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Reviews for A Fool's Redemption

By : Grumblebear
  • From debEdoo on May 13, 2008
    What can I say that probably hasn't already been said about this story? Amazing, fantastic, invigorating, thought-provoking, captivating... just a few words I thought described it. Congratulations on being the proud, new owner of a laptop. I, too, have found that having one to take with you helps in the writing process. LOL... that and I get really bored at work and need something to distract me from the bleak office around me. While my coworkers think I'm typing case summaries, I'm really writing reviews to stories like yours! Anyways... so here's my review: I love the fact that Inuyasha knows and acknowledges that his attitude and behavior isn't getting to Kagome. And my favorite moment so far in the entire story is when he sees the look of longing in her face. To be in love with someone from a far can destroy a person, so I think Kagome's holding up fairly well, considering. I like when you have Inuyasha by himself, contemplating Kagome and everything she says and does. It puts him on edge because it's obvious that he's never dealt with someone like her and the feelings she making him have. She's determined and strong willed, and he can't deal with that yet. I love your story. I look forward to the next update. So, please make it fast. Those of us who aren't actually doing the work we should, need something to liven up the day!
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  • From rowdygirl on May 03, 2008
    The worst thing about reading each new chapter is coming to the end and knowing I have to wait soooooo long for the next chapter. Fortunately for me, the wait is ALWAYS worth it!

    rowdygirl
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  • From YangofYin on April 23, 2008
    I just finished this story, and its beyond great! I don't know how to describe it, but I've never read a story like this one. It's just wonderful. The characters are wonderfully rounded and the interactions between Kagome and Inuyasha are always interesting. I love Kagome's characterization. She's perfect. Inuyasha is great too. But I love Kagome. The preview was great too. I really hope you use it in chapter 11. I was wondering what happened after he spotted her and why he let her get away.
    I'm sorry to hear about your health. Those pills suck. My doctor tried to put me on those, and luckily I work in a pharmacy so I knew the side effects and told her no. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter, but your health comes first!
    ^_^
    Saravy
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  • From Daphnesescape on April 23, 2008
    My lord what a good fic. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ryoko on April 17, 2008
    Hello! This is Ryoko speaking!
    I have to tell u that I like ur fic very much. It's really cool.
    I read the Excerpt from chp 11 u posted in your livejournal and I tell ya dude, it was excelent. I was almost falling off my chair while reading it.
    Ur description of InuYasha's rampage is excellent, not TOO gory, but enough that people can understand what is actually happening.
    Btw, u said we couldn't ask u what's gonna happen next, so I won't....But still.........LOL
    Again, ur fic is excellent. Keep up the good work, 'cus u make me (and other ppl) happy.
    Take it easy and I hope u recover completely!

    hugs&kisses, Ryoko (who's faithfuly waiting for the next chap xD)

    PS: Sorry 4 bad english! hope u undestood all the compliments lol
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  • From chanda on April 16, 2008
    Ahhh! I thought a real chapter was up...! Ooh, does this mean a new chapter is comming soon. I hope so, I do miss this story.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - BakaUsagi on March 25, 2008
    Hey you! Where's chapter 11? I wanna read it. ;_; Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, pretty please?! *puppy eyes* Come on and update! It's March now and you said you'd have it out by February, what gives? Please feed my inner reader? ;_;

    -BakaUsagi
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  • From ANON - ashashley on March 24, 2008
    Please don't be a story ditcher.

    It's a really good fanfic.

    Update soon.

    Please.
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  • From serendith on March 15, 2008
    I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned this story. You are an amazing writer. I know real life can get insane but I hope you return soon!
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  • From nmos on March 12, 2008
    boo :( by two weeks did you mean two months?
    I hope that you haven't abandoned this story, it was really good.
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  • From ANON - Lynn on March 03, 2008
    I hope you'll update soon, cause you got me totally addicted!!!! I sooo love this story and where it's going! I usually don't read AU stories but I'm sure as hell glad I read this one! ;)
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  • From ANON - Chetotenshi on February 25, 2008
    I just love your story, your writing skills are very good and I just can't wait until your next chapter, I been waiting sooooooo long for it but I know you must be busy so I will have to wait, but please do not forget about updating this magnificent story. Thank You Bye Bye!
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  • From serendith on February 11, 2008
    Just want you to know I am going insane waiting for your next chapter. Your story is amazing. I think I have quelled my addiction by rereading sections of your story a couple of dozen times over the last month. I understand life can get insane and I don't fault you for not updating but I just wanted you to know that your creative input was missed and I will be thrilled when you find the time to release the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - anon on February 08, 2008
    hii. i just wanted to let you know that your story is amazing!!!

    i know your life is pretty busy, but thanks for keeping us updated on your progress (or lack-there-of, haha). :) i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From Kinyana on January 31, 2008
    Wow. It's been a little while since the last time I read your story. And you've updated since then too! Fantastic chapter. You've got me hooked. Keep up the wonderful work. Oh, and happy new year!

    Katie
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