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Reviews for Fleeced Innocence ("Face on the Milk Carton)

By : CottChick84
  • From biteswhenprovoked on March 29, 2007
    Love it. Im not going to lie it would be hard not to do what kagome did when she saw Inu Yashas ears. I have a question. if she was 13 when she was kidnapped and its 6 years later wouldnt that make her 19?
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  • From ANON - serasvictoria on March 27, 2007
    The last two chapters were great! But what surprised me was that Sesshy is already mated and has a pup on the way, so I'm wondering how they get together in the end. Wait, is this a Sesshy and Kagome fic? I can't remember if you said it was or not.
    Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest of it.
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  • From swtdrm01 on March 27, 2007
    That was great. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From JenLazar on March 27, 2007
    You know I've read in reviews of others that you were a writer and I was really curious to see if you were good. I'm enjoying this fic alot. Did I miss the point in how Kagome lost her memory? I know you said Ursurae changed her eyecolor so did she take Kagome's memories too. Just wondering why she accepted this so easily. What a disgusting, vile creature Naraku is to take kiddie porn with an unconscience child. Good fic you have going here. I'll be checking in later.
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  • From cocoke5 on March 27, 2007
    i love the story but is it a kagome and sess story and why is sess mate. but i will found out when you put up more of the story. good luck.
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on March 27, 2007
    I love it!!! Please update... right now... right this minute!!! Pretty please.
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  • From ANON - articfire69 on March 25, 2007
    love it, keep up the great work, and don't let those jerks get to to you. update soon
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  • From ANON - cari on March 24, 2007
    those 2 who said u plagiarized are retards! the face on the milk cartoon story had nothing about a girl being kidnapped by a MAN who took her for the sake of bearing his HEIR. maybe they should have actually tried reading the book or watching the lifetime movie. anyways, forget those losers, i cant wait to see how this one ends! :)
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  • From ANON - Mikonally on March 24, 2007
    Somebody actually accused you of plagarism?
    Good grief. That would make nearly every author in existence guilty, as well.
    There are plenty of books with the same "save the world" theme and it doesn't make the authors guilty of plagarism.
    Who ever was dumb enough to accuse you of plagarism over an idea deserves a good swift kick in the hind end so don't let them get to you.
    ^.^
    What I have read so far I liked and would like to read more if you continue writing it.


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  • From ANON - serasvictoria on March 24, 2007
    Awesome first chapter! I really can't wait to read the rest of it. I've read the book and have watched the movie, and I really don't think your story will be like them, but more of your own original story. So I don't think you're plagiarizing at all. Anyways, I look forward to reading the next chapter soon!
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  • From Qiana on March 24, 2007
    This is really good I also reviewed on Spark, don't pay attention to that person, there is always someone out there trying to cause a problem, anyway I love the story and I can't wait to you update again
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  • From ANON - Sweetbrook on March 24, 2007
    Hey, I love your idea of the story and I dont care what other people think. Keep writeing and I will keep reviewing. I also have a request will you make the story chapters longer and more decriptive please. I love the story its just that I think it could use a little improvement.Please dont get mad,but it is from a readers piont of view.
    Keep wrighting,
    Sweetbrook.
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  • From LADYWELLES on March 24, 2007
    i think its a good start plaese update soon
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  • From cocoke5 on March 24, 2007
    can not wait for more of the story good luck on the story. up date soon it sound real good story to. good luck
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