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Reviews for The Better End of the Deal

By : SayuriNakamura
  • From madmiko on March 07, 2007
    Awesome, as always! You've got such a knack for writing these characters. So, Kikyou sent the boar youkai after Kagome. Kagome knew there was something wrong because it was immune to her powers, right? This isn't a one-shot, is it? I hope you're going to continue with this one, too. (I'm following "Searching" and "To Be Alive" faithfully, and won't mind adding another great story to that list.) I can't wait for it to come out that Kikyou did that. What will Inuyasha think about that? Wow! He really showed his true colors, didn't he? Who knew he thought so lowly of the only friends and companions he had -- the only ones who accepted and cared for him? What a baka! Funny that he was putting down 'humans,' -- Kikyou was human when he fell in love with her. Now she's less than that. Does Inuyasha really not care about Kagome, or was he just caught up in his guilt and anger at Sesshoumaru? Like Sesshoumaru, I can't wait for the day when Inuyasha realizes what a horrible mistake he made. I've always felt he needs to get his face rubbed in it. I love Sesshoumaru's feelings of taking on the pack as a matter of honor. This is going to be so good!!!! This first chapter already was!!!
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  • From Revlis on March 07, 2007
    Loves it! *dances*

    The plot seem original and well its just smashing!
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  • From JadedInu on March 07, 2007
    Okay, definetly hooked!

    This is a story that is very unusual!!!!

    Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

    Update A.S.A.P!!
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