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Reviews for Ame without sunshine

By : hikageame
  • From XxSangoxX on March 19, 2007
    Lol, fer sure. So I take it you are enjoying my works.

    I'm gladddddd It's so hard to find time, but I've been so motivated to write it's insane.

    Hope to hear from you soon.


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  • From Yashalove on March 19, 2007
    Great Story!! I think it is great to first delve into the relationship and get things figured out before jumping into a lemon scene. Like they say good things come to those who wait!! Can't wait for updates!!
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  • From skoppnmu on March 17, 2007
    Your story is very good so far. If you are still looking for a beta, I would love to be one for you. Just send me an email to let me know.
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  • From XxSangoxX on March 17, 2007
    haha, shit, I'll help beta the lemons though.

    gladly.

    ^_^

    I can find time for that, read some of my stories and tell me what you think of some of my lemons.


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  • From XxSangoxX on March 17, 2007
    I don't think you are in SERIOUS need of a beta, you just need to change a few things.
    one thing that may irritate people is the fact that you don't correctly space your dialogue,
    you should start a new sentence with every new speaker.
    Other than that, it's not so terrible that it's unreadable. Trust me, I've seen those.

    anywho, yeah. I would hella help you out, but I'm having trouble finding the time to finish all of my stories,
    working and being in college is a bitch lol
    =[
    ps, your title confuses me... is ame a word?

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  • From Shaid on March 17, 2007
    BTW, did I mention I really like the story so far? I honestly didn't notice all that many mistakes, but then I was totaly caught up in the plot.
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  • From Shaid on March 17, 2007
    Would you mind if I offered to Beta? I'm not too bad, I'm a writer myself and once got an "award" for editing in HS. Which was about 10 years ago, but hey, it still happened! So check my profile and e-mail me if you're interested?
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  • From kookookitty on March 17, 2007
    ginduf @ gmail . com

    i will beta for you, however i will not beta lemons.

    ginny
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  • From Darkestfairyqueen on March 15, 2007
    it is a very good story i cannot wait until the next chapter.
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  • From madmiko on March 15, 2007
    That was great! You set it up nicely. I like the way we got to see what Kagome was thinking,and then Inuyasha's thoughts. The revelation about how his feelings have been changing about Kikyou's touch and scent and even the the cold way she talks. Really good!
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  • From XxSangoxX on March 15, 2007
    nice, a few spelling grammar errors but.. nice. can't wait for more.
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on March 14, 2007
    I like chapter one a lot, Please update
    soon.
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