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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From demolitionlover on July 14, 2008
    i think you did a great job with the whole Inuyasha-Kagome talk really. His explaining of what he was thinking is brilliantly sketched :D and I absolutely love the party scene... The way you ended it is absolutely perfect... I can't wait to read the next chapter... wonderful job!
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  • From chanda on July 12, 2008
    Yeah, you updated! I did like this chapter, and Kagura is such a...well you know. I am glad that Inu and Kagome managed to have their talk, but now Naraku is staking claims on her. I wonder why she couldn't say no to Naraku? Now, she has accepted his date.

    It didn't seem like you took that long to update, and I didn't mind the length of the chatper at all.

    And of course, looking forward to your next chapter. I can see it's going to be mighty interesting.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Rocky on July 01, 2008
    I'm way excited about the new chapter, when is it coming out?????
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  • From ANON - Ryoko on June 20, 2008
    I want to marry you...
    *cough* Yeah I read the last chapter preview, and, Oh My Lord, I loved it. It was excellent. I just really want to read the actual chapter. I love how you are so descriptive with emotions and what the character's feeling or thoughts are about something, you make it seem almost real. Like if they were actually just saying, thinking, feeling. Oh hell, I dunno If I'm explaining myself well, I hope I am lol.
    Good Job, Thumbs Up, u deserve some ice cream!
    I really hope you update the chapter sooner than later, haha, but don't worry I can wait. Just keep it up with those descriptions, you are really amazing at that.
    I hope you have a good summer (even though Canada's first day of Summer is tomorrow, lol, random!)
    *hugs* Do not rush, but do not stop either!

    Bye Bye!, Atte: Ryoko
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  • From rowdygirl on June 01, 2008
    Very well done! It is an excellent story, original and wonderfully insightful as to their characters. There were just a few punctuation errors, which shows that your beta is very good! I am loving your story. It would truly break my heart if you didn't finish it. Actually, you could change the names and then publish it under original fiction, because it really doesn't follow anything Inuyasha, but that is NOT a criticism. I am thinking that you need to make certain that writing is a permanent part of your life. It is a gift and you shouldn't waste something you are so very good at. Brilliance is its own burden.

    Jane
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  • From ANON - ravencroft on June 01, 2008
    I would just like to say, AWESOME STORY!!!! I love this story. It's really well written, it's very different than anything else i've ever read both in the fanfiction and actual fiction realm. You have a very good mind! I can't wait to read the next chapters!!!
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  • From kad3nj on May 31, 2008
    I really like this story. I don't review many but this one is special. I can't give you the technical reasons why I think this is good but I feel it is. I couldn't write a story if my life depended on it but I have read a lot and I am very patient waiting for the next update. I am not your typical reader of fan fiction as I am much too old. I find your story very believable and you don't assume that I know the background of all the characters before I start. Your spelling and word usage is good or you have a really good beta or maybe both but it takes a good story to over look those kind of flaws.
    Thank you for the story and keep it up
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  • From fallenarchangel on May 27, 2008
    Hi! Just taking a break from writing my own story and happened to bump into yours. Here are three words for you: Amazing, Fun and damn Refreshing! And well if you want to be technical...those were four words, but I'm sure you get the picture.
    As I began reading it, I understood what you mentioned about some readers quitting right after those first chapters. I began my story in much the same way and not going directly into the relationship of my characters. It's great to build an actual plot and not just have two people who meet, fall in love and then live happily ever after. It's just too cliche and boring!
    Anyways, just wanted to let you knowt that I've loved absolutely everything about your fic. I especially want to commend you on how well you portray Inu Yasha. Everyone always makes him out as a stupid, ignorant and uncaring guy. I'm glad you did him the way you did.
    Well, I'm totally keep your story as one of my favorites...so do update whenever possible. I know how life tends to get in the way sometimes!
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  • From chanda on May 27, 2008
    Loved your latest chapter! It was well worth the wait! Oh, the angst, and poor Kagome having to go into the bathroom, and see whomever, fondling Inuyasha! I will patiently await your next update!

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Teresa on May 26, 2008
    Awesome. I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't care when you update, as long as you do!
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  • From sweetkijo on May 25, 2008
    Wow, you have no idea how excited I was to see you've updated. Im glad to see you back! Hope everything is getting better for you. Your chapter was fantastic. I cant beleive he just left with those girls. How heartbreaking. Now I pray you dont take tooooooo long for your next chapter because that was one hella of an angsty chapter you just gave us. My stomache just sank at the thought of him and those ho's. Well, until next time, take care. Thank you for the update!
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  • From ANON - Sesshoumaru 22 on May 25, 2008
    Wow so gald to see you back at it again. I just love this story with such a passion! Can't wait to see chapter 11 really left us a cleffy didn't you lol. Anywho thanks again for a continueing to write!
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  • From kookookitty on May 25, 2008
    she gave him a lot to digest, no wonder he was so moody. i guess that she is not only a reminder but she sacrificed for him and he doesn't seem to be the type who likes to be indebted to anyone.

    jealousy, one wonders what she's going to find on the other side of that door and how she's going to react. one thinks she should keep a cool head and not react... she had to work in a research lab putting sentient beings through all sorts of torture and witnessed the murder and mutilation of 28 people, one would think she is capable of acting stoic when confronted with 'le menage a trois'.

    very emotional chapter, eloquently executed.


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  • From MissMarilyn69 on May 22, 2008
    This story is fantastic. The world is so...I don't know it just seems so realized. I found myself wondering where the inspiration for this world came from. Did it just pop into your head like that (gifted by the muses maybe). I love it, I loved the description of the underground. I wish I could see something like that. I also wish there was a way that I could fav this so I could always know when this is updated.
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  • From ANON - tamis on May 19, 2008
    hi,
    i was just wondering. will we be able to read another excerpt a month from now?
    :D
    looking forward to it if we can.

    keep up the good work!
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