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By : Kinyana
  • From ANON - Yvonne on April 01, 2007
    Vey sexy. Are you going to add an epilogue to patch things up? I think we deserve an epilogue explaining what happens next, like what's to be of Kouga's pack or something.
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  • From Youkai06 on March 31, 2007
    Chapter 2 -- WOW... That had me griped. Thanks
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  • From madmiko on March 31, 2007
    Nicely done. I liked the way Sango and the others let Kagome know exactly what was going on. She sure didn't seem very upset about Kouga, did she? Poor wolf prince. The lemon was very tastefully written. Funny that Inuyasha was teasing her about her innocence -- we're supposed to think he's had a lot of experience? Or that he was just confident in following his instincts? Will there be more? Kagome did wonder if Kikyou had returned -- gonna do something with that? It was very interesting that you had him come back to himself before they did anything.
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  • From ANON - Patricia_may on March 30, 2007
    I was kinda hoping it would be a DemonInu &Kag lemon, (don't really see that alot) but either way, that was pretty good for your first time. (that didn't sound right) O_o
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on March 30, 2007
    Awesome story! So is that all? I hope not!! Id love to see where this is going..
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  • From WTW on March 30, 2007
    Not bad for a lemony chapter. Good job. I'd suggest more details and a slower pace in area locations with that detail if you want the lemon to be really hot. Though you did an excelent job none the less of this one. Thank you for writing hun. Keep it up. ^^
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  • From madmiko on March 28, 2007
    Well, THAT was interesting. I liked the first chapter/prologue. And it figures that even after 5 months, inuyasha still hadn't done anything about his feelings for Kagome. Wonder how long that would have gone on if Kouga hadn't shown up? A fight to the death, huh? Oh, she's not going to like that. What possessed Inu to challenge Kouga for the right to IMPREGNATE her? Woo hoo! Guess Kag is in for a surprise in the next chapter -- can't wait!
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  • From 52895 on March 28, 2007
    Okay pretty boring could have been more action I mean come on Inuyasha was just dumb I rate you a 1.
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  • From ANON - lady everest on March 28, 2007
    Inuyasha-in-youkai-form and Kagome having sex would be interesting.

    Die Kouga! Bwahahahahahahahahaha!
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  • From amizongurl on March 27, 2007
    Good story, please finish it
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  • From WTW on March 27, 2007
    Interesting turn of events! Tsk tsk, that wolf prince sure could be pretty prideful. Should have known better. Please keep up with the story hun. Doing good.
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  • From ANON - tinkbaby on March 26, 2007
    i love this story keep up the good work.
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on March 26, 2007
    I want to know what happens next. Please, please, please update soon. I love this so far.
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  • From ANON - biteswhenprovoked on March 26, 2007
    Wow i really like this story. the summery caught my attention and im glad it did. i will continue to read this one
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  • From ANON - You don't need to know on March 26, 2007
    nice! kouga is dead!!!!!!!!! YEAH!
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