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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From ANON - Rebecca on December 15, 2009
    I love this story!! It is probably my favorite fanfiction ever!!! I can hardly wait for the next update!!
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  • From ANON - Dimond_in_the_Rough on September 15, 2009
    I absolutly love this story! You are an amazing author. I cant wait for the next chapter! ;)
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  • From ANON - essie on September 07, 2009
    please send me update
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  • From ANON - EveDallas on August 30, 2009
    Hello! I just started reading this and COULD NOT put it down.... Like I stayed up all night reading it because its so good. This story is fantastic and I hope it continues soon! Especially after this latest chapter(14). You are a magnificent writer! THANK YOU for giving me something fabulous to read!
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  • From ANON - omgomgwow on August 15, 2009
    i re-read your entire fic just now and words cannot describe how much i'm in love with and obsessing about your fic. if you don't mind i'd love to get an update too please and thanks! halfpinay88@yahoo.com
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  • From cukid9 on July 21, 2009
    Oh, I can't believe you left us hanging there!!

    But, I can ALMOST forgive you since the beginning of this chapter included much sweetness between Inuyasha and Kagome :)

    *sigh* I've been bumming around the site the past few days, upset because there just doesn't seem anything worth reading anymore. And then I remembered that you had updated (I tend to wait for awhile before reading because I know I'll get to the end and the selfish fangirl in me will want to demand that you writemorenow!! :) ), which brightened my day considerably. It's always such a pleasure to come back to this story. It's one of only a few I can read over and over and always seem to find something new that I like about it.

    I liked how you dealt with "the morning after" in this chapter (even if it was JUST a kiss, it was still a seriously huge step forward in their relationship). Poor Inu having to deal with all the physical discomfort and Kags having to see it *chuckles* I think that's what really keeps me involved in this story (no, not the potential for them doing it sexytime, tch! :) ) - despite them being fictional characters, you still write their responses to the events around them believably. The kiss in the greenhouse was an unexpected surprise to me as much as Kagome - and even more so that she fought against the urge to be embarrassed about the PDA and kissed him back (I might have cheered aloud at that :) ).

    But, ooooo, Naraku! I had a feeling he was bad news! And I just KNEW when he walked through that door he would try to seduce Kagome. I think my gut clenched with anxiety when he appeared. What is he going to do to her? Will she be able to fight him? Will Inuyasha show up in time to save the day? Or can we look forward to our strong-willed heroine saving herself? The fangirl in me demands answers, but she'll quiet down eventually. Take you're time (just not TOO much, of course ;) ).

    Oh, and no worries about including a concert scene with Inu. It was just something that popped into my head as I was reading and I was curious about whether or not it would happen. I am perfectly content letting you lead me through this fantastic story in whatever manner you choose (or it chooses :) ).

    Until next time!!

    ~cu-kid
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  • From ANON - HeavenlyEclipse on July 17, 2009
    It's great that you updated :) But not to be rude or anything are you gonna take a hell of a long time again? Once again NOT AT ALL intended to be mean I swear :( I absolutely LOVE your story and then some. And it sucks to be left so long in the dark with cliffhangers as evil as this one. I had to re-read a lot of the story cause it's been so long that you've updated last that I had started to forget chunks of the story... so I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY friggin hope that you'll update a lot quicker, and not months and months apart... Once again I do NOT intend for this to be rude or mean. I'm just a huge fan of this story and would REALLY like to see it updated a LOT more...
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  • From ANON - Kotori-sama on July 15, 2009
    I've just finished reading all of your chapters and I must say I was highly impressed by your story. The level of detail you go into with each chapter is truly something else. For an AU fanfic this has to be one of the more creative ones I've seen in a good long while. I certainly wouldn't mind living in the world you've created or at least vacationing there for a summer. I also like how you've created new characters that are different from the Inuyasha world, but at the same time entertaining in their own unique way. Most characters like that I find don't really seem to belong there or at the very least, to me anyway, appear to interfere with the story line, but not in your story. I think they fit just nicely, especially Emory. When I first met him I was so sure he was Shippo, but I was delightfully surprised by who he really was. I thought he was rather adorable. But truly with each new pages your story just continued to further thrill and intrigue me. I'm now quite eager for the next chapter, but it is understandable that writing a chapter that's as long as yours are that it would take time and patients. Especially when you finish with it, but then realize that you now need to go over it with a fine tooth and comb to make sure it's edited just right before releasing it. I definitely hope the next one brings new surprises and mystery. I'll be looking forward to it.

    Also, I went to check out the book you recommended, The Glass Books of the Dream Eater, and I've only just started reading it. It kind of starts out slow but, I'm finding that I'm rather enjoying it at the moment. If you wouldn't mind, on your next update, would you please give another list of books your reading? I'm currently trying to find new area's of fiction to look into reading, but with my own picky tastes and fast pace in reading it is often difficult to find ones I like it or new ones to read after I've finished the one I was reading. By the way, Red River, is definitely one the best shojo manga's out there. I'm kind of sad that it's almost over with. I've been reading it ever since it first came out and knowing that it's soon to end is terribly saddening. I only hope that the ending is good.

    Until next time, take care of yourself and be sure to give us one hell of an update my friend.
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  • From ANON - 83Sherlock on July 09, 2009
    Addicting; you've created a very unique setting and described it beautifully. :)
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  • From Amanderzon on July 06, 2009
    From the start of the story, you had my attention. i love how you have grown the relationship between kagome and inuyasha and just when it seems like they could actually start something meaningful, you bring in naraku. i loved it.i hope to see more of this story in the near future. thanks for a great read.
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  • From ANON - lilelf on July 01, 2009
    cant wait until you update. i love this story!!!!
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  • From rowdygirl on June 30, 2009
    ARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! What is he gonna do??? Will Inu save her? As usual, it's another great chapter. I wouldn't have minded if you'd written a huge long chapter, it would help me make it through to the next chapter :( I am well and truly hooked on this.
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  • From ANON - special on June 30, 2009
    This is really great. I'm glad you've written this chapter... I'm so wrapped up in this story.
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  • From nmos on June 30, 2009
    greattt update!
    I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From Fourshotchild on June 30, 2009
    I absolutely love your story. I am going to
    add this to my favorites. Everything is well
    written. The story flows, the characters are
    well developed and EVERYTHING is interesting.
    You've set up a new, unique world that no IY
    writer has touched. I can't wait to read your
    next chapter!
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