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By : razvanwink
  • From Mikka on April 25, 2007
    Greetings!

    I just wanted to congratulate you for your great work. I can see you thought about every detail for this story, including to keep the characters' personalities unchanged. I just think Sesshoumaru should be a little more concerned about Rin, but I'll wait to see how this develops, hehe.

    You have good writing skills. And you know when to change from the thoughts of one character to another, leaving the reader in expectation, wanting to know what's going to happen next. This is without doubt one of the best fanfics I've read so far. I'll be sure to drop in everyday to read the next chapter.

    Seriously, I'm trying my best not to write silly things in this review, like: "oh my god, i love this fic, please post more!!11" or "i wanna see lemon between Rin and Inuyasha!" or even... ok, nevermind.

    Thank you for sharing this with everyone! I'll keep an eye on your other works. :)
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  • From DAZ306 on April 25, 2007
    Man no!!! Ugh Sesshoumaru better hurry is ass up shit!!
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  • From mrskgoodman on April 24, 2007
    WOW! I just read like 3 chapters back to back and I love it. I cant say anything else other then WOW!
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  • From JLucPitard on April 24, 2007
    Considering how long he had to be out of character (due to the effects of the spell) it's good to see him back and insisting on being in charge again. Sad to think of their lovemaking being at Rin's expense, however. Great story and I love how you've taken such a crazy notion (the potion) and made it into an intricate plot feature rather than just a device.
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  • From Sinful on April 24, 2007
    O00OOO00 Sesshomaru is back......and I'm loving it. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - akasha on April 24, 2007
    fucking sweet! can't wait for the update... i've gotta find out what is going to happen with rin! well, that and i wanna read more hot smut featuring sesshomaru!!! yummy... ;}
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  • From ANON - kit on April 24, 2007
    this is the greastest sesshoumaru/kagome fic EVER ~thank you!! thank you for updating reguarly and not leaving us hanging. my face is still red, lol!
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on April 24, 2007
    Awwww how cute lol. That was hot and freaky in so many ways. I love Sess and Kag.. a wonderful pairing. Your doing great. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lissa (not signed in) on April 24, 2007
    Yay! Two whole chapters to read while laying here sick. Wow... They finally did it, and she admitted to being his. Hmmm... Can't wait to see what happens with Rin and Inu Yasha.

    Take care.
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  • From szaugg on April 24, 2007
    Enjoyed the chapter. Love sessh, as usual.

    I'm havin a little trouble with Rin and how she's acting, but I can't pinpoint it. I can see her being completely traunatized by the growing and the angst and upset over Sesshoumaru and the fact that she's still just a child, so I can see that causing her to be tricked. I guess maybe where I have the small problem is that her being tricked just doesn't quite mesh with her earlier confidence, and I don't see quite as much confusion evident in her portrayal, and I guess even though she's a child, I never see her as being that gullible. Having been beaten and treated like dirt for her childhood, seeing blood and violence with sessh.

    Although I guess deceit might still be new to her,hmmm

    Could just be me, of course, and I still like the writing and the plot and everything else!
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  • From ANON - Steffuls on April 24, 2007
    Bitch! That's it. Your so mean. Update bitch. I love your story. It's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.
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  • From ANON - Little Girlie on April 24, 2007
    Getting to the fun part! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Tussi on April 24, 2007
    good chapter!!
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  • From bluemoonvixen on April 23, 2007
    Great story, and great chapter! I would love to read more soon. ^.^ Crazy Kagome. o.O lol Anyway, update soon!
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  • From JLucPitard on April 23, 2007
    I want to scream "No, Rin!" and "Run, Kagome!" So I think I will. Good job, I like the twist that he regains himself and goes for it anyway. Poor Rin... No!
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