've already tried to create. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out. I'll be here waiting!
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From ANON - Rocky on March 19, 2011
I'm still around =) I love the story and as always I loved the update! I've been waiting for an update forever! but I understand that life can take us on turns that we would rather not go on. I hope that you keep your eye on the end and make it fantastic! I'm going to reread this story from the start so I can remember the start of it =) Dont make me wait too long for the conculsion! Thanks for the update!
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From ANON - Ashley on March 17, 2011
I love this story. hope you continue soon
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From Vyper on March 15, 2011
I seriously hope that someone kills Naraku and soon. Poor Kagome and Inuyasha. They had come so far together and now that asshole is tearing them apart. I just hope that Kagome is safe and that somehow Inuyasha will come back for her.
By the way I love all the chapters you have written so far, I just couldn't review them one at a time since they only let you review a story one time. Anyway, I look forward to your next update.
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From JLucPitard on March 14, 2011
This reader cheered when I saw an update, so I'm not lost due to long update times... 'Course I'm not the quickest to update my work, so I never complain about others. It's a hobby for heaven's sake!! Or an obsession, depending on how you look at it.

On to my review:
Wow! Things look bleak. I keep holding on to Sango and Kagome's chat and hoping they know whet the heck they're doing because she just let her greatest asset take a long walk and he might not be coming back. Mind you, since we need some butt kicking as well as some good smexing, I know you'll find a way to make it work out and for Naraku to get his bottom spanked something fierce.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this and also for things to get better in your personal life.

JLP
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From SplendentGoddess on March 14, 2011
Fear not! You haven't lost all of your readers! Although I did decide to take your advice and switch websites in light of MM's recent problems. I was pleased to see that you're updating your story equally on all sites at the same time, so that one reader doesn't get a head start over somebody else. Sorry to hear about your mesh of issues over the last six months, but I'm really glad you're back to this story! I'm not worried about Inuyasha getting exiled. One, he now at least knows the truth behind Kagome's kiss with Naraku, and so therefore he is no longer fighting his feelings for her...that's good in and of itself. Two, Kagome was clearly aware enough of what was happening to know why Inuyasha fled, and so there won't be any manipulation of abandonment issues. Three, Kagome knows...and in fact did know from the beginning...that she was tripped by that wire, and her and Sango are plotting something of their own. Presumably Sango knew that Naraku wanted to get rid of Inuyasha, and since it's not personal - since Naraku didn't kill him but merely chased him out of town, because he was 'in the way' - then we know Naraku's main goal is probably just taking over the city. Since Sango already knows this and told Kagome, who agreed to play along for Inuyasha's sake, it seems to me that Inuyasha could have been in greater danger than merely being exiled had Naraku's scheming not gone according to plan. The flaw in Naraku's plan, of course, is that he thinks with Inuyasha out of the way he will be able to do whatever it is he's trying to do without any further resistance. I'm sure when everything's said and done, if Inuyasha hasn't already decided to sneak back in for fear of doing so putting Kagome at risk, then Kagome will head out into the wilds herself to look for him after Naraku's been taken care of. And I know it's been a while, but wasn't there somebody else who had left never to come back? Another prince? Someone Sango had alluded to but never explained in detail? Is Inuyasha going to meet up with Miroku? Was he also drummed out of town by Naraku? I guess I'll need to go back and refresh my memory on some of the details, but I remember enough to know that I love this story! Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - Youuu on March 14, 2011
UPDATED!!!!! wow, I thought you were never going to come back to this even though I check once every few weeks! Glad to hear you're back and will keep writing :)
I really enjoyed reading this story so thanks! Sorry I don't have time to say anything more, but again, I'm super glad to see you're updating again.
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From ANON - anonymosity on March 14, 2011
I can't tell you how thrilled I was to see another chapter! I am so caught up in your story! I've been checking nearly every day for the past coupla months, just hoping for an update! (And less often before that. LOL) I'm not surprised to see that you've won awards for this story, as it's quite well written and very entertaining. Whether or not you do an update, I'm glad to see you back and hope life settles down some for you! (I can relate to the hectic-ness. Not fun :P) I am curious to see if Inuyasha meets the missing Prince, though I seem to recall you saying he wouldn't be in this story. (?)

Looking forward to more!

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From ANON - Judy on March 14, 2011
I am not someone who reviews much fan fiction but I read a lot of it.
You sound like you are down about how long it has taken to up date this story and the loss of readers .
I have been reading this story from the begining and even if I would like more frequent up dates I will wait until you get them up and not complain.
It is hard to find a good story and when you find one that is good you can't give up on it unless the author gives up on writing and lets the readers know.
I feel you do a good job of character development even with characters that we already know and your plots seem to be well thought out
you are doing a good job, so keep it up. I would be sad to loose you.
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