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Reviews for Consequences

By : chuji
  • From nika1280 on March 26, 2007
    I think you resolved the Inuyasha/Kagome situation very well. She's still immature (which I expected), but she was able to put her hurt aside and try to be friends with Inuyasha after all that had happened. I'm glad that the two of them have everything out in the open so that they both can begin to heal.

    On another note--I knew any relationship between the two was doomed when the well was blocked. Instead of thinking about Naraku, Kagome automatically assumed Inuyasha did it because of his inability to understand her feelings. I know he blocked the well before, but when he did so, it was for her own good so it was disheartening and an example of how young she truly is that she responded in such a manner.
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  • From Silverwindfara on March 26, 2007
    A reaaly great story. I look forward to read more.
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  • From SammySan on March 26, 2007
    Hello, New here.

    I love this story is so great. I'm really new in this things so sorry, if I say somethings wrong.
    Seshummaru is acting like he always has been}, nothing new in his bastard and cruel and cold presonality toward Inuyashaya, but poor Inu, now this is a Mpreg, so I guess Seshu has to go back to Inu for his pup.
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  • From sweetciel on March 26, 2007
    I love you!
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  • From nika1280 on March 26, 2007
    Ouch, Sesshomaru is one heartless bastard, isn't he? Oh well, I'm sure he'll be back soon enough because all of that sex had to lead to a bun in the oven. Hehe. Kagome's a little slow, but I'm not surprised. She's too young to understand and too biased to try. If things don't fit into her worldview then they're wrong, simple as that. That's a problem with her character in the anime and manga, and I think you did a good job of it here. Whatever Naraku and Byakuya have planned is no good. Another good chapter.
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  • From acr1228 on March 26, 2007
    Interesting twist! Can't believe Sesshomaru was such a bastard!
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on March 25, 2007
    again great chapter. now wat is that spider demon up to? nuthin good i bet. and sesshy left inuyasha in his most desperate time. so not good. i hope they get back together. and wat the well doesnt work anymore? wow update soon XD
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  • From setoswifey on March 25, 2007
    I'm not a manga reader (not for this cartoon anyway). so I dont know about this new character that naraku has up here. When did Kagura die? Great chapter though.
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  • From dyami1206 on March 25, 2007
    Another excellent chapter I still don't want inu and Kagome to get together she's evil.
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on March 25, 2007
    omg u hav to update soon. i mean dang man. first kikyo and now kagome. poor inu he has no one to turn to...unless sesshy takes both their places XD. and wat kagome said was so mean and i would think she's more open-minded but i guess not. great story so far
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  • From dyami1206 on March 25, 2007
    This is one of my fav fics that I check up on regularly I hope Inu doesn't go back to kagome, he should stay with Sess. he has been hurt enough and good thing he heard what she said so he would know for himself what she thinks.
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  • From acr1228 on March 24, 2007
    I really like this story. I like that Kagome is not suddenly evil. She is, after all, only 15, so some immature moments are normal.
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  • From setoswifey on March 24, 2007
    awwww...my poor Inuyasha. I dont like to see Inuyasha said. I think that Sesshomaru should kill Kagome (sorry but I really, really hate Kagome). Great Chapter! You're an awesome writer.
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  • From drcomalfy on March 24, 2007
    Awww. That was cute. I liked the ending of that chapter. (sniffs) Now you need to update again asap! XXD Ahh. Or, ya know, when you can XP Great job!


    -DM
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  • From nika1280 on March 24, 2007
    I adore your Sesshomaru. He knew exactly what to do for Inuyasha at the end. Realizing his words were making things worse, he offered his brother the comfort of his body in a non-sexual way. Excellent. I feel so bad for Inuyasha. I understand that Kagome is hurt and upset, but she really had no right to say the things she did, and she was even more in the wrong for that sit command. What, so her personal dog isn't doing what she asked so she has to punish it? Boo.

    She needs a bitch slap, a big one. Miroku tried to help, but sometimes things have to be left alone. Is this the end of our travelling group? Wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter (besides more sex *hint hint*)? A very well-done chapter.
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