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Reviews for obbession of a tai-youki

By : deisakuitasaku
  • From TamaraBrown on March 11, 2012
    That was amazing
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  • From estelin on July 16, 2010
    this was great
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  • From UnicornEva on July 05, 2007
    This is a good story.Would you mine updating soon?Thank you.

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  • From marcia on April 16, 2007
    So many errors. My head hurts. Don't get discouraged you just need more practice. I'm always willing to help out anyone who wants it and don't be afraid to email me for it. You'll only get better with time and the willingness to take critisism. For this fic work on plot development, format, no problems with spelling thankfully...um lets see. Ch 4 was riddled with errors its needs a complete rewrite but I give you credit for posting it. I've been a writer for years and am still heistant to post on a site even if my muse hadn't kill its self years ago.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 31, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From KenzieCutie on March 29, 2007
    hey jessi i really like your stories if you could just make them a little longer they would so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up
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  • From cocoke5 on March 29, 2007
    very good and can not wait for the next chapter and i lvoe the wayt how sesshumaru got to kagome time. and then make love to her what is inyasha going to say. up date soon.
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  • From cocoke5 on March 25, 2007
    very good start and can not wait for the next chapter of the story y0u have a good start. up date soon .
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  • From Neptunee on March 24, 2007
    I like it but, I don't love it. I myself feel that it is missing something. But I really don't know what. I also think it could be longer with a little more detail. But that is just me, I couldn't write a story to save my life, but I sure as hell can come up with a plot. Just remember that its your story and I want to know what she will think in the next chapter. Please post soon.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 24, 2007
    WOW nice start! Cant wait for more!
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