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Reviews for The Intertwined

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  • From bloodbunny on April 29, 2007
    Ah! Such a good story! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 23, 2007
    Really like this & can hardly wait for more, do have a possible correction though. I don't think the seasons in Japan correspond to those in the US, Canada & the UK, as in people in Australia which is in pretty much the same zone I do believe celebrates Xmas in the summer. So I don't think mid-November would be fall there although I'm not positive. You may want to check on that, or not depending on how accurate you want to be.
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  • From ANON - VixenOfTheFlame on April 19, 2007
    i luved it
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  • From kookookitty on April 18, 2007
    a hint at the group/family in the last chapter... wondering if sesshomaru is of that number. are you going to give us a little background on his accquantance with youko as hinted, it had most likely been a good thing that it had been a while since they'd seen eachother?

    exciting chapter, i can't wait to read more.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on April 18, 2007
    another great chapter. this keeps getting better and better!!
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on April 13, 2007
    im very excited to find out what will happen next. please update as soon as u can.
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  • From ANON - VixenOfTheFlame on April 11, 2007
    luv it! I hope ure muse works a bit faster next time too. update soon.
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  • From swasdiva on April 06, 2007
    Freaking fantastic insertion of Kurama...what a twist! But the foreboding about Sango and Kagome has me curious and worried.
    This story just gets more enthralling with each chapter. Keep it up!
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  • From MsMischief on April 05, 2007
    this just gets more interesting as it goes along, i love the hints you drop now and again in the story, they are intriguing.
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  • From kookookitty on March 27, 2007
    the evil is revealed and naraku is behind it...

    way to make yasha uncomfortable! >=)

    happy healthy update reward/encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolately goodness!

    ::chocolate coma::
    12 oz silken tofu
    12 oz melted chocolate chips
    whipped to a fluffy froth
    refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Diane on March 22, 2007
    I REALLY like this & can't wait for more. I do have a comment though, I don't think Jinenji is a horse hanyou, in both versions of the Jinenji eps [both manga & anime] it seemed to say that his father was some kind of nature youkai.
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  • From kookookitty on March 21, 2007
    youko walking up to them must have been an event of somewhat interesting proportions in the reactions of all of the players... sorry i missed it. i rather enjoyed the persuit and the observations... i guess i will now get to enjoy the interactions!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows on March 16, 2007
    this is good...r u goin to introduce more characters?....by the way..i didnt like how the second chap was written...it was to wide so i had to move the page alot...well cant wait till update!
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  • From Nekura on March 15, 2007
    I don't think this sounded forced at all! I'm really enjoying the story so far and I can't WAIT for an update. The only teeny tiny issue I have is your lack of paragraphs really, but that really doesn't take away from the story, so not a big deal. Anyway, I hope you update soon, and my only request is that you don't do the cliche Inuyasa/YYH fanfic thing by making the girls hook up with multiple guys, I'd love to see just single pairings, though ;-; I have no idea who's I'd prefer to see the delicious Youko with! :P~~~
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  • From kookookitty on March 15, 2007
    that was amazing! the interactions and behavior patterns of the group to the curious observer. the playful and intense curiosity youko displayed... quite descriptive and eloquently written.

    i eagerly anticipate future installments to this delghtful story.

    thank you,
    ginny
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