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Reviews for The Pleasures of Domination

By : RyuandTak

From inkiepinkie on July 02, 2012
I just found this story and it saddens me to see how long it's been since it's been updated. Please update again? I'm really interested in the type of relationship that Hiei and Kagome have. I'm in a similar relationship myself, although it's more about serving my Master and him taking care of me. I would really like to know if you ever plan to update or at least, if you have updated this on another site, let us know?
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From ANON - Sierra on March 28, 2011
Ah, it's such a shame you stopped updating before you posted the Hiei/Kagome action you mentioned at the end of the last chapter. As much as I enjoy the care put into the portrayal of Yuusuke and Keiko's burgeoning D/S relationship, I actually much prefer the type of D/S relationship you portray between Hiei and Kagome. I really enjoy reading back over those interactions when I'm in a crappy mood and need a little pick-me-up. Thank you! :)
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From ANON - faye on August 27, 2010
i lllooovvveee this story make some more chapters
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From ANON - rose on September 19, 2009
i love this story cant wait until next chapter
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From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2007
More, please? My S&M kink is starving for your smut!
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From ANON - mel on April 29, 2007
I hate to admit it but I like this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 21, 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 04, 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on March 29, 2007
Normally I don�t comment on reviews but I thought there were a few points made here that makes the story go completely out of context and turns it into something that it isn�t. Hiei never did make any indication that he wanted Kagome to leave, what he asked her was if she wanted to redefine the terms of their relationship, i.e. being able to keep certain things from each other. There is a difference. It was only in Kagome�s mind that she thought he didn�t want her anymore. Hiei had no way of knowing what she was thinking, she didn�t tell him until she gave her answer. No Dom that I am aware of is a mind reader, even Hiei, so at that point it was on Kagome to let him know. As far as her insecurities, no matter what security she has with him now, it doesn�t change that her past would continue to haunt her unless he invaded her mind with the Jagan, which he has not done. As far as Hiei helping with Keiko�s training, I can imagine how we would have been flamed by readers if he had threatened to kill her, much less how Yusuke would have reacted in the story. So we wrote it where Yusuke did ask for his help and he consented. And you�re correct group sex may not be a part of the mainstream D/s lifestyle but it is of some. Besides how could this have been written with no smut so to speak? There is more planned for the story but as to when it will be written neither of us is certain. We had a definite direction we wanted to take but this has forced us to think on whether or not more people have misunderstood our intentions with the story. If that is indeed the case and we have to rewrite what has already been written it's most likely going to take a while. With so many other stories needing attention making corrections and re-emphasizing certain points is going to have to be set aside until we have the time to do so.
Takhisiss
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From madmiko on March 27, 2007
See what your writing does to me? I just couldn't sleep for thinking about this. I am completely unnerved by Hiei's threat to break off their relationship because her friend asked for her promise not to say anything about a personal matter they talked about. If anything, HE is totally to blame -- he's the one who brought Yusuke and Keiko into their private life to begin with. And Mistress Hisa telling him he could hand her leash over to another master -- that wouldn't be his decision. Or this other lady's. Not unless Kagome is a "working girl" in this woman's brothel. Kagome approached Hiei. If things don't work out between them, she would be free to seek out someone else as she chooses. And while you told us that Hiei didn't let his uncertainty show, and that he wondered if she would do as he told her, he was really being quite cruel to let her think he would end things. I have also wondered about his thoughts about taking Keiko in hand if Yusuke didn't step up. That's way beyond his little realm of authority. His agreement/relationship is with Kagome. He really has no say in what goes on in anyone else's relationship. He might be annoyed and irritated. He might want to chew them out. But it's not his place to discipline someone else's submissive. It's very obvious how much he cares about Kagome, so I am surprised he jeopardized things by making such an ultimatum. Especially since he made it public in front of company. What would he have done if she hadn't come crying to him? (That part made my stomach clench.) He knew very well about her insecurites, and yet he made that a sticking point in their future. Like I said, he was placing the blame on Keiko, but the truth was, he's the one who brought them in. Kagome said she wanted their relationship to go back to the way it was -- before Yusuke and Keiko became part of it? Because they are now, thanks to Hiei. Somehow, I don't think he thought about the consequences. Maybe he's the one who needs some training in how to be a good, faithful, trustworthy master. Whew! I can't believe your little PWP has me thinking about this so much!!
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From madmiko on March 27, 2007
Hmmm. Very interesting. It seems you're turning your "smut without plot" into a real story. I didn't comment after the 2nd chapter, because it left me with some very mixed feelings. But after Hiei accusing Kagome of violating their agreement in this chapter, I gotta say it. I'm not at all surprised that Keiko wasn't really getting it, because at the party, she wasn't really going for the BDSM lifestyle -- she was enjoying the group sex. Which really isn't part of BDSM -- at least not usually. I was disturbed by Kagome's thoughts that she might actually be jealous of Hiei spilling his seed on Keiko, but that she understood he was doing it for Yusuke. The reason why that is disturbing is because I think that was actually probably a case of HIM violating their agreement. He asked her to share herself with Yusuke and she did, FOR HIM. She wanted him to be proud of her. But for him, as the master, to voluntarily be with another woman would be an indication that Kagome wasn't enough for him -- in spite of the fact that she is an awesome submissive. It seems to me that she would feel she had failed him, and that he wanted someone else. As a master, in that instance, I think he failed her -- that's part of the trust between them, and he broke it then. Yusuke really wasn't getting it then, either, because he was asking Keiko how she'd like to have both of them. Again, that's not BDSM -- that's just group sex. And he was really making a big assumption there that Hiei would do it. I would hope he wouldn't, because seriously, he should be well-satisfied with Kagome. I was very interested in the brief glimpse we got into Kagome's background in the third chapter. And you referred to Hiei as her mate. If that's the case, then would he really make her leave? Apparently, she thought he would. Part of the appeal of the submissive role is the security it offers, so it was hard to see how very insecure she is even in this relationship. Somehow, somewhere, Hiei doesn't seem to be fulfilling her needs. (The broken trust issue?) Now, Yusuke finally got into it in the third chapter, and Keiko seems to be coming around. But that was a REALLY interesting part about her being attracted to Kagome. I really get the feeling that Kagome just loves Hiei, and while she might indulge him by being with others for his sake, I don't think she's really into it. So, the question becomes: what is Hiei going to do now? Because I think he's pushing the edge of the trust issue that's so central to a dominant/submissive relationship. I look forward to you diving a little deeper into their particular situation. And I am amazed at what this little story has become. You guys rock!
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From angelnomiko on March 26, 2007
wow .. im glad hiei helped yusuke train her ...please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From fetishYoukai on March 22, 2007
Oops, I rushed and reviewed before reading the second chapter ^^;;

Second chapter was equally, if not more awesome as the first. You have no idea how I have been dying for some decent Dom/sub fic and you have delivered my friend. The group action, the anal sex.... just kdjlkdjfdkjfdlk YES.
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From fetishYoukai on March 22, 2007
Oh my God, that was insanely hot!!! I have to admit never seeing the series Yu Yu Hakusho, but as a PWP smut fest this rocked my socks. It was a great S&M fic and the anal play was just icing on the cake. LOVED IT.
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From MIAMax on March 18, 2007
I cannot wait to see where you take this! I am so excited! It is wonderful! I want to see the chapters to come, if there are more, this would be a great fic to continue for a while. It has a lot of potential, but what else should I expect from two great authors!
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