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Reviews for Set Ablaze

By : MistressKagome
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 07, 2007
    this story is really interesting to say the least. I really enjoyed reading it. Poor Kagome being betrayed by her friends. Also I hope that Kaede becomes her child that is the least she deserves for having Shippo taken from her in such a way.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Neptunee on April 05, 2007
    I really like this, when i read the summery I was like nope on to the next story, but I decided to take a look and I want to know when Sessho is going to meet "The Experiment". I want to know more please don't lose our Muse. write some more

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  • From swtdrm01 on April 04, 2007
    I'm so happy that you updated. Your story is exciting and beautiful. Please update soon again.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on April 04, 2007
    I liked the first chapter, the second seems a bit beter crafted and I'm curios as to where this going!

    Great Job

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  • From LADYWELLES on April 04, 2007
    i like it very much plaese update soon i would like to read more
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  • From ANON - Kira on March 30, 2007
    are you going to update? becuase this is a good story.
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  • From ANON - Morgan on March 14, 2007
    Love it so far! Please update soon.
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  • From Seren1tyStar01 on March 13, 2007
    I think that this is one of the few stories out there that has the potential to be truly great. Congratulations on this fabulous start and I hope that you keep this story as unique as can be. I think that I will be truly disappointed if this turns out to be what so many others write. Please try to make this as refreshing and new as you can. Good luck with this and I look forward to seeing where you take this. Your grammar and spelling are excellent and I like your writing style.
    I do have one critique and that is simply that there are a few areas in your story that you switch from the first person point of view to the narrarators point of view and back again, although you are still speaking of Kagome's thoughts and feelings. Pick one or the other. It will make the story much easier to understand. Either keep it in her point of view or use the narrarator, but using both makes it a little confusing.
    Seren1tystar01

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  • From BeautifulOblivion on March 12, 2007
    I love this so far. Kinda reminds me faintly of a newer book I just read. I hope you continue. I'll be watching for updates.
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  • From ANON - swtdrm01 on March 12, 2007
    Wow. That was amazing. I can't wait to find out what else happens. How does Sess and Kags meet? Please update soon.
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  • From CerealKiller on March 12, 2007
    I LOVE IT!!!!
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 11, 2007
    Very nice start and I look forward to more soon, this is gonna be the kinda thing that holds my attention start to finish I can tell! Wonderful job!
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