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By : LadyShinomori
  • From ANON - Laini on May 16, 2007
    HAHA,not being caught in a tux,nice lol. Love the chappie,even tho it was short...but hey better then nothin right? Kagome spending time w/ someone else?..and its NOT hiei? Gee i wonder who that could be?...*knowing wink* lol. Update soon,im really enjoying this fic. ^_^
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  • From LadyMinamino on May 16, 2007
    Damn girl! That last chapter was HOT!!!!!! How in the world did you come up with tickling while having ya know what? I have never heard of that. Dirty thoughts coming to mind. *grins uncontrollably* I was so happy to hear Kurama call Sango his girlfriend. It is nice to know that even the wildest beast can be tamed. And I just it when she decked the hell out of Yura. I laughed my ass off. I can't wait to see if you have her continue to work on her face. I would. What is going to happen since they aren't using any protection? You would think that Kurama would be smarter than that. About the only thing I can say now is UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Keep up the good work. And also since I wanted Kurama to get a good swift kick in the nuts and you gave it to him; it's good to see that it knocked some sense in him. Love ya girl.
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  • From Patty530 on May 16, 2007
    Oh no poor Kagome. I still love what your doing with the Songo and Kurama storyline. Its great. Keep it up.
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  • From Patty530 on May 16, 2007
    DAMN GIRL. That had me sweating it was HOT! This is the kind of story where you desperatly wait for the next chapter, but you never want the story to end.
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  • From ANON - Dana on May 16, 2007
    It's great, real good. Though I was kind of confused also hearing about Kanna but then not really if you think about it. The first look into Hiei's previous relationships was from his point of view, kind of. Let's be honest it is a male pov. So to him being with Kanna twice probably wasn't a serious relationship even if he was fucking her awhile. So makes you wonder if he sees his relationship with Kagome as serious as well. Then we got Kagome's pov, of course she'd see someone Hiei has been with twice as serious competition and as serious simply because she takes her relationship with Hiei serious. It's all how you look at things I guess but pisses me off cause really makes me think Hiei doesn't see his thing with Kagome as serious. Just like a damn male! And Kurama is worse, I just know he's going to fuck things up. Someone like that is bound to get cold feet when he has to seriously commit. Like I said it's a male thing, most are dogs! Can't wait to see the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    LOL! This story is wonderful. I checked out the reviews first to see if it was worth reading since I don't really care for AU. But this is a great story so far. Well, I agree with the one reviewer, I almost feel sorry for Botan, I think they do make protection for someone that large but it's hard to find. But the poor girl will be split in half, she's a virgin, I feel for her LOL! Something that big popping her cherry! Hope he knows how to be gentle and patient. Then again I do disagree with one point. Some guys you can't tell if they cum or not. Sometimes you can feel it sometimes you can't. And the running down the legs doesn't always happen. Never does with my husband, Don't get me wrong it's really wet but the dribbling down the legs isn't always a clue. Besides if she's never had sex before or only once before it'd wouldn't be known. Unless Kags is telling her some juicy tidbits. Ewww, cum down the thigh. Anyways, I can't wait to see how this ends and how you get them all together. Keep up the good work!
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  • From madmiko on May 16, 2007
    Well, the jealousy was a nice ploy to lead up to a great Sango/Kurama interlude. But, I thought Hiei hadn't had any SERIOUS relationships before, just a few girlfriends over the years, -- and now we find out he keeps going back to Kanna? That's a twist. He sure seemed to be unattached for a while, and this story has been going on for most of the school year, so he hasn't been with Kanna since last year at least, right? And if he finally dropped her because of her jealousy, what is he going to do about Kagome's jealousy? Or does he feel differently about that? Could a declaration of his feelings be coming up? And it was interesting that Kanna was thinking "everybody knows she's still pining for Inuyasha." What's up with that? Can't wait to see!! Loved Sango decking Yura! And how interesting that Kurama has his own little place. Nice. But, what is up with Sango being so naive? Even if she can't tell if he's "releasing" inside her, won't she find out later when it starts running down her legs? LOL!! At least SOMEONE is thinking about protection, because she and Kurama aren't using any, and neither are Kagome and Hiei. (And from the sound of it, Naraku won't be able to find any that fits -- LOL!!) So, I have to wonder if someone is going to turn up pregnant. Our major obstacle once they all realize they're in love and want to stay together, of course, is going to be money. But you've got the solution to that -- Naraku has plenty of his own, and Kagome and Sango can be discovered by an art dealer and make plenty of money to get a place, etc., etc. (Just looking down the road. LOL!!) Loving it all!
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  • From justme182007 on May 15, 2007
    You know i swear u read my mind, i was about to ask why was Kagome the only in the fic getting laid. 'Cause she got laid 4 times (b4 this chapter) and Sango got laid 1 and 1/4 (fingers only count as a 1/4) and Boton only got a 1/2 (blowjobs count as 1/2 if, ur the one giving but 3/4 if ur the one recieving) and then uou added this chappie so yay.. (review for chapter 13-19)..I was out if town, so i just decided to do 1 big review instead...update when u can!!!
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 15, 2007
    Whoa,nice chapter. God i would have punched their teeth in,both of them lol. Hm what other secrets will kurama reveal about himself? hehe. And what of Hiei,Kagome,and Yusuke? yikes..lol. Update soon,cant wait to read more of it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 15, 2007
    lmao Sango might be right about Botan needing funeral arrangements. If a guy came near me with something that big I might run for the hills lol! Course kags is gonna have to worry about the same problem if her and yusuke ever hook up. We'll mourn the loss of them both lol hot hot office scene. I wonder if karasu is gonna notice that they defiled his office. pervert would prolly get off on it lol
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 15, 2007
    Oh man, i hope that hiei does decide to go with that idea of in the school. I don't think he'd have too much trouble getting kags to go along with it either. Of course thats dependent on whether or not hiei finds out about her ogling yusuke's goods. I think i'd be tempted to look too lol and then some... great job!
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 15, 2007
    Damnnnnnn what a steamy chapter. Love the moaning competition they had going on there, I can just picture the girls discussing their "adventures" the next time they get a chance to talk. And whats gonna happen when Kurama see's Jin again? Now that he knows it was all a lie I bet he isn't going to be too thrilled when he runs into the bastard. Can't wait to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 15, 2007
    Gotta say I loved the fight scene in this one. Looks like Yusuke finally gave him the kick in the ass to do the right thing. Lets just hope it doesn't blow up in Sango's face. If it does our poor Toushin might end up getting hurt. Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 15, 2007
    Looks like Sango needs to be a bit more persistant in digging for information. Yusuke's just too damned good about redirecting the flow of the conversation. Personally I like his idea of her crushing Kurama dick but that's just me.. mwahahah Oh my, steamy lemon scene. I just love the way you write the two of them getting it on. Three cheers for the smut!
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 14, 2007
    Wow Kagome thinking of Yusuke like that..hmmmm,interesting indeed. The office scene w/ Hiei and Kag...lol what can i say? Very naughty lol. Loved the chap,update soon. ^_^
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