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Reviews for Visions

By : Mujitsu
  • From Trelweny on November 24, 2010
    Fascinating story idea. Always sucks when the antagonist is/was a god. Curious to learn more about the first miko with visions and her Chosen One's relationship. Like did it take them longer or shorter to reach an accord than Kagome and Sesshomaru, how much stronger had they managed to increase their bond, and what happened to them that caused their end? Obviously the miko must have met her end as other miko had visions after her.

    Please return to this story and thanks for writing!
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  • From Rockysideofmt on July 19, 2009
    This story is possibly the best and most unique story that I have ever read!!!!

    This story line is one that i would have never thought of, or have ever read about.

    I enjoy the OOC-ness in some places of this story, and I love how you keep it in character in places too, the combination of both is satisfying!!

    I'm on the edge of my chair reading this, and I'm getting hot and bothered with the tension in the air with kag/sess.
    I really hope that you continue this GREAT story because I would be very upset and disappointed that such a well wrote and unique story was cut down in it's prime =)

    Please put me out of my misery and update again SOON!!!
    Thank you!!!
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  • From peppysmama on July 18, 2009
    Please continue this! This is one of the BEST Sess/Kags fic I have read in a LONG time!
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  • From rasilverstorm on July 18, 2009
    I must say it's a very interesting story, I loved reading it up till now and can't wait till there is more coming out.
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  • From ChaoticReverie on May 26, 2009
    I love this story! It's so wonderfully original and well written; unlike any fic I've ever come across. I've got to ask, because I see it's been a while since you've updated, are you planning on continuing with this? Please tell me you have not abandoned it, that would just be too tragic. To waste such a magnificent piece of art just seems criminal to me, and it's so hard to find a good Sess/Kag story.
    If you could reply and let me know what you intend to do, whether its discontinue or whatever, that would be phenomenal. I would hate to wait in suspense for the next entry if you have no intention of continuing.
    Thanks!
    ChaoticReverie
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  • From Mishka on January 07, 2008
    *wiggles happily* I just keep on rereading this story. It's absolutely wonderful and imaginative...though I get the anxious feeling that Kagome's soul is just what the miscreants are looking for- and I don't want her to get hurt! She's had so much trouble in her life... hopefully Sesshoumaru will be able to use the courting time to get more protective because he understands how unwanted she feels...and maybe she can help him loosen up.
    Looking forward to your update!
    ~Mishka
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  • From IntegraHellsing on December 31, 2007
    This is SO good, I couldnt stop reading once I started as was disappointed when I had to stop! I cant wait to find out what happens next, please continue!
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  • From rowdygirl on November 18, 2007
    god bless wiccan.
    mujitsu, i'm one of the ones who has been waiting 3 months for the update and wiccan is right, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! sorry for yelling. you wouldn't have this problem if you weren't such a good storyteller, so you have only yourself to blame. and you know, after you finish this one, a whole lot of readers are going to be looking for more stories from you. again, if you weren't good, we wouldn't care! this is a particularly good tale too. so thank you for another chapter [and i really enjoyed it] and i will keep looking for updates.
    bless you wiccan.
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  • From rowdygirl on August 25, 2007
    so what do you do in your spare time?

    This is a really good story. I understand why you've been nominated for awards on different sites. However, lovely as those awards might be, you have something better: the gift of being a true storyteller. That you can create such an intriguing and capitivating tale as this and express it so well in a foreign language is a testament to your gift. Your language skills surpass those of many for whom English is their native language. There are a few technical errors in your writing, but all you need is a proofreader. A good proofreader can catch 75% of the errors, a great proofer can catch maybe 85%, so it's always good to have 2.

    And let me know when you decide to start writing murder mysteries professionally. I will be delighted to pay to read your work. In the meantime, please keep finding the time to continue this story. It is so good and I am sooo addicted.
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  • From JLucPitard on August 21, 2007
    Very interesting story. It seems like you have some difficulty with the number of characters jumping in and out of the scene, but I'm glad you included most everyone from the group. I loved the scene where Kagome jumped between Inuyasha and Kouga! Nice spunk shown there. Good work and I'm glad it's being recognized by the fandom.
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  • From Smurfette on August 13, 2007
    Great story! I hope you continue, you've got me hooked >
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  • From Kya77 on June 25, 2007
    Awsome!!!! I love it. Please keep up the most excellent work. I look forward to what comes next. I like how you have protrayed Sessho's reluctance. I also like Kagome's willingness to give up her "Chosen One" if he didn't want the conection that is so Kagome like. Again great job!
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  • From cocoke5 on June 25, 2007
    very good story so far and can not wait for more and up date soon. the plot is real good and trying to think who is the killer in this story. up date soon. be wait for more.
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  • From Demonlordlover on May 20, 2007
    Absolutely lovely. You may not have liked this chapter, but I certainly did. It had elements of everything a romance should, with the added bonus of light fluff on the side.

    A feel good fic, it may be, but also a gripping suspence. Loved it, and I cannot wait to see how he takes being her chosen one, along with how they will adjust to that development. I like the twist on being chosen, as well. Normally, it's the female who is 'chosen,' so to have it be Sesshoumaru is a delightful surprise.
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  • From jadedinu8 on May 20, 2007
    Oh you are so bad!!! Leaving us hanging on a cliffie?

    I love the story line and am unpatiently waiting for the next update!


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