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Reviews for The Intertwined

By : Sardave
  • From kittygirl86 on May 20, 2010
    When are yougoing to update? I reslly enjoy this story. Is kagome going to end up with Inuyasha or Youko? Or both? Is Sango going to end up with Seeshomaru or Miroku? Personally I prefer Sesshomaru. But as the author it is up to you to make the desicion. Please update soon. Please. I'l give you cookies. I'll give you all the updates you could want. Just please update soon. I really want to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - LoveThisFic on April 16, 2010
    I hope you update this! I have been checking this story over and over forever now, waiting for an update. I would LOVE it if you did! I will be your new best friend!! I will never be able to get this off my mind till I can put an ending to it! Lol. Sorry for being psyco. Please update! :)
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  • From kookookitty on October 17, 2009
    i do believe that i had read the last chapter-- i believe i had reviewed elsewhere. i had been listing some of my favorite stories for someone and i thought if this one. i really miss it, but i do know that 'real life' can be a cruel mistress and there are times we aren't allowed or given respite to do the things we want. i also want to express my belated condolences for your loss. my own sister passed over a year ago after i had done my best to care for her (there are times i felt like i had failed her, but she is no longer in pain and for that i am grateful).

    you are a gifted and talented individual-- i hope you all success and time to pursue all that makes you happy... and maybe that you will continue with your writing and art.

    thank you,
    ginny
    kokoronagomu.deviantart.com
    ♥
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  • From ANON - YoukaiFate on December 20, 2008
    I have spent the whole day reading this story (instead of Christmas shopping, LOL!) and am truly disappointed that there isn't more to devour. I am loving Youko and Sesshoumaru in this fic---not to mention how you have kept the others in character. I'm sorry you have gone through so much recently, but I am glad that you have taken some time out to update this awesome story. It's hard to keep in the writing mood when life intrudes with all of its myriad difficulties, but sometimes it helps as an escape, too. =)

    Now for the begging. Please please please update? It would be a fabulous Christmas present. And you truly have a gift to share. =)

    Look forward to more,
    Fate
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2008
    I decided to reread this & just got to chapter 9 & found a goof, it's in the last section where Sess & Youko bring the girls to the cave, the last sentence in the 2nd paragraph; Their bathing of Naraku and Gau would have to wait until their condition was a little more predictable. I think you should change the names from the villains to the girls if ever you go back & edit the older chapters, I did get a good laugh out of it though. I don't think anyone actually cares if the evil guys get a bath or not, much less them giving it to them. ^_^;
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  • From sysclp on November 16, 2008
    Thanks for updating! I really like this story and I hope you are able to stick with it and update more frequently now. Keep up the good work!
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  • From redrubycutie on November 15, 2008
    I love this story please update soon. I wanted to know what are the pairs for this story?


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  • From ANON - Tink on November 13, 2008
    Hey, keep it up! i really like how things are going, and it definitely works... i am really liking the interaction between the groups! i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2008
    It's been a long time since I've seen the fic. And I really missed it!! I love your writing I really do hope that you can keep updating, but I also know that life sometimes gets in the way. Be it good or bad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2008
    Sorry you've been having a sucky year but very glad you're back & posting again. I really enjoyed chapter 14 & am really looking forward to the next 1, hopefully soon.
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  • From nightshade41230 on September 21, 2008
    Love the story,I know its been awhile It was very good reading.I enjoyed it very much I hope to see more soon..
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on January 03, 2008
    this was really great. i am really looking forward to the next part. so does this mean both girls are still half dressed? lol im sure the boys at camp would like that. hehe
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 19, 2007
    man it about time. Id almost lost hope. Its so hard to find good writing these days Ive gotta cling like a starving roach to day old meat when I do. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2007
    I was SO glad to see an update today after a rather sucky month, cancer scare, & a needle happy tech who had to stick needle shy me 3 times before being able to draw blood, I still have a huge bruise in my inner elbow, she was so happy she hit the vein & gave me a hematoma even if she didn't get any blood, the needle got clogged. I'm glad to see that we're almost to where the fic started, with Sango getting quills removed from her hip. Really interested to see where this goes next. For some reason I keep seeing adult Shippou, Inuyasha & possibly Kurama kidnapping the girls when they return to Kagome's time permanantly, because they never got to kidnap the girls, like pretty much everyone else did back in the past, or at least Kagome since Naraku in the fic is the only 1 to kidnap Sango that I can remember.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 27, 2007
    OMG I am so loving this, I stayed up for fricken hours reading all the chapters posted. Please update soon and keep up the good work, love to see what comes of this
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