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By : LadyShinomori

From madmiko on May 12, 2007
Loved, loved, LOVED the fight between Yusuke and Kurama! That was great! And I liked the way she was outside in the parking lot there when Yusuke called her on Kurama's behalf. I still can't believe she forgave him so easily, but I guess we need to get into their relationship, right? LOL!! I really like it that Kagome hadn't told the others she had been with Hiei. Obviously, it had nothing to do with the bet. but I love it that they know now, AND that HE'S calling her, AND they've been together more than the two times. Yeeha! Prom? And none of the guys has actually asked them yet, huh? Just wondering -- is this story going to come to an abrupt end at the end of the school year? Because we're almost there and I don't want to see it end yet -- I'm enjoying it too much! A friendly competition coming up, huh? I'm glad it's going to be friendly. (Especially if it's Hiei and Yusuke competing for Kagome. Got to say, I hope they don't COMPETE for long -- I'd rather they reach an agreement. And I hope that Hiei's feelings for her are as strong as they seem and that he's not just going to NOT CARE if she's with someone else. It really does seem like Yusuke waited too late to get in the game. And I do so love Hiei and Kagome together. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them and US!!) I thought you did such a great job with Kurama's gift for Sango. The way Botan found it was so believable, and the way you wrote Botan and Kagome trying to get her to open it was so real, too. You've got the touch!
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From ANON - Laini on May 11, 2007
HOLY CRAP. I cant believe Yusuke did that! lol,that was genius haha. Im so glad they made up..hmmm i wonder what Kagome has to say now. Loved the update,Your doin an awesome job. Update soon. ^_^
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From KNK00232 on May 11, 2007
In over ten years of reading fanfic, this is the first time I have ever been compelled to write a review. Excellent work! I believe I am in the company of many others when I say I can't wait to read each chapter to see what you are going to throw at everyone and who you're throwing it at next. I particularly like your snippets on the next chapter. Sometimes they are straight forward and other times down right confusing. The snippet of Kurama learns a harsh truth, does he take Sango and in the process gets confronted with the fact that a good friend has lied for years or is it something completely new and different? Which leads me to some of the various items peppered throughout the story so far such as the comment about Kurama not having protection. Was it put in as a deminstration of how he wanted Sango so much he wasn't thinking at all, did the fox finish the deed and will it come back to haunt him later, or was it simply an act of evilness to drive us all insane with the thought of the possibilities never to be mentioned in the story again? I for one would happily fork out the money to read your work. Keep it up. I'm hard to entertain and your doing a fantastic job. Thank you.
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From Kya77 on May 11, 2007
Most excellent!! Great way to bring them back together. I look forward to what you have instore for Heie/Kagome/Yusuke and how they all three come together.
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From madmiko on May 11, 2007
Dang! Forgot to mention how much I'm loving the Sango/Yusuke friendship, and I'm dying to know what Kurama thought when he saw Yusuke put his hand on her knee. Makes me wonder if the fox is going to be confronting his friend soon. He has no right to, but it would make a helluva scene! Heh heh!
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From madmiko on May 11, 2007
Whew! Had to read that through twice. I've said it before and I'll say it again: there's just nothing better than a good, hot Hiei/Kagome scene. That was awesome! I loved your brief, but thorough description of his room -- I could just picture the narrow bed. And her nervousness and excitement at being there alone with him came through so clearly -- I swear, I felt like I was in high school again. You pegged it perfectly. I love the way you wrote him -- he came off so cocky and confident, yet he was thinking he would have to try to persuade her. I wished she had voiced her thought about wanting to see what he could give -- that would have floored him, but only for a minute. Heh heh! You've brought them along so beautifully as a couple -- still finding out things about each other, like his job. I DO wonder what he thought about the Hojo situation. And is that over, or will Hojo be back? Loved the Yusuke/Sango time. I wonder if Sango would encourage him if she knew he was talking about Kagome? (Or is he?) I was surprised he tried to smooth the Kurama situation over, and even more surprised he advised her to try to seduce him. I don't know if I commented on the way he left her flowers in her car, but she was SO right. It was like he was ashamed and didn't want anybody to know -- even if it was just a gesture of apology and not a romantic overture. Seriously, how many times is he going to keep making the same stupid mistakes? He kissed her, got his hand in her panties, called her and asked her out for a couple of weeks, and then has done NOTHING but show and tell everyone how she doesn't mean anything to him. I think at their age, her feelings for him would have finally turned to hatred. I can't believe she is contemplating going after him. And in the next chapter, Kurama is going to get a dose of his own medicine? Hmmm. Do you mean she's going to come at him hot and heavy? (Though I think the girls do that already, don't they?) Or is he going to see Sango with someone else? Oh, I HOPE SO! And I thought you had to have a pretty set plotline to keep it moving so steadily -- I love it when that's the case. Thanks again for the great Hiei/Kagome action -- that made my day! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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From ANON - Laini on May 10, 2007
Chapter was the shit. Ohhhhh i wonder what kind of medicine it is for Kurama? lol. Now im in suspense hehe. Hiei and Kagome are like rabbits lmao. Then again that isnt a bad thing either! :D I cant believe Sango didnt know Yusukes mystery girl is Kagome..or is it? Hmmm. Update soon,cant wait to read more. ^_^
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From ANON - Lady Minamino on May 10, 2007
Holy hell!!! This is one hell of a story. I can't believe that Sango almost died. I just wish that Inuyasha would have beat the *^#@ out of Kurama. It was in a way his fault. Inuyasha isn't so bad after all. And then for Kurama to bump pelvis' with two skanks in Sango's room is the last straw. Thanks for giving him a good kick in the nuts for me. I really enjoyed that part. Normally, I love Kurama so much but you have a way of making a person really hate him. And oh my God! The roses in the tail pipe was a classic. I was rolling with laughter on that one. I think Yusuke needs to get off his ass and make his move. I can't wait for you to update again. I want to see what happens next.
P.S. I knew Kagome would win the bet. She picked the best man for it.
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From Patty530 on May 10, 2007
I know I've told you how much I love this story before, but it keeps getting better. Keep it up.
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From ANON - Laini on May 09, 2007
Awww that was so sweet of Kurama....BUT...doesnt make up for what he did lol. Weeeeell time for Plan B fox! lol. U know i think Naraku is really starting to like Botan...or...hes really good at hiding it O.-. Loved the chappie,update soon! ^_^
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From ANON - white kitsune shiva on May 09, 2007
lol that shit was funny! luved ure chappies. keep it up.
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From madmiko on May 09, 2007
NICE one!! Absolutely loved Sango stuffing the flowers in his muffler!! Yay for her!! Hmm. You've got me wondering about Naraku. Is he still looking at Botan as a bet, or is that developing into something more? I liked it that Kurama came up and made him a bit nervous. AND, I LOVED it that Kurama was looking for Yusuke to possibly help him with Sango, and ... he's with Sango!! LOL!! I had pretty much forgotten you said this was going to be Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke pairing -- I was surprised that Yusuke would even consider sending Kagome a girft when he knows she and Hiei are an item. Are you still planning to go that way? I'm begging you not to rock the boat with Hiei and Kagome -- I have been loving the way they're workling out! But I assume that's what Yusuke is talking to Sango about, huh? I hope he talks to Hiei before he does anything. Of course, considering the way Hiei's relationship with Kagome has developed, and his thoughts about Kurama and how stupid he's been, I don't think he'd be too keen on sharing the girl he's become so close to. I'll be very interested to see what you do with all this. I've got to ask: since you always have teasers about the next chapter to come, are you writing from an outline? Did you have the whole story plotted out from the start? I am just so amazed that you've been able to update almost every day!! It takes me a week to get a chapter written, and THAT'S with me going from an outline with the whole story already plotted out. So, I think you're doing a fantastic job!! I've really been enjoying your take on the characters and the interesting situations you set up. Oh! And I forgot to mention how much I liked the mentions of Sango's artwork. I really thought that added to the story -- especially when Yusuke and Kurama were looking at her table. And I love it that Kurama went ahead and gave her the present -- can't wait to see what it is!! But it was great when she threw it at Inuyasha and told him to take it. (And I like the way you're keeping him in the story. Nice touch. It was even a little sad that he was a bit depressed when he saw Kagome with Hiei's gifts. I think it's awesome that you haven't felt the need to pair him off with someone else. Not everybody has somebody all the time, and he's needing to do a little growing up on his own. Great job!) I AM wondering why Kagome and Botan didn't tell Sango about Kurama, though. If your best friend caught the guy you like going at it with some skanks in YOUR room, wouldn't you want to know? And wouldn't they warn you so you wouldn't get hurt by such a jerk? I would think they would try to steer her away from him. I am SO looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks so much for sharing this story with us!
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From Patty530 on May 09, 2007
LOVED IT! Keep up the good work. I check every day to see if you've updated, love this story. Please keep up the great work
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From Patty530 on May 08, 2007
Its a great chapter. I've already told you how much i'm enjoying the story. I'm glad you finally updated! I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Laini on May 08, 2007
Awesome update. Damn Kagomes dad is such an ass -.- lol. Loved it,update soon. ^_^
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