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Reviews for The Better End of the Deal

By : SayuriNakamura
  • From litlestamazon on March 05, 2013
    It was a lovely beginning. It's too bad you never finished it.
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  • From sysclp on March 14, 2009
    I really do hope you decide to finish this one someday. It is such a nice and promising beginning, it is a shame to see it remain incomplete. Thanks!

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  • From loretta537 on September 19, 2008
    so far so good, more please
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  • From sysclp on December 26, 2007
    Nice story and refreshing to see the whole group move under Sesshy's care. I hope you plan to continue it as it has been quite a while since you updated. Please come back and give us more! Thanks!

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ABL on June 15, 2007
    finally!!!!

    A story where Sesshomaru doesn't just take Kagome under his care but everyone else. I've been looking for a story like that for the longest time!!! And I do believe that your's is well written though Sesshomaru is a bit OOC it fits considering he's trying not to be like Inuyasha and be a better pack leader.

    I'm enjoying the plot so far. I'm curious as to why Kagome doesn't even remember being speared by the boar. Is it because of the mental trauma? Was it too much for Kagome to handle at the time so she blocked it out? Some people do that in extreme situation, especially ones dealing with life and death.

    Well I hope you update soon. Though take your time! I'll be watching out for the next chapter.
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  • From kmplease on June 15, 2007
    great story, i like it that you are setting up sesshomura and kagome he can't just fall in love with her just like that, update soon please
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  • From Shanalir on June 15, 2007
    Oh, I'm so glad you updated! This chapter was really great, helped to establish some things. I wonder if Kagome will remember what actually happened to her? Well, anyway, I hope you can update soon!
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  • From marcia on April 23, 2007
    oh i'm liking this i hope you didn't give up on it It has been a month without updates so you never can tell with sort of thing well written btw easy flow to it and pov shifts
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  • From Nekoastrid on April 02, 2007
    aWWW why! WHY MUST YOU STOP! >,< update! update! (crying dramaticly) I wanna see whats happends! UPDATE DATTEBAYO! >,
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  • From cocoke5 on March 11, 2007
    oh yea this story is real good and i loveit want more more more please up date soon. the plot is real good and ican not wait for sess to tell kegome that inyusaha went wit kekiy . up date soon.
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  • From madmiko on March 10, 2007
    Nice one! I liked Sesshoumaru's thoughts about his new situation and pack. Love the way he comforted her when she was sick and having a nighmare. I can't wait for her to find out what Inuyasha did! And, of course, like Sesshoumaru, I can'r wait for inuyasha to realize what an idiot he is!! Heh heh. Will Sess and pack go hunting Jewel shards? I can't wait to watch his relationship with Kagome evolve. This is going to be so good!
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  • From candycrys on March 10, 2007
    oohhhh i like tell me something really really bad happens to inuyasha XD
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  • From angelnomiko on March 09, 2007
    wow that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel

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  • From SuperHottie101 on March 07, 2007
    update soon
    its very good so far
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