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Reviews for The Intertwined

By : Sardave

From ANON - VB on November 06, 2007
Why didn't you just have them all join them in a bath... it would have saved an argument.:P I'm so happy for the update. I can't wait to find out what you have planned.
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From kookookitty on November 04, 2007
i was reading your recommendations on your profile page and i noticed you mentioned some 'labyrinth' stories. on 'adultfanfiction' in the 'labyrinth' category is a fic by gaeliceyes called 'return to the labyrinth' that is exceptional, i know because i'm one of her beta readers, give it a quick read if you have the time.

i like the interactions and your character portrayals. i love the fact she's not going to dump yasha (i hope she's not going to dump him!) i was wondering when somebody was going to put her with the two youkai with the fuzzy ears, she can have a field day with all the ear rubbing... and a tail! kagome's idea of heaven! in the scene when the girls were taken away i was touched by the concerted effort by both guys to see to her modesty, seems there's some feeling for her with youko or at the least she has his respect.

i'm really enjoying this story and it's one of my favorites especially since i have a thing for the white haired bishi and there are three of them here... three!! *doesn't know if she should drool or dance and twirl* (i also like the red haired bishi and there's even one of them in this >=D

i shall look for an exceptional reward incentive that includes chocolate for your next update... maybe something with alcohol (not for the kiddies).

a pleasure,
ginny

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From ANON - Diane on November 04, 2007
Yippee!! I was just about to go to bed when I decided to check for updates 1 more time & I'm sure glad I did since I've been missing this, especially since the last 1 ended on a cliffy. I really enjoyed this & am looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
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From ANON - Diane on September 18, 2007
I think I've read this through twice already since the last update & I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next since you left it on kind of a cliffy. Hope you can update soon.
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From cowgirlkitten2000 on August 10, 2007
u can not just leave it like that. your just killing me now :) i cant wait to read more
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From PsychoDitz on August 10, 2007
I can't wait to see this updated! I really enjoy this, Hopefully the well will even work for Sango! What would she think of the future? Love it, hope its updated soon!
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From kookookitty on August 09, 2007
now the question is if the group gets someone to do the seals before naraku intercepts them at edo to implement his dastardly plan.

i'm so happy you updated i was beginning to worry. it was worth the wait.

ciao,
ginny
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From ANON - qarry on June 24, 2007
I absolutely love this fic. It is amazing, and so well done. It has to be one of the best IY/YYH fics around. I hope you update soon. I am dieing to find out what happens with Sango and Kagome.
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From madmiko on June 21, 2007
Me again. I was just reading some of the other reviews for this story, (it'a a habit of mine -- I like to see what other people have to say), and I noticed the one about the seasons being different in Japan. You probably already checked on this, knowing you, but I just wanted to state that actually, they're pretty darn similar to how they run in the US. It's spring and cherry blossom season in Japan in April. Their rainy season is June/July, when it's very hot and humid. And they have lovely autumn foliage in late October. They often like to tour some of the beautiful gardens open to the public in the fall to see the colors. In the winter, they have heavy snows on the Sea of Japan side, but it stays pretty dry on the Pacific Ocean side. but, it's basically the same months we have our winter. Just FYI. ^_^
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From madmiko on June 21, 2007
I read this chapter on another site, but couldn't resist reading it again here. Just fantastic! Again, I really, really loved the way you had Miroku sitting there contemplating Sesshoumaru. And the way you let it be known that obviously Sess holds the monk in some regard in order to let him see his "softer side" with Rin was just brilliant. It really sets up the possibility of them being in a relationship with Sango together. I wonder if Sess sees the possibility yet? Or, if he sees the possibility of Inuyasha and Youko being in a relationship with Kagome together? I have to wonder, also, about Inu's continued reaction to Youko's suggestive comments. You're opening a door there for that threesome to really be a threesome. (Then again, with Inu's reaction, -- probably not. Heh heh!) Hmmm. But now that I think of it, I can kind of see Miroku and Sess both being worldly and nonchalant about that. I have to say, I indulged in some funny, smutty thoughts about the possibilities with the girls being "linked" like they are now. Since, in the very first chapter, you showed Kagome feeling Sango's PAIN, I am envisioning Youko getting competitive with Sess -- let me set the scene: Sess is with Sango -- Kagome starts moaning. Youko decides to show Sess HE'S the better lover. Do you see where I'm going with this? Heh heh! Youko's with Kag -- trying to make Sango yell. Really, it's a very unfair situation where the males can get all puffed up in their own abilities to make TWO women climax at the same time. LOL!!! Of course, that does mean the girls will be able to compare all four of the men. But without the actual physical contact, so ... that's kind of sad. As funny as that could be, I'm wondering if that might not be a bit much. Then you'd have situations where Sango would be yelling over to Youko and Inu, "Leave her alone, -- I have a headache!" LOL!! And Sess would have to say, "Could you please confine yourselves to certain hours of the day for that? We are finished and ready to get some sleep, so please stop disturbing Sango." (Yes, I'm LMAO here!! Sorry!! I REALLY can't wait to see how you handle some of this stuff. And I'm still wondering what Naraku's motive for all this is. Can't wait to find out!!) Awesome chapter!!
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From kookookitty on June 21, 2007
so sango can charge up hiraikotsu and purify bad guys as well? more power!

you have brought up some intriguing teases in your responses, makes anticipation even more unbearable.

one can never go wrong with chocolate.

a pleasure,
ginny
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From kookookitty on May 16, 2007
i was a stay at home mother too and i also homeschooled my children.

i am so sorry i have neglected to review the previous chapter, the unexpected happens at the most inopportune times.

scary angsty stuff happening and i am a little kid when it comes to scary angst/horror preferring waff and fluff. i will fortify myself by reading comedy/parady/humor and patiently await the future chapters and hopefully a happy conclusion.

i wanted to give you an appropriate reward (bribe/incentive/encouragement) and these are really really good... like your story! rich chocolatey goodness!

::Guinness Brownies::

4 eggs
3/4 cup sugar
9 oz. dark chocolate
5 oz. white chocolate
8 tbsp unsalted butter (1 stick)
3/4 c flour
3/4 c cocoa
1 1/4 c Guinness Stout
Powdered sugar (confectioner's sugar)

Preheat the oven to 375� F and butter an 8 inch square cake pan.

Place butter and chocolate (broken into pieces or chopped) in a saucepan over a low heat to melt. While the chocolate is melting, beat together the eggs and sugar in a large bowl until light and fluffy. When the chocolate is melted, pour into the bowl and mix well. In a small bowl, sift together flour and cocoa. Add slowly to the large bowl and mix well. Last, whisk in the Guinness.

Pour batter into cake pan and bake for 25-35 minutes, or until a knife inserted into the center comes out almost clean. Remove from oven and allow to cool. Sprinkle with powdered sugar on top and cut into squares to serve.

a pleasure,
ginny

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From cowgirlkitten2000 on May 02, 2007
omg im dieing to find out what will happen now. what was with that powder?
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From EternalTwylight on May 01, 2007
I love this story, I'm always looking back for updates. I was absolutely delighted that you included Youko, he's just so damn sexy. It really is too bad castrating Naraku wouldn't do any good, he'd just grow another one. Openly desiring Kagome and Sango... and here I thought he only got a stiffy for Kikyo. What a naughty hanyou he is, but then we already knew that. I'm on the edge of my seat to see just what type of spell he's casting on the girls. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Good work and much love!
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From cowgirlkitten2000 on April 29, 2007
o now i cant wait to find out what will happen next.
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