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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From drake220 on February 01, 2009
    so when you update this story, would you please email me a message letting me know another chapter is up? i love this story and dont want to miss it!
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  • From ANON - KitsuneVixen on January 06, 2009
    Man! i love this story, but u havent updated in a loooong time. is everything alright or are you just not finding the time to write? I look forward to your next chapter ^_^
    -Dessy-chan
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  • From Alpine02 on December 29, 2008
    I like to read AU stories a lot and I find this one is just great. I love the fact that this is set somewhere other than a high school ^_^
    I am really looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks fot the great read...
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 21, 2008
    Please update soon! Please don't give up on this fic. It's my fav. and I'm relly looking forward to what happens next. Hope to see more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - lilith on December 13, 2008
    Just wanted to say - I know that you're probably very busy maintaining a nonfanfiction life. But we'll still be here waiting patiently for your next chapter (whenever it comes out). :) Love the story; you're honestly an author like no other, your creativity and ingenuity has taken you soo far. the cliffhanger from chapter 12 is driving us all crazy I think.
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  • From nmos on December 02, 2008
    :(
    it's been a while
    i hope you're okay
    and planning on updating soon.
    this is a fantastic story and it keeps getting better.
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  • From ANON - kawaii doggie ears on November 21, 2008
    Ga! i have been waiting forever for you to review! this is my favorite story so please, for the sake of my sanity, update!
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  • From ANON - guita on October 14, 2008
    Hi I just loved this story when I read it a few months back. I was hoping you'd add chapters then, but you haven't so... please please continue the story because its fantastic - even without the specific characters of inuyasha kagome and the rest this story still works. so please continue coz its fantastic.

    Guita
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  • From ANON - ravencroft on September 30, 2008
    This story is AWESOME! loved chapter 12. stupid naraku messing up the flow. this story is very unique and quite sweet. Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From Mischief1987 on August 08, 2008
    Naraku is worse than a car sales man!!!! Slimy butt head!
    So...when is Inu gonna fess up and kednap Kagome and become Miroku's perverted-getting-ass twin? I can't wait to see if she's gonna have a stuttering fit over it, or just purr and go with the flow.

    You are a good writer Bear. E-me at mt.mischief1987@hotmail.com when you have the next chapter up, please and thank you?
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  • From ANON - Radiant_Watcher on August 05, 2008
    I would just like to say that this is one of the best (if not the best) fics I have ever read. The story is original, there is actual thought put into the plot, the grammar and spelling are good, and the characters (despite being in a completely different world) are still in character for the most part. This also happens to be the first review I've ever made on this site so that in it of itself should say something. ^.^ If even someone as lazy as me feels the need to stand up and say something... all I'm saying is you should be VERY proud of your work. You have a gift.
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  • From YangofYin on July 24, 2008
    Wow. This was awesome, as always. So. What was Kagura up to? Hmmm? I thought it was a bit intriguing how she reacted to Inuyasha's little slip. Especially now that Naraku is asking Kagome to go to the concert with him...hmmm...*LOL* It's great. It was hard to read about the shower scene, but I'm thinking I see now why it was so necessary. The whole confrontation between Kagome and Inuyasha in his room was wonderful. It was very mature (they didn't even yell at each other! ^_^) and it read like a turning point in their relationship. It was a tad OOC, but then again it's an AU so I'm not expecting total canonship. I really love the way you write Kagome and Inuyasha. Him calling her out in the elevator made me smile and almost do a little dance in my chair! *LOL* I saw a couple of typos, but I honestly don't remember where they were..sorry! I do know they were far apart and not many >_< Don't worry on the length, long chapters are always ok. You make them interesting so it's not like it's a bother or anything. The toughest read of the whole story was the beginning because you were describing places, which was very necessary and worth it. Your story is so "alive" now because of it. I can't describe it better than that. ^_^
    Anyways, wonderful wonderful! Can't wait for the next!

    -Yang
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  • From tgbrunner02 on July 23, 2008
    omg! please hurry and update! this is one of the best things i've read PERIOD in a coupl'a years now. you're fantastic, you really are. And i'm willing to bet that Miroku WORKS for Naraku? Maybe? Idk, that'd be a pretty nice place to hide that pervy monk, in the Black Prince's people. anywho... please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2008
    great update.
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  • From SecretQuill on July 21, 2008
    it's a great chapter. it makes the story move forward, which is refreshing, and I'm curious about what made inuyasha look at kagome like that in the end.
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