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Reviews for Ame without sunshine

By : hikageame
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ShadowStar666 on February 14, 2008
    please, please update soon. I really, really am lovin' this fic. it's just soo... damn cool. can't wait to read the next chapter. laters for now!
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  • From ShadowStar666 on February 14, 2008
    I really like how you bring out the characters the way you do. I mean it. I think I have more respect for Kouga now just becuase of this chapter. Very cool!
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  • From ShadowStar666 on February 14, 2008
    I am in love with your fic. last bit, ah..... wow. have i said that i'm in love? ^_^
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  • From ShadowStar666 on February 14, 2008
    Now that is what i call a first chapter, Kamii, I can't wait to read the second chapter!
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  • From Obsession1988 on January 19, 2008
    This chapter was definatly not a dissapointment. InuYasha's personality (in my opinion) was without fault. The way he feels about his life and the reasons for keeping everything to himself were exactaly what I look for in a fanfic. I also found it quite interesting to see the way you played out InuYasha's last memories of his mother. There aren't many fanfics that delve too deeply within his mother's part of the story line, and while you did not indulge in that aspect of InuYasha's life too much you tied it in in a very managable way. All together it was pretty much seemless with his thoughts and how you tied it all together. The only surprise was how you involved Shippo in all of this, it was somewhat out of left field how you ended this chapter, but depending on how you tie it together in the next one it really shouldn't matter much.
    Great job and keep up the consistancy of staying in line with the actual anime.
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  • From nmos on January 09, 2008
    this is a really good storryyy.
    it's written pretty well, although a few grammatical things, but nothing serious. just your that should be you're and the like.
    but I really like the idea.
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  • From LadyCash on January 09, 2008
    Very well done!
    I love that you weave in background, as well as showing
    his more feral side. How his instincts kick in, and cause
    him to react to both people and situations.
    Good to see him (and her)in a more mature light, willing to
    deal with their problems and confusion (no matter how reluctantly).

    I also think it's good that they aren't rushing into sex, too
    many fics do this, without them working out their true feelings
    and dealing with the matters at hand. This makes for great angst
    and misunderstandings later, but it's really nice to read a story
    where they take it slowly. Getting there is half (or more) the fun!

    Will be eagerly watching for more of this, just wish AFF had a fave/update
    feature, sigh......
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  • From Obsession1988 on December 07, 2007
    All things considered you did a great job of keeping Koga and InuYasha in character through this chapter. Though I usually prefer fanfics were Koga gets the shit beaten out of him, this was more as to what would have happened if it were actually part of the anime series. I hope you plan on running with this story for quite a few more chapters (I tend to like stories in the 20ch range), it looks very promising so far and I have not been disappinted as of yet (a rarity for sure). I am looking forward to see how deep you get into the relationship between InuYasha and Kagome for that is one aspect of every fanfic that I tend to scrutinize most.
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  • From TheMikoShivae on October 21, 2007
    good story! can't wait for more :D
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  • From AletaRois on August 01, 2007
    Oh, I really like this story! If you ever need someone to Beta for you, just let me know. I'm an English major.
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  • From AnimeLady04 on June 28, 2007
    I like what you have written so far, please write more. But, can you make it easier between Kagome and kouga? She has always been so nice to him and now she is being cruel, can't she make it up to him? And why did inuYasha turn demon with his sword on him? I thought he couldnt turn demon as long as he had his sword....Anyway, good plot, write more asap.
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  • From vikikibouki on June 27, 2007
    Hey, Sweetie. I've read all the chapters, from start to finish (as of yet). And I must say that it's very good.
    You said that Kouga was OOC. I'm not so sure about that. Presonally, I think you've got him pretty well pegged for what his character is supposed to be. And I really sympathise with the problem you had with your computer. Mine bugged at least 3 times while writing my 2nd chapter on Eternal Destiny for my friend Inugrrrl. It took me almost a full week before I could get everything out the way I wanted, so I know exactly where you're coming from.

    I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. The plot is fantastic. Keep up the good work.

    Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.


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  • From kookookitty on June 25, 2007
    i wonder if kouga's right... you said that he's been nearly transforming for a while now, like every morning and i'm assuming every time he was physically close to her... unless he allowed it in order to prove a point with kouga?

    but didn't he want to keep the whole relationship a secret from the others... didn't the whole 'youkai posturing' thing defeat the purpose of their secrecy?

    exciting chapter.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From Vyncent on June 24, 2007
    If you can take the time to proof this story, you have a wonderful fic going here, and it would be great with just a bit of editing. Some of the grammar errors do distract and fixing them would make a world of difference. Your storyline seems to be very well thought out and your presentation is extremely good.

    An example of something to look out for as you go, is there are a few places where you mean to say "her" and instead are saying 'he'. Example: "He lips were blue and she was freezing. He heart beat was too slow for his comfort." In this set you are referring to Kagome's lips and heart, so the missing 'r' makes the sentences confusing.
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